the way jedi academy should be
i have been thinking about this for a long time and, even though jedi academy is a cool game, it has a REALLY crappy story line.
so i decided to try and rewrite the story, which isn't completey the same
also, this is my first attempt at writing any thing about star wars
i have only written part but since it is kind of long for posts i will post it in short parts.
Star Wars
JEDI ACADEMY
EPISODE I
It is a time of rest in the New Republic, 14ABY.
The Empire dead for over a decade, with not much
activity for at least 5 years, the New Republic is starting
to worry. Jedi Master and Founder of the Jedi Academy on Yavin 4,
Luke Skywalker is starting to sense a great evil coming. Luckily, a new
transport of Jedi students from Courscant is headed to the Yavin system.
Jaden Korr, a male from Courscant, Rosh Penin, a Corellian male, and Katar Zydon, a Kel Dor male, are three Jedi prodigies on the ship. What they don’t know, is that a powerful sith cult is about to change their lives….
plz reply and tell me wat i need to fix, or if i should just ditch the story