My fanfic

here's the links to a fanfic i've been working on It's called Sparrabeth Rewrites...basically all I'm doing is taking scence from some romance novels and turning them into Sparrabeth stories......

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3356896/1/ http://movies.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600090676
also here's a picture for the story

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Where?Where?Where?Where?🤪
this is what impatience does to people.....
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3g7W55Hc9jE
lol

Sounds interesting. I'll have to go peek later. 😄

ive read the first link so far....looks like jack is up 2 somthin naughty lol😉

Originally posted by SarahB
ive read the first link so far....looks like jack is up 2 somthin naughty lol😉

oh kk thnx

Okay, I read it, and although I liked it and it's very poetic and passionate, I had just a couple suggestions.

You mention something specific having "sprang." Uh, I don't know if you have experience in this....field or not, but I have and "sprang" gives the image that it's like a little spring, which it's not. I would just use a different word there.

I'm curious to see where this story goes. Is it important that she was asleep through most of it? Just be careful that this doesn't turn into a story about rape.

hey, charrmgirl, where did you get your sig? I really like that. Beautiful and for some reason it reminds me of Disney's Beauty and the Beast.

hmmm, i think ol virgin ears here will stay out of this one, hahaha. wouldn't want to spoil any surprises for myself
but i'm sure its great charmgirl! 🙂

Curiousity got the better of me, lol. That was very very very good, and I love how you captured the characters. It was perfect, are there any more Sparrabeth stories coming?