Nothing to do but Nothing

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Nothing to do but Nothing

It's a pretty dysfunctional verse really. Feedback welcome.

Nothing to do But Nothing

Falling in love with deja vu,
Time is for change,
Nothing to do but nothing again,
Apathy and allusions,
Dancing time leaving everything behind,
Cannot be drawn upon and cannot be bought

I like the imagery and the alliteration

Re: Nothing to do but Nothing

Originally posted by chillmeistergen
It's a pretty dysfunctional verse really. Feedback welcome.

Nothing to do But Nothing

Falling in love with deja vu,
Time is for change,
Nothing to do but nothing again,
Apathy and allusions,
Dancing time leaving everything behind,
Cannot be drawn upon and cannot be bought

I love the title of this Poem, Nothing to do But Nothing. i always think the first thing to a good peom is a good title. Nice poem.