Make Your Own Thunderbolts

Third Arc?...

First stage.

We see the Shield Helicraf drifting through the sky,and on the bridge we see Stark talking to a shady man about "the project".Suddenly a blast smashes through the ship.Stark springs into action,becoming IM and summoning the Mighty Avengers.As the smoke clears,they see a towering figure,with the face of Amazo,the Armour of an Imperiex probe and The Mohawk of an Omac.They attempt to defeat it,however it appears to have an Imperiex probes base abilities,an Omacs adaptive powers and Amazo power absorbtion.the beast proceeds to chump the MA's slamming Ares through the hull of the ship,sending him on a 20,000ft drop to the earth,throwing Black Widow in a turbine,and using Sentries own power to beat him to a bloddy pulp.As he rounds upon Iron Man and Wonder Man,We hear SHAZAM!!! and a lightning bolt and a blast of Hellfire strike the monster,knocking it off the ship.Wonder man asks "What the hell was that?" Iron man replies "The big guns".

Etrigan and Ba Go after the creature whilst the rest ot the Thunderbolts land on the ship.Etrigan tackles the beats and tries to open a portal to hell,however the creature hits him in the face with it's eye beams,it then eviscerates him and throws him down with Ares.BA flies down and Smashes it in the face,going all out on it until Deathstroke tells him they'lll handle it and he should get Etrigan.A grenade lands infront of it's face and explodes,Unfazed the creature looks up to see Red Hood waving at him.The creature roars and heads towards him until Red Hood says "They say men with big guns are compensating for something,which is why you should be looking at those guys" We then see Deadshot and Bullseye with two huge cannons,they both fire and score a direct hit.The creature slams into the hull and slowly gets up,as a voice from a microphone in its ear tells it to take the package and go.With a roar it zooms towards Ironman and snatches him,teleporting away as Deadshot abd Bullseye open fire. "They got Stark" Wonderman would shout, Deadshot would say,"that thing seems to be a pure tech theif,if it can get his armour,then it could control every bit of tech on the planet!" Red Hood would slap him on the back of the head and say "Think bigger mook.Stark is the only person on earth who knows every heroes identity.If he breaks,we all do"

Continue 🙂

By the way... if anyone else has a good story in mind, please, offer it 😄

Jack Staff
Electro
Wrecker
Emplate
Captain Americana
Becky Burdock

Why ?

Wrecker : He wants to go straight , fed up of getting his ass handed to him every time he takes on a hero (which he honestly doesn't understand ? He beat on Thor ! Thor for crying out loud !!!) and views the Thunderbolts as a chance to get a little fame out of it.

Electro : His powers have gone haywire , apparently 'limitless' seems to be the word for him now , and boy is he ever getting scared. One minute he's fine ,the next he's frying every electrical appliance in the room. He's changing as well , into some kind of.....electricity...thing ? He needs help and he knows the government can do it (what with all the super-brain types working for them and all).

Jack Staff : British Superhero and all around nice chap , has no idea how he arrived in Marvel ( he's an Image character) and because of his Superpowers , lack of registration and a LARGE case of misinformation he's been lumped in with 'Thunderbolts B'. His energy shifting powers allow him to (temporarily) drain/move Electro's overabundance of power. Likes David Bowie and makes references to obscure british characters ( V , General Jumbo ,Ect ).

Becky Burdock : Tangled up (once more) in another mess with Jack Flag, Miss Burdock ( The self proclaimed 'Vampire Reporter' ) is now something of a sidekick to him ( The heavy 'Anti Vampire' slate that the mean streets of NY have also helped in her little decision) . Finds herself often wishing to go home and discovering that certain members of Marvels vampire community LIKE having a journalist dedicated to them. A possible love interest to Wrecker who (apparently) 'likes em gangly and cynical'.

Captain Americana : After shooting one-too-many 'commies' the local Law enforcement got fed up of throwing him in and out of Jail ( Pure patriotism somehow enabling him escape each time). Anyone who disagrees with his ideals and beliefs is 'a dirty pinko commie' and will be shot (though lately he's been getting restrained by Becky , vampire strength dealing with 'patriot power ! ' ). A pure comedy character , his ideals themselves are out-of-date and he occasionally believes it's still the 1960's.

Emplate : A very nasty piece of work , somehow still powered after M-day the government is using him as a 'Mutant tracker'. He's there as a PR ploy a sort of 'ugly affirmative action' thing. He gets paid in the bones of mutants (depowered or not , they still taste great !).

What do you think ?

That sounds great! What would your first arc be like/ how would they all end up teamed together 🙂

Hmmm.

Well I was thinking about it a bit yesterday and heres what I could come up with.

Each arc would be around 2-4 issues long (I can admit as writer I have a short attention-on-story-span) . The first arc would be Entitled 'Why I hate origins'.

We'd start in a diner, a'la 'Resevoir Dogs' you dont see who's who by the means of waitresses and large piles of food blocking their faces. We then go onto a few panels of wrecker re-telling a warped version of his origin (getting interrupted every so often when somebody poitns out a in-accuracy) finally getting tired of speaking BS he say's " Look , I went bad , got powers and ran with a bunch of mooks. End of story".

The waitress is nervous , she drops a few pancakes on the only member whose face is shown. He's a Brazilian looking gentlemen in a suit though he seems quite angry at having said pancakes dropped on him.

" Oh, I'm so so sory mr...."

"M. Plateworthy , now get the hell out of here before I-"

He is silenced by the large arm of Wrecker , who places said limb in front of 'M Plateworthy' to stop anything rash happening. He quietens down though but narrows his eyes at the waitress.

they then continue to tell each others origins , Jack Flags is tied in with Beckies (whom continues to try and explain how she got 'tied up with this weirdness'😉. Throughout this entire issue Captain Americana has been silent , looking at the menu. After everyone (save) for 'M plateworthy' has given their origins he finally declares " Wheres the damn freedom fries ! "

Becky and Electro back away slightly , a little disturbed at the Captain.

"Though there is one thing that links us all together" mutters Wrecker

"Yeah , we all got caught by- begins Electro before suddenly....

BOOM

"SHIELD"

Fifty or so agents pour in through the front , all in cape killer armour. The waitress drops her current order on the floor and backs away eyes wide in fright,

"I KNEW IT ! I knew that ***** was an unregistered , hell I even think she's a mutie ...screw this !" . M. Plateworthy tears off his watch , the holographic simulator gone he is returned to his true form of......Emplate. Whom then bulks up slightly and screams through all three of his mouths in a beastial manner.

Wrecker looks at Jack staff whom simply shrugs in return. They both stand up and pull their weapons out from concealed pouches (Or under tables ect) . Electro looks dissatisfied and says's something along the lines of "these days I never get to finish a meal"

End of first Issue

That's really stinking awesome.... pardon my ignorance... but who is Emplate? And where did Captain Americana come from?

Originally posted by Rick/Genis
That's really stinking awesome.... pardon my ignorance... but who is Emplate? And where did Captain Americana come from?

Emplate is a mutant from X-men. His powers are pretty vampire like but he's good at stealth. Captain Americana (lol) is a cheesy Howard the Duck character whom (for some reason ) I've always liked.

Thunderbolts B ( Or Thunderbolts : Cracked) would be a funny/action comic like Deadpool and Cable but have some serious feats in it. Including...

Wrecker creating a hurricane through twirling his crowbar (he does this through some SERIOUS Thor envy , )

Electro draining all of Americas power for five minutes before having it spread back across the country by Jack Flag (who nearly dies because of the sheer concentration it takes to spread said energy back)

Becky inadvertently getting better pictures of Spiderman (or petter parker now) then Peter ever did. Jameson even comments on them.

Okay. Just for your information, you keep referring to Jack Staff as Jack Flagg.

Originally posted by Mobra
Okay. Just for your information, you keep referring to Jack Staff as Jack Flagg.

Shite, your right. Ahh well it must be a subconscious thing. The real thunderbolts shouldn't have crippled him 😖ad:

Originally posted by NiñoAraña
of course..it's just a fan fic basiclly ✅

have some imagination ✅

Originally posted by Mobra
Wouldn't it take more imagination to come up with ideas that work in the universes they're intended? Coloring the sky green isn't imagination when you're in High School art class, it's special ed material.

I didn't ***** at them or anything, I was just wondering if the whole DC/Marvel difference mattered at all to anyone. Especially since putting DC characters in JUST the Marvel villains group seems selfish, I mean. . .Suicide Squad anyone? So in short, I don't really care, it's their shit not mine, I just think they might want to get their shit in order.

By your offer, I have been thinking about this, but I haven't solidified a group yet.

Originally posted by Mobra
I didn't ***** at them or anything, I was just wondering if the whole DC/Marvel difference mattered at all to anyone. Especially since putting DC characters in JUST the Marvel villains group seems selfish, I mean. . .Suicide Squad anyone? So in short, I don't really care, it's their shit not mine, I just think they might want to get their shit in order.

By your offer, I have been thinking about this, but I haven't solidified a group yet.

That's why my other dimensional characters are IN the Thunderbolts. Thye just popped out of nowhere with no records, no passport, no nothing. Having powers makes things even worse....

well... anyone else got any Thunderbolts storylines? And Grey Fox... what about the second issue?

Originally posted by Rick/Genis
well... anyone else got any Thunderbolts storylines? And Grey Fox... what about the second issue?

Give me a few day's

cool daddio... anyone else have idea's?

Greeeeeeeeeeeeeeey fooooooooox (or anyone else).

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaand Bump.

lovely idea

I will partake in this