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Which one do you like?

Red one.

The first one...though nix "the ultimate being." The name and graphics already suggest mystery and power. Spelling it out for me diminishes the grandeur; I don't have to involve my imagination as much.

By name do you mean Qezel's name. Also the whole power thing that's what i was going for. At the same time being simple.
here's another:

Originally posted by The Prophecy
By name do you mean Qezel's name.

Also the whole power thing that's what i was going for.

Btw (just out of curiosity), where would you place Qezel in the Power Tier System? (KMC Comic Book Tiers thread)

Originally posted by Mindship
Yes.

This is the way I see it, for what it's worth:
Great stories pull the reader in, they make the reader part of the whole story dynamic (Hitchcock was a master of this with his movies). By spelling it out for me that Qezel is "the ultimate being," you're minimizing the need for me to be involved. Let me take in the fire, the colors, what these suggest to my imagination.

Btw (just out of curiosity), where would you place Qezel in the Power Tier System? (KMC Comic Book Tiers thread)

ok I see, Yeah it was really hard to come up with that name. I wanted it to look and sound cool. But where is this thread what is it for and what is the Power tier System? Also do you have any other suggestions,and where to just look at the pictures above would be interested in reading the comics. about Qezel?

what about this?

Oh never mind I found it.

at his mid highest he is:
Sub-Skyfather (Transcendent) at his high is is Greater than God.
However he doesnt start off this powerful it takes him many many years. But he doesn't know he true potenial.

He start off as a low meta-human and works his way up the scale.

My version of Qezel is high-herald at his peak, and Mid-metahuman at his low/usual.

speaking of your Qezel did you come up with a nick name for him? I just dont want people to get confused. Also how it comoing along?

hello?

Originally posted by The Prophecy
speaking of your Qezel did you come up with a nick name for him? I just dont want people to get confused. Also how it comoing along?

your Qezel

Originally posted by The Prophecy
your Qezel

I didn't decide not to use yours. I decided to make them two different beings remember?

Originally posted by The Prophecy
what about this?

That logo is cool.

Is this supposed to be a logo? The second and fourth (from the original post) are the best two. You should ditch the back ground fire though, you want to keep things simply and the fire is pretty tacky.

Inverse the colours on the fourth one and lose the fire... I think that would look pretty sweet.

Inverse the colours on the fourth one and lose the fire... I think that would look pretty sweet.

You mean just black and white.

That logo is cool.

Thank you 🙂

Originally posted by Mindship
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Thanks

Originally posted by The Prophecy
You mean just black and white.

Yeah but a black logo on a white background.