Originally posted by Jaeh_JediPirate
Will climbed up to the deck. He couldn't sleep either. He saw Jack and Liz having their little 'talk'. He noticed the proximity between Jack and Liz. He winced; he just noticed his heart is pounding so fast. He could hear the beat of his heart in his ears. He observed the two.Liz leaned over and closed her eyes. She almost kissed Jack, and jerked back when she realized what she was doing. "Jack! I-I- I can't."
"Why not love?"
"It doesn't feel right." Liz whispered.
Will released the breathe he didn't realize he was holding when Liz pushed Jack away. He continued to observe from afar.
"Sacrifice love." Jack said, walking around her. Liz stood frozen, as if she was cornered by an impossible obstacle. "You need to sacrifice something if you want to get what you want."
"It's not that easy..." Liz murmured.
"It's never easy love...." Jack stepped an inch closer. He stopped in front of her. "Do you really know what you want?"
Liz stared out into nothing. "I don't know what I want anymore."
"Then it's time you find out."
to be continued..... 😉
Yea its really good! Please keep going!!!!!! oh and heres a bit more of what i wrote aslo the mother of sarah is dead and i guess her name is ahh let me think hmm how about Christine yea her name will be christine and heres a bit of the story.
It was another day after school, and Sarah was happy because today was the best day of her life. She got all A's on her report card and to her it was a miricle. When she got home she called out:
Sarah: Mom, dad, I'm home!!!!!
But she didnt get an answer. she wondered around the room and found nothing. She went up stairs to her parents room. She still didnt see them, but then something shiny lead her up to her parents desk, she looked and found a heart shaped blue dimond locket and she picked it up its was very light and heavy at the same time. she opened the locket and there inside the locket were two people. One a man and the other a woman on each side of the locket. The woman was very beautiful and the man looked very handsome. And then she turned around still iwth the locket in her hand and there were the king a nd queen. They looked at Sarah and they knew that it was time to tell her.
King: I knew this moment would come someday.
Queen: we might as well tell you.
Sarah: Tell me what?
King: Your life of course. Your a........
Sarah: Im a what? Father your scaring me.
Queen: What hes trying to say sweetie is that...were not your parents and your a......daughter of a pirate.
Sarah: Im a what??????????????? That makes me aaaaa.......aaaa....a pirate! Why didnt you tell me this? Why? WHY???
King: we were afraid that you woundent understand and you would think that your a freak.
Queen: that locket.....its your parents....its yours...take it.
Sarah then looked at the locket and she started to cry.
Sarah: Are they......alive?
King: Your father is......but we dont know about your mother.
Sarah started top cry even more and she ran out of the kings and queens room and didnt lookback.
Sarah whispers to her self: I'm a pirate. I cant beleive im a pirate.
Sarah couldnet sleep all night and she decided to open the locket and then she noticed something. There was a button on the bottom of the locket aand she pushed it....and there was music. Sweet hearing music it sounded as if the sea was calling to her. And she decided to leave the music on every time she opened the locket.
Sarah: Its now mine to keep and i will always where it.
suddenly there was a knock on the door. it startled her but she decided to see what it was. And when she opened the door there stood a woman looking down at her and she said to Sarah:
Christine: Hello, my daughter.
And Sarah began to scream. Christine then put her hand on top of Sarahs moth and came into the room.
Christine: Dont be frightened my daughter. Im not going to hurt you....i would never hurt you...not even try.
sarah then stopped screaming and she started to cry.
Sarah: Why have you come? I dont even know you. Are you a ghost? Why do you say your my mother?
Christine: Im am your mother look inside the locket and you will see that im there. That was my locket too but it was for you to keep...forever. And im sadly to say I am a ghost....i died when you wree born and your father decided to take you to an oraphange and when he did he saw the king and queen. He said take my daughter heres some money...and heres a locket for her.
Sarah: But why have you come? I understand everything but why have you come to me?
Christine: Because I have to come to warn you that the locket you are whereing has a dimond and thatJolly Roger is coming for you....to kill you.....to do what ever he can to get the dimond.
Sarah: Why dose he want it?
Christine: Its the dimond of the sea. Its the color of the sea and if he ever gets that dimond...the world will be destrode.......and he will have all power to comande everything in this world.
Sarah: Oh my! I must always keep this safe then.
Christine: Hes coming. Leave now! Before its too late hes here!
Sarah: Mother....NO! Dont leave me! Mother I dont know where to go!
Christine: Folow your heart!
And she was gone. Vanished in thin air. Suddenly Sarah heard a gun shot and she looked out and saw blood she saw the king and queen dead on the ground and she closed the door. and went to her window and quickly made an escape and she ran. she ran as fast as she could and didnt look back. She didnt know where she was going to go but she did set a plan she was going to the docks for a ride to somewhere.
I hope you like it! But yea im not finshed yet.
Originally posted by Jaeh_JediPirate
Will climbed up to the deck. He couldn't sleep either. He saw Jack and Liz having their little 'talk'. He noticed the proximity between Jack and Liz. He winced; he just noticed his heart is pounding so fast. He could hear the beat of his heart in his ears. He observed the two.Liz leaned over and closed her eyes. She almost kissed Jack, and jerked back when she realized what she was doing. "Jack! I-I- I can't."
"Why not love?"
"It doesn't feel right." Liz whispered.
Will released the breathe he didn't realize he was holding when Liz pushed Jack away. He continued to observe from afar.
"Sacrifice love." Jack said, walking around her. Liz stood frozen, as if she was cornered by an impossible obstacle. "You need to sacrifice something if you want to get what you want."
"It's not that easy..." Liz murmured.
"It's never easy love...." Jack stepped an inch closer. He stopped in front of her. "Do you really know what you want?"
Liz stared out into nothing. "I don't know what I want anymore."
"Then it's time you find out."
to be continued..... 😉
Liz backed away a bit. Jack looked at her curiously. He stepped closer. "What are you afraid of?" Liz backed away a bit again, and bumped into the rail. She was cornered. "What are you afraid of... Elizabeth?" Jack whispered into her ear.
"I don't want to choose." Liz said, closing her eyes.
"You have to, sooner or later." Jack whispered back. He turned around, and walked back into the cabin.
Liz stayed there frozen.
Will watched everything. His arms turned into jelly. Wha-what were they talking about? He asked himself. He couldn't hear it, and it frustrated him. He wanted to ask Liz what they were talking about so badly, but he knew it was between her and Jack only. Will just climbed back down.
Liz stood where Jack left her. Choose? She asked herself.
to be continued?... lol.
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thanks for reading btw guys.. 😄
MORE MORE PLEASE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And heres somemore of my story i guess:
Sarah was fast asleep on the dock, she dreamed of her mother and she never wanted to wake up, but something hit her on the head.
Sarah: Ow!!!!!!! What? Who goes there?
And the light beamed on her and it hurt her eyes. But as she woke up she saw some people looking at her with a strange look in there eyes.
Pete: Hello dare, are you looking for a ship? Or a you just dare waiting for somebody?
Sarah: Umm, I guess I'm looking for a ship and waiting for somebody actally I dont know why im here.
Pete: Well I'm loading up for a ship on duh Black Pearl...want a ride?
arah thought for a moment that this would be a great idea, she would be safe she could be free to the open sea and she loves the sea. To her it would be a lifetime option, to ride the waves on a ship and live her life as a pirate.
Sarah: Are you a sailor or a pirate? I know, but im curious.
pete: Hmmmm.
He thought for a moment and decided to tell her.
pete: Dont tell anyone.......i am a pirate and pirates arent alowed at the parts.......the captain needs a crew....and he sent me out to help find a crew so are you to be on duh crew or not???
Sarah: Why are you asking me to be onm the crew?
Pete: Because............
Suddenly someone riding on a horse with a cloth comes running out of the woods saying:
Person: Get that dimond!!!!!
Pete: Get on duh ship....NOW!!!!
Sarah then runs onto the ship.
Sarah: Get on! Before its too late!!!!!!!!
But it was too late the Black Pearl was released and Pete was left behind.
Sarah: NO!!!!!!!!!!!
And Sarah began to cry with sadness she didnt want that man to die and she relized that she had to stay on board and she had no friends on board so she didnt know anybody and didnt have anybody to talk to. Sarah then came apon a man and asked him:
Sarah: Excuse me sir.....
Mr. Gibbs: Aye mate? And call me Gibbs. Uhh I havent seen you before are ye a new mate on the Black Pearl???
Sarah: Yes sir..i mean Gibbs. MY name is Sarah.
Mr. Gibbs: Aye well welcome aboard Sarah and you can be my helper on the black pearl. Oh I'm the captains 1st mate by the way.
sarah: Aye so I guess I will help you then Im 13 by the way.
Mr.Gibbs: Aye well Ill show ye around and tell you what to do.
And so Sarah and Mr.Gibbs worked together for phew days. It was the 3rd day when Sarah helped Mr.Gibbs and on that day everything went wrong.
Sarah: Oh dear! Now i have to clean that up erg! Oh no!!!
Sarah then axidenly spilt some oil on the captain.
Sarah: Oh I'm sorry sir...i wasent paying attention...please forgive me!
Jack Sparrow: And may I ask who are you?
Mr. Gibbs: Ahh that'd be my helper Jack...please forgive her she didnt mean to....
jack sparrow:Mr. Gibbs i forgive her now stand up mate.
Sarah stands up to the captain and when jack saw her face he knew who she was and he gave her a look and said to himself in a whisper:
Jack sparrow: No.....you cant be.......
Mr. Gibbs: What? Is there something wrong captain? captain???
jack then steped back and turned around and went back to his cabin.
It was later that evening and Jack sent Gibbs to bringSarah to his quarters.
Mr. Gibbs: the captain will be seeing you now sarah.
sarah: Aye I will come.
Sarah went into the captain's head quarters and knocked.
Jack sparrow: come in Sarah.
sarah then went in.
Sarah: How do you know my name I didnt tell you it.
And jack came to sarrah and hugged her and started to cry.
Jack Sparrow: I thought I would never see you again after I sent you to the king. And your here...with me...in my cabin...oh you look soo much like your mother...and your all i have now....my daughter.
Sarah: F..father?
Jack sparrow: yes.
Sarah and jack began to cry together. they now have each other and now they can unite together back as a family.
Sarah: I thoughtr I would never meet you and now i have. Oh father I have so much to tell you about my life when I was in england.
Jack sparrow: Im sure you do.
Sarah then told her father about everything and wouldent stop talking until she was finished. And when she was finished jack saw someting on her that caught his eye.
Jack sparrow: That...that locket...it used to be your mothers I gave it to her...for her birthday.
Sarah: Oh father..I met mother..I saw her..she was a ghost..she came to me.
Jack then hugged Sarah and told her:
Jack sparrow: I will never let anything happen to you...i promice.
I really liked the last parts of it i hope yall liked it.
Heres a bit more of my story!! the setting is with Elizabeth and her son Will the 3rd i wiill use will3 for will the 3rd.
Will3: Mother can i go on the FD with father...please...i really want to be with him.
Elizabeth: I know son...but your father can only come every 10 years and your going to have to wait 7 more..im sorry son.
Will3: Why dosent father come? Dose he not love us???? I dont understand! Dose he not love me nor you?
And Will3 started to cry.
Elizabeth: Oh Son...your father loves us terribly..and he wouldent want anything to happen to us..i promice and next when your father comes you or you and me will be with your father and we will be a family again..i promice son! I promice!
Will3: yes mother..i guess.
And will3 goes to his room and dosent eat dinner.
Will3: I still dont understand.....mother didnt explain. Thats it...I have had it with my father....I'm leaving tommorow to exlpore and to find a ship and I'm going to find my father!
And Will3 packed his bags and decided that he wanted to leave now not tommorow.
Will3: Oh wheres a ship i can take?
And he looks onto the horizon and sees a ship with Black ripped sails and to him he liked it it was just the one he was hoping for and so he made a raft and set out for open sea to steal the ship.
Will3: Oh so much bloody water! Oh well no matter I willg et that ship no matter how I mean its just right there hmmm yes me kill all the crew thats on that ship and claim it as my own! Hahahaha!
Setting: On the Black Pearl
Sarah: Oh mr.gibbs....look out onto the horizon...its so beautiful! Dont you think?
And sarah then spreads her arms out as the rushing sea wind brushes her hair.
Mr. Gibbs: Oh aye.....it is very beautiful....yes indeed it is very beautiful.
Sarah: Hmmm...
And she closes her eyes and dreams about her mother and she dosent notice that she touched her locket and the song came on and then she sang with it. She beleived that she was right by her side with her mother and that her father was there too. Her voice was carried by the wind and her voice was very beautiful....she sang as if she was the god of song and she didnt know this but she was the god of song. As her voice carried with the wind.....Will3 heard her...he was almost to the ship now.
Will3: What is that beautiful noise? That beautiful song..that beautiful sweet voice?
And her voice lead him off his subject of why he was out there.
Sarah then stopped because the locket stopped and she looked out into the horizon.....and saw a boy in a boat listening and then his eyes met hers and hers met his...then she smiled and he smiled back and she then she relized that Mr. Gibbs yelled out:
Mr Gibbs: Man over board! Captain what do we do? Hes out on a boat near the ship?
Then Sarah barged in.
Sarah: Well we welcome him aboard...of course...right father?
Mr. Gibbs: father?? Wait whats this all about....captain?
jack psarrow: shes my daughter....and i love her with all my heart and yes we will bring the boy over board!
Mr.Gibbs: Captain??? What?? But captain its not that all easy! And its not like you.....
Jack sparrow: We bring the the boy aboard..now mr. gibbs!
Mr.Gibbs: yes captain...Bring the boy aboard!!!!
And the crew brought the boy aboard. sarah then rushes over to the boy.
Sarah: What be ye name? I'm sarah.
Will3 then began to blush but he told her his name.
Will3: Im Will nice to meet you miss Sarah.
Jack Sparrow said in a whisper: Will....that name.....it sounds so familyer. Oy boy..you look some what familyer too..have i threatned you before??
Sarah: father???!!! I'm soo sorry Will he didnt mean it.
Will3: Its ok...Sarah.
And he smiles at her and Sarah begins to blush. Jack then began to notice this and he says:
Jack Sparrow: Uhh There will be no knowing here what so ever and now sarah must leave uhh you can stay out here Will..but Sarah must eat lunch now.....good bye will.
Will3: Umm alright uhh....
Sarah: Jack sparrow you can call him Jack though.
Jack Sparrow: that captain jack sparrow to you will. now we must leave you from here...good day.
Will3 good day then Captain jack sparrow.
Sarah: Good day Will.
And Sarah smiles back at him and turns away.
Will3: Good day....Sarah.
I hope yall like it..cause i love it! well so far!
Originally posted by Jaeh_JediPirate
Liz backed away a bit. Jack looked at her curiously. He stepped closer. "What are you afraid of?" Liz backed away a bit again, and bumped into the rail. She was cornered. "What are you afraid of... Elizabeth?" Jack whispered into her ear."I don't want to choose." Liz said, closing her eyes.
"You have to, sooner or later." Jack whispered back. He turned around, and walked back into the cabin.
Liz stayed there frozen.
Will watched everything. His arms turned into jelly. Wha-what were they talking about? He asked himself. He couldn't hear it, and it frustrated him. He wanted to ask Liz what they were talking about so badly, but he knew it was between her and Jack only. Will just climbed back down.
Liz stood where Jack left her. Choose? She asked herself.
to be continued?... lol.
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thanks for reading btw guys.. 😄
Liz stared out the sea. "I can't choose! I'm not ready!" She told herself. She went back to those days... when everything was carefree... nothing to worry about...
Only Norrington.. then Will...
And Jack. Her kiss with Jack.
That jolted her awake from her daydreams.
Jack.
She wants Jack.
to be continued.. 😄
Originally posted by Jaeh_JediPirate
Liz stared out the sea. "I can't choose! I'm not ready!" She told herself. She went back to those days... when everything was carefree... nothing to worry about...Only Norrington.. then Will...
And Jack. Her kiss with Jack.That jolted her awake from her daydreams.
Jack.
She wants Jack.
to be continued.. 😄
From this day onwards...I HATE CLIFFHANGERS
LOL HOW can you do this to us!!! more more MOREEEE
lol the SUSPENSE is KILLING me!!! 😂
w0w, everyone is soo GOOD at this!!! you guys ROCK!!! 😱 😱 😄 😛