my version of poetry!!!!!!!

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my version of poetry!!!!!!!

(nigga we be riding down 65 ...8,9,5 love the westide...out ma window with ma left elbow hand on my wheel sitting out low)

Put ya c's up Put ya C's up
itas a bk Allday and every day
cuzz is c's up B's down
C's poppin B's Droppin u a Clown

NHC.UK ROLLIN 40's EASTSIDE CRIP GANG.

D.F.G

my version of poetry!!!!!!!

let it rain, let it flood
let a crip killa blood.
let it flood, let it rain
shoot a slob in his brain.
empty 5 clips n watch the fake color drip.
run yo ass off
until u cant see the cops.
n if u get cought
just hope u get shot
b4 they put u in yo spot

By:Lil'Ic3y

tru dat nigga,bk all day every day!!!!!!

its good, i like it, an i luv the rythm, but it reminds me more of a rap an not a poem, its still good tho, u should post sum more.