*New* *Updated*: Luffyjin's Poetray

God, I wait at least a year for a comment from you people, waytogo treat someone. Hah, anway this will be my new thread from now on.

Scythe of silver
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Scythe of silver,

Blood of blue,

It hasn't been exposed to oxygen yet,

Neither have you,

So I end your life with no remorse,

As I ride off on my white horse

Danger Of Acceptance
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I might be in danger,

Of being accepted into the manger,

Of being a stereotypical fad,

Living up to expectations,

Of those hollow kids with no ambition,

So get out of that danger and put your brain in ignition,

Make yourself stand out,

By making yourself stand to side,

As many people stand out in by standing in,

Danger of acceptance,

Be aware,

Or your out

Fruits Of Summer
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Apples,

Oranges,

And other circular fruits,

Bloom and become beautiful,

But what defines beautiful?,

Blinding colours?

Beauty is in the eye of the beholder,

And this beholder is getting older,

And with age using a soulder,

To bring together people and families

So they can have summers,

And fruit on their trees

That's it for now.

they're okay, to be totally honest with you. 😬

OLOLOLOL, their vague and bland, about as bland as the community, thankyou for highlighting that. I'll post some real poetry when I get credit for my bland stuff.

This was just a test to see if you were all listening, and if you don't believe me. BLOW ME 8D

Keep treating the critics like that, and you may find yourself without an audience. 😬

AOR's got a point. 😒

Originally posted by vivando-loca
AOR's got a point. 😒

Hell yeah 😮‍💨