Avatar: A New Hope! [RP]

Started by Darth Extecute16 pages

Zuke noticed the uncomfort of people around him. He sighed but ignored it for a while. However, a few people made some extra uncomfort visible from it. One of them was a younger girl, possibly an airbender if judging by the markings she had over her skin. He did not care about scaring villagers, as he had been invited by the very village. He however did care about who could have been his future allied in combat.

Hopefully they would learn to accept him for being a firebender, for he had the heart of any earth, water and airbender. He too wished the war to end, even though it would mean he had to encounter the firelord himself and slay him. He hated the firenation and what they did, just as much as anyone else.

"I mean no harm" he said as he arrived at the temple. "I wish to help find the avatar just as much as any of you all"

Sorry, Wild-Cherry, I accidentally got confused. I forgot who was who because i didn't know the RP forum was already up and running, plus i haven't been to the Registration forum in a while, so that's why i'm confused. Sorry.

{ Thats fine. I replied anyway 🙂 }

Bard-dul smiled as the platinum-blonde Airbender said her name. He started a new conversation subject, but he decided to bring up the subject of what his senses had detected when she had accidentally brushed by him.

Bard-dul: Listen, uh, Ava, was it? When we were boarding the ship, I don’t know if you remember, but you had accidentally bumped into me and in that brief physical contact, my senses had indicated some strong feelings within you: anger, sadness, revenge, hatred. And I have a pretty good idea of what or who you direct those feelings towards; the Fire Nation, right? Let me tell you, Ava, those feelings are not unlike my own. I lost my father to the Fire Nation before I was born, and as soon as I left for this boat, I heard a rumor saying that my mother, the Great Waterbender Katara, had killed herself, though I’m not sure if it’s true, but I still think about the possibility. You probably think I wouldn’t understand, but I do. If you lost your family because of the Fire Nation, I understand 100%. But, don’t take this as offensive, you’re probably lucky, you at least got to know your family before you lost them, I didn’t. So if you feel all of those feelings towards the Fire Nation because of that reason, I understand how you feel.

And with that, Bard-dul left for his cabin to think, for now he felt upset. And when he feels upset when he talks about something like that, he usually thinks about it, and that helps him calm down so his Waterbending powers wouldn’t go out of control like his mother’s powers did when hers went out of control. When he arrived in his cabin, he just plopped down on his bed and started to think, hoping that thinking would calm him down as it usually did. As he was thinking, he reverted back to his real identity, Travis Jeremy Marksman, Jr. Silently he prayed to the heavens.

Bard-dul/Travis: Katara, please, don’t be dead. There’s still so much I want to tell you... so please, don’t be dead.

Originally posted by Super19
Bard-dul smiled as the platinum-blonde Airbender said her name. He started a new conversation subject, but he decided to bring up the subject of what his senses had detected when she had accidentally brushed by him.

Bard-dul: Listen, uh, Ava, was it? When we were boarding the ship, I don’t know if you remember, but you had accidentally bumped into me and in that brief physical contact, my senses had indicated some strong feelings within you: anger, sadness, revenge, hatred. And I have a pretty good idea of what or who you direct those feelings towards; the Fire Nation, right? Let me tell you, Ava, those feelings are not unlike my own. I lost my father to the Fire Nation before I was born, and as soon as I left for this boat, I heard a rumor saying that my mother, the Great Waterbender Katara, had killed herself, though I’m not sure if it’s true, but I still think about the possibility. You probably think I wouldn’t understand, but I do. If you lost your family because of the Fire Nation, I understand 100%. But, don’t take this as offensive, you’re probably lucky, you at least got to know your family before you lost them, I didn’t. So if you feel all of those feelings towards the Fire Nation because of that reason, I understand how you feel.

And with that, Bard-dul left for his cabin to think, for now he felt upset. And when he feels upset when he talks about something like that, he usually thinks about it, and that helps him calm down so his Waterbending powers wouldn’t go out of control like his mother’s powers did when hers went out of control. When he arrived in his cabin, he just plopped down on his bed and started to think, hoping that thinking would calm him down as it usually did. As he was thinking, he reverted back to his real identity, Travis Jeremy Marksman, Jr. Silently he prayed to the heavens.

Bard-dul/Travis: Katara, please, don’t be dead. There’s still so much I want to tell you... so please, don’t be dead.

((Your not on the boat.. Your on the island.. At least Ava is, just by the temple.. Letting you know while you can still edit.. I suggest you read everything trough again, as you seema bit lost on what's happening))

Ignore previous post. Here's the revision, thanks to Darth Extecute's advice:

Bard-dul smiled as the platinum-blonde Airbender said her name. He started a new conversation subject, but he decided to bring up the subject of what his senses had detected when she had accidentally brushed by him.

Bard-dul: Listen, uh, Ava, was it? When we were boarding the ship, I don’t know if you remember, but you had accidentally bumped into me and in that brief physical contact, my senses had indicated some strong feelings within you: anger, sadness, revenge, hatred. And I have a pretty good idea of what or who you direct those feelings towards; the Fire Nation, right? Let me tell you, Ava, those feelings are not unlike my own. I lost my father to the Fire Nation before I was born, and as soon as I left for this boat, I heard a rumor saying that my mother, the Great Waterbender Katara, had killed herself, though I’m not sure if it’s true, but I still think about the possibility. You probably think I wouldn’t understand, but I do. If you lost your family because of the Fire Nation, I understand 100%. But, don’t take this as offensive, you’re probably lucky, you at least got to know your family before you lost them, I didn’t. So if you feel all of those feelings towards the Fire Nation because of that reason, I understand how you feel.

And with that, Bard-dul left for the nearby forest to think, for now he felt upset. And when he feels upset when he talks about something like that, he usually thinks about it, and that helps him calm down so his Waterbending powers wouldn’t go out of control like his mother’s powers did when hers went out of control. When he arrived in his cabin, he just plopped down on the stump of a dead tree and started to think, hoping that thinking would calm him down as it usually did. As he was thinking, he reverted back to his real identity, Travis Jeremy Marksman, Jr. Silently he prayed to the heavens.

Bard-dul/Travis: Katara, please, don’t be dead. There’s still so much I want to tell you... so please, don’t be dead.

Hazanko neared the temple and noticed the people at the different distances and locations of the area. He was very secure about his own saftey regarding every negative outcome as a sure fire possibility. However he did not stop to look suspicious. Slipping off his shoes to reveal the end points of two very elaborate tattoos, he set his stick and bag down at the foot of the Temple and slid open the door. There were none in the temple that he could percieve and decided, once he felt the fire from the candles (which were dedicated towards the statue of Kyoshi), to use the remainder of the time meditating while he waited for the one in charge.

Miyu saw some of the people talking to one another and some that werent. Sheslowly made her way away from the group and distanced herself as she sat down to go through her pack for something.

After searching for a couple minutes she came across her water pouch and smiled as she slowly opened it and moved her hand bending some water around, she figured if she was bored to find something to keep her mind busy.

She stood out bringing her water out of the pouch and twirled it around her as if she was dancing while she hummed a song her mother used to sing to her before she died. She felt so at peace when she thought of her mother and so it helped to think of her when bending since she did much better when thinking of her.

Suzume was becoming bored fast. It was strange. The way she looked one might think she was shy and quiet. Nope. Suzume was sarcastic and loud. And she had a bad temper. Once you got her going, she wouldn’t stop until she burnt something, on accident of course. And when she was bored, she had a habit of playing with fire, but that always ended up a wrong decision.

“When are we going to start this meeting or whatever it is?!” She half yelled. Her voice echoed throughout the temple, seeing as many of them were too shy to talk.

Originally posted by Tatsumaki
Suzume was becoming bored fast. It was strange. The way she looked one might think she was shy and quiet. Nope. Suzume was sarcastic and loud. And she had a bad temper. Once you got her going, she wouldn’t stop until she burnt something, on accident of course. And when she was bored, she had a habit of playing with fire, but that always ended up a wrong decision.

“When are we going to start this meeting or whatever it is?!” She half yelled. Her voice echoed throughout the temple, seeing as many of them were too shy to talk.

Hazanko winced at the loud noise. However it gave him the opportunity to "see" every aspect of the temple he did not have the opportunity otherwise. On account of Hazanko being blind, he depended on echos to draw the objects before him into visual. Much like a bat. He noticed that there were many others in the temple around him and they were, as this girl made him see, very much alone. Some were in corners, others were busy playing with their own elements. His pity overwhelmed him. He couldn't help but feel regret consume him What am I doing he thought. What have these people left behind to join this mission? What is it they have sacrifised? What have I sacrifised? Several memory flashes of people who ridiculed him and mocked him when he was younger.

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Four large boys were playing keep away from a youger one who could barely stand on his own feet. He swayed as he tried to follow the voices that held a small wooden doll of his, but was always shoved back into the middle.

"Can't you see where we have it?!" The other bullies snickered as the doll was tossed around over the boys head. "Come on we know you're blind, but not deaf!" One of the boys punched him in the stomach which caused him to sway and then keel over on the ground. The leader of the four broke the toy over his knee and threw the remains unto the ground. As they passed by each boy contributed either a spit or a slap to the helpless individual. The pace of the bullies quickened as the rolling thunder ahead promised a terrible thunderstorm.
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He was brought back into focus by the sound of the shifting people to the loud girls voice. He decided that he would not acquire the necessary focus he needed in the temple. Picking himself up, he followed the path towards the door and slid it open. He decended the steps and was relieved when he felt the warm breeze slide off of his face. He followed it into the forest to continue to rest and meditate.

Hou walked out of the temple with a smile on her face. She observed the crowd of volunteers and nodded them to enter the temple. She was pleased that there would be this many. She herself did not expect for more than maybe two or three. Most people were afraid of what the fire nation could do to them if they found out they went to search for the avatar, to end this world.

"You may all enter the temple and have a seat. Thank you Uno, for bringing them here. I will start the meeting as soon as Sokka has arrived. He should be here anytime soon. Be patient as such a valuable guest should be in from the beginning. You can start making yourself comfortable with your future team-mates.

My name is Hou Attar. Me and Sokka will provide you all the information and clues we have about the extraordinary Avatar, who is of the element water, in case you were uncertain. Which is also our first clue"

She waved the crowd into the temple, as she stood by the doorway, looking up into the sky. She waited patiently for the highly positioned Sokka. It was a shame things wind up the way they did with Katara, as she would have been a great asset in the search for this avatar, especially since the element of the avatar was Water.

Uno ran up to Hou with a smile on her face and stood straight in back.

"I did well?"

"You did well, Uno"

"What is my next assignment"

"Keep order among the newly arrived. Go into the temple and have a look at your future team"

"Yes, mom"

Uno nodded with a smile on her face. Hou stared at her with a slight anger in her eyes. Uno blushed as she just came to think of what she called Hou. She was never allowed to call her that in public, and she could just hope that no one heard it. She walked with a bit of shame into the temple, standing straight in back and looking at the people who entered. The one giving her the chills, was the large firebender. A powerful ally, but also a powerful foe.

Another thing that made her smile, was the airbenders. She was happy to see that the airbenders were coming back to the world. She tried to look serious, but there was no use to it. She was not the serious kind, and all she could think of was that she would go on an adventure with all these people.

Having regained herself, Ava followed the girl, Suzume, into the temple. her outburst had ironically calmed Ava a bit. She took a spot a little ways apart from the other benders, and seated herself. Giving Uno an inquiring glance, she opened and reopened her hands as they waited. She was feeling exited for the first time in a long time, and she wasn't quite sure what to do with it. Brushing a piece of hair out of her face she eyed the fire bender who had caused her initial reaction. to her own dismay, she could only keep her eyes on him for a few seconds. She could only hope he hadn't seen her half collapse earlier. It was just that he looked so much like one of them. His very essence wrought her mind with the memories of those prior years, Memories she had fought hard to lock away in the corners of her mind.

Ava sighed then. She wasn't about to let her past, and silly memories ruin her performance here. She figured she hadn't anything else to put her self into , and this was something that would at least be beneficial to others. eyeing the floor once more, she wondered when the meeting would begin.

(Could anyone make me a sig? I would like one, if someone can make me one. Thanks.)

[I could give it a try 😄 PM me with what you would like as a signature and keep it at PM. I do not want to spend unnecessary space in this thread 😛]

Miyu continued to water bend while listening to the person speak at the same time. She then put her water back inside its rightful pouch and made her way inside the temple, she sat near the back of the temple as she got her water back out and decided to try to practice making water into the shape of people and make them move around. She was bored and it was the only thing she could think of to do right now.

With each little movement she made with her hand the water would form into two small people and she would try to concentrate to move each seperate, but she still needed practice, the two figiures looked like they were fighting when she was trying to make them dance.

Originally posted by Super19
(Could anyone make me a sig? I would like one, if someone can make me one. Thanks.)
{ I could make one too, if you have an image in mind =P }

Yeah, Wild-Cherry, I do have one in mind, I was thinking of a sig with Super 17, the fused version of the two Android 17's, as my sig. Then in a text within the sig, I would want the following phrase in it: "The Strongest Android in the Multiverse". if you can do that, that would be great! Thanks again.

[Guys 🙁 Please take it over PM as I said. And Super19, if you ask for a signature and I offer to make one, please do not just ignore it and skip to the next person. It is horribly rude and at the very least, disrespectful to me. Instead say that you do not want a signature from me if that is the case ermm I know I am not very good at it right now, but I am learning]

Hou smiled as she looked up into the skies, and almost out of nowhere he had arrived. The flying bison came in a great amount of speed, circling the skies for a brief moment, before landing on the ground with a big stomp. Sokka slid down from the large bison with a grin on his face, looking at it and patting the back.

"Good work, Appa! This will not take long"

Hou smiled, for she had always been fascinated in that large bison creature. But before she had a chance to say anything, this winged Lemur flew at her, around and around her head. Momo appreciated seeing Hou once more, as Hou was one of the people that aided with the final battle. Momo crawled over her back and into her pocket. She had delicious food as well. Hou was not certain if it was the food or her personality that made her popular to Momo, but it did not matter.

She smiled, waving at Sokka before walking into the temple with Momo on her hat. She kneeled by the doorway, with her eyes closed and a smile on her face.

"Our final guest has arrived"

Sokka walked in, looking down at Hou and rolled his eyes. He leaned against the wall at the entrance, motioning her to get up.

"Before we start, I want to know a little about everyone here. Raise your hand as you speak, so we know who is the one speaking. A future team needs to know eachother at least a little. You do not have to say anything big, just a minor detail about yourself, and of course, your name"

Sokka said with a grin as Hou raised her hand and started talking.

"I am Hou Attar, leader of the Kyoshi warriors, proud mother of two..." a slight pause "One daughter. I just as of recently found some traces of where the avatar is located and I believe that by locating this person, we can end this war. A little more about myself, I am not a bender but I am a skilled fighter."

Sokka smiled

"Next! Anyone?"

He looked around the crowd.

{ My apologies 😮 In any case, CC's usually turn out loads better than mine, so thats probably the way to go 🙂}

{ PS, excuse the short post }

Ava cocked her head in awe as the great flying creature landed before them. She had heard of the rare creature's existance, especially among her own kind those years ago, but had never actually seen one. The man who slid off of the things back caught her eye as well. Her gaze was distracted, however, by the small lemur that had practically glued itself to Huo's neck, before finding it's way into her pocket. When Ava turend she saw that she had caught the bison's eye, and gazed into it momentarily. As she lookedn on, she found herself eyeing the man once again. She figured if she must speak about herself, she would do so quickly, and get it over with. Raising two fingeres, she closed her eyes and spoke.

" My name is Ava. I am an airbender, if you did not notice from the start "

She said quietly, tucking a peice of stray hair behind her ear.

Miyu swiftly put her water back in its pouch and raise her hand with a smile as she decided to go next "My name is Miyu, I am a water bender" She glanced at the little flying lemar and smiled. She brought out her water again and as she moved it into the air she formed it into a replica of the flying lemar. She made it fly around as she smiled and laughed as she played with the water some more.