They are spread throughout the Batman Forum but here is a little snipit from one of my favorite ones that I have written.
Synopsis Of Batman Vengeance
Set in the middle of The Dark Knight’s career as Gotham’s saviour Batman Vengeance tells the tale of Batman facing a figure from his past. This comes in the form of a new vigilante known only as The Enforcer who uses brutal methods to eliminate the criminals of Gotham City. Meanwhile Batman must also face a new emerged villain in the form of Mr Freeze who blames Batman from preventing him to cure his wife Nora who has a rare disease.
Warner Brothers logo opens up with dramatic music. Switch to a shot on a dark street also the words 10 years ago come up.
A speeding car stops suddenly in front of a small house on the dark street. Out of the car steps out a big man, you don’t see his face but you see him pointing at the house. Then out of the car come smartly dressed gangsters with Tommy guns. They approach the front of the house. Then the big man approaches the house and in his hand is a coin. He suddenly flips it and it lands on the side with two scratches.
Two Face: Looks like this is the Batman’s unlucky day. Boys raid the house and bring the girl to me alive.
Suddenly one of the Gangsters turns around to Two Face and speaks. His name is Tony Lector. He is a tall man with jet black hair and big bold features.
Tony Lector: Remind me again Two Face why are we after an insignificant woman?
Two Face: Lets just say she is what makes our dear Dark Knight’s heart beat and tonight we shall make his heart stop beating once and for all.
Then after those words Two Face gets out a gun and points it at Tony’s head.
Two Face: Now Tony, I hope you fully understand the situation now…
A scared Tony looks up Two Face, daring not to look at the disfigured side of Two Face’s face.
Tony Lector: Yes Mr Two Face Sir like crystal.
Two Face: Good to hear. Now boys let’s bring this place down hard.
Then with those words spoken Two Face’s men smash down the front door of the house and enter the house. Half of the men search the downstairs of the house and the other half search the upstairs. In one of the bedrooms upstairs there is a woman. She is sitting by the window of her room looking at the night sky. She is quite tall with short light brown hair; she is wearing a red jumper with black trousers and has her hair tied up in a knot. Her name is Amanda Seinfeld and she is the current girlfriend of Bruce Wayne AKA Batman.
Then without a glance at the nearest star her door gets smashed down. In come two of Two Face’s men. She stays there gazing at the night sky. The two gangsters come towards her, pointing their Tommy guns at her head. One of the gangsters starts to speak.
Random Gangster: You better be coming with us doll face, it’s lucky the boss wants you alive.
Then with those words spoken they grab Amanda by her neck and drag her downstairs. She is screaming all the way down. Meanwhile outside the house, Two Face is waiting and he sees all of his men empty the house. One of the gangsters turns to him.
Random Gangster: Do you want us to torch this place down boss?
Then Two Face gets his coin out of his pocket.
Two Face: Heads say we leave it men and the scratched side says we burn the place down.
Then he flips his coin and it lands heads.
Two Face: Let’s leave the place boys, now back to Headquarters. It is only a matter of time before Batman comes looking for her.
Then with those words spoken, Two Face and his thugs get back into the car. They drive of into the dark night with their dark intent.
Exit Scene
Scene Change
Meanwhile in another part of the city in an apartment room there is a woman tied up with her mouth stitched up with tape. From the shadows emerges a man. He is a scruffy looking man with nearly shaven hair and he is wearing a ripped t-shirt as well as shorts. The man’s name is Mr Zsasz and he is a brutal serial killer.
Mr Zsasz: You are a zombie my dear not a pretty little girl like all the boys tell you. You have no purpose in life and I have taken it upon myself to set you free.
Then he picks up a carving knife from the floor and approaches the tied up girl. He suddenly grabs the tips of her hair.
Mr Zsasz: So soft like spreading soft butter on bread. I think I will make this quick, easy and painless. Let me just say my dear you will certainly not be the first to be set free by yours truly. Infact I have set loads of you zombies free. Would you like to me to show you?
Then the woman tied up lets out a little scream even though her mouth is stitched up by sticky tape.
Mr Zsasz: I would take that as a yes then my dear.
Then with a little chuckle he rips open his shirt. To the girl’s horror she sees loads of scars all over Mr Zsasz`s body and arms.
Mr Zsasz: You see I mark the people I set free with these scars. I make these scars with my little friend, which you see here. Now let’s see after I set you free you will be victim number….
He starts muttering numbers to himself and then gives out a loud screech.
Mr Zsasz: Oh **** I have lost count, although you usually do when you have been at this job for years.
Then he approaches the tied up woman again and removes the tape from her mouth.
Mr Zsasz: Now any last words before I set you free my dear?
Tied Up Girl: You really think you will win Zsasz? No you won’t, soon you be back in Arkham with your little pecker friends.
Mr Zsasz: And who do you think will come and save you huh *****?
Then he grabs his knife and points the tip of it at her neck.
Mr Zsasz: Now its time...
Suddenly the light in the room goes out and everything is dark. Then a voice is heard from the shadows of the night?
Voice: You have lost your edge Zsasz. I mean those traces you left are the stuff of a sloppy killer. Something I would expect from the Penguin but not you, maybe you should hang up your knife and retire.
Mr Zsasz: You dare mock me Batman I have claimed more people then you have put away; maybe you should hang up your cape and retire.
Batman: That is not going to happen anytime soon. I am taking you in Zsasz.
Then suddenly Zsasz starts running and jumps out of a glass window and runs across some rooftops. Meanwhile inside Batman lights a candle nearby and frees the tied up woman. The woman then turns around and starts talking.
Random Woman: Thanks for saving me Batman by the name my name is Lizzy how about dinner some time.
To her shock she realises the Batman has disappeared into the deep dark cold night to catch Mr Zsasz.
Originally posted by Yoshi Paradise
That's really good.Seriously, you have a talent in writing.
Cheers my friend I really apprichite that and what did you like bout it?And I just do a lot of research really into the characters before writing and when I write I want people to feel when they are reading it that they can imagine that they can see the images as though they are reading a comic even though it is written for screen cause thats the aim at the end of the day with a comic book movie you want to see a comic book put on screen although few movies have really succeeded with this such as 300 and Sin City.
Okay here is my first treatment/idea for Spider-Man 4.
Synopsis Of Spider-Man 4
One year after the events of Spider-Man 3, Peter faces an awkward life as the web slinger. His relationship with MJ has reached its all time low with the girl of his dreams leaving New York for a better future. However a new evil that will threaten all that he loves has risen and to fight this evil he must appeal to the humanity of his arc nemesis Venom. Who has been biding his time after near death in order to destroy Spider-Man once and for all
Movie opens up with credits like the last three movies. Switch to shot in a park. It is a bright sunny afternoon. You can see couples hold hands and smile at each other and children playing.
Voice Over: I learned long ago that I could never be like a normal human being I was given a gift to use for the good of all people and had always lived by my Uncle’s words that With Great Power comes Great Responsibility. But in these years of having these powers I have had to give up the life I so longed for and give up the girl of my dreams.
A darkness took over me some months ago that drove all the people I loved away from me including her. I eventually fought it but my life was never the same again I lost my best friend. I still live with the consequences of being Spider-Man for the better hood of New York oh why did she have to leave.
Switch to a scene when Peter is clearing away some stuff in his apartment. He hears a knock on his door and goes over to open it. In his doorway stands Mary Jane Watson.
MJ: I hope I’m not disturbing you, Pete.
Peter Parker: No its okay MJ, I was just clearing some stuff out…. its moving day tomorrow!
MJ: Uh huh… I came here to talk about something important.
Peter Parker: What’s up? Is everything alright?
MJ: Sit down, Peter, this is… hard…
Then Peter pulls up a chair for MJ and sits down on his bed. MJ then puts her hand on Peters’ hand and starts talking.
MJ: Listen Peter we need to talk about us I just feel we need a break with everything that has happened in the last year.
Peter Parker: I know I have done some terrible things MJ but I’m sure we can just talk this through.
Then MJ starts crying.
MJ: No Peter I just need some time to clear my head a lot of stuff has happened to me recently my mum has passed away and I want to forget about the scars of the past.
Peter Parker: Listen what I have always told you I be here for you always.
MJ: But you have not Pete do you know what’s its like for you to always be away and be in near death incidents.
Peter Parker: It’s what I do MJ I thought you understood that?
MJ: I don’t understand you anymore Pete I just need time to clear my head.
Then she gets up and walks out of Pete’s apartment. Peter follows her and starts trying to persuade her not to go.
Peter Parker: Where will you go?
MJ: I’m moving away from New York to start a new life away from all this pain.
Peter Parker: But MJ I love you snap out of this I’m here for you.
MJ: I just don’t know what to think anymore Peter.
She takes one last look at Peter and walks out of his apartment building. Peter stares on into the lonely street.
Cheers here is my second treatment/idea for Spider-Man 4.
Synopsis Of Spider-Man 4
A tale of revenge, lust and desperation Spider-Man 4 continues the story of Peter Parker the nerd turned superhero. Taking place a few months after Spider-Man 3 Peter Parker now is just mending aspects of his life after the events of the last couple months including his relationship with girlfriend Mary Jane Watson. Meanwhile two villains are preparing to ruin Spidey`s life once and for all. The first is army veteran Adrian Toomes aka The Vulture who grows jealous of Spider-Man’s fame and is out to prove once and for all that Spider-Man is not all that he seems to be. He thinks that he should have the fame and glory due to being an army veteran. The second villain is Max Dillon who after a freak accident and being left for dead is out for terrible revenge against those who attempted to kill him and he is reborn as the electrifying Electro.
Characters
Peter Parker/Spider-Man
At the end of Spider-Man 3 we find Peter at a tough time in his life he has just lost his best friend Harry Osborn and he is just mending his relationship with his girlfriend Mary Jane Watson which has been on the rocks since Peter`s actions under the influence of the symbiote. Now in Spider-Man 4 he is still New York’s savior and still leads the duel life.
Adrian Toomes/The Vulture
Adrian Toomes is one of the lower electronic engineers who worked at Oscorp. He is also an old war veteran who fought in the Vietnam War. At his time at Oscorp he has been producing things to do with flying but one day he gets fired for being too old and that what he is doing has no use to the company. At the same time he sees how Spider-Man is getting treated by the people of New York. He becomes very jealous of this because he thinks that Spider-Man does not deserve to be called a hero and he who has been in a war for his country comes back and gets treated like a freak of society. So with his anger at society and his former employers at Oscorp Adrian Toomes decides to use his flying technology to become the super villain known as The Vulture to take down Spider-Man as well as have his revenge on society who have always regarded him as a freak instead of a hero.
Max Dillon/Electro
Max Dillon is a new student who has joined Peter`s class at Empire State University. He is a shy person who is extremely clever and has tendencies for periods of anger. Settling in for him at the university is extremely hard and Peter appears to be his only friend as he falls victim to bullying and rejection. One night he gets a note from what appears to be a girl he really likes but this turns out to be an ambush by bullies. He gets brutally beaten this results in him being close to death as he is confronted near a power line. After being presumed to be dead on that stormy night he gets struck by a freak lightning accident resulting in a mutagenic change in his nervous system. Soon after he dons the name of Electro and vows revenge on all those who have bulled him in his life and not even in his mind can Spider-Man stand in his way
Originally posted by Mr Shindiggery
Cheers here is my second treatment/idea for Spider-Man 4.Synopsis Of Spider-Man 4
A tale of revenge, lust and desperation Spider-Man 4 continues the story of Peter Parker the nerd turned superhero. Taking place a few months after Spider-Man 3 Peter Parker now is just mending aspects of his life after the events of the last couple months including his relationship with girlfriend Mary Jane Watson. Meanwhile two villains are preparing to ruin Spidey`s life once and for all. The first is army veteran Adrian Toomes aka The Vulture who grows jealous of Spider-Man’s fame and is out to prove once and for all that Spider-Man is not all that he seems to be. He thinks that he should have the fame and glory due to being an army veteran. The second villain is Max Dillon who after a freak accident and being left for dead is out for terrible revenge against those who attempted to kill him and he is reborn as the electrifying Electro.Characters
Peter Parker/Spider-Man
At the end of Spider-Man 3 we find Peter at a tough time in his life he has just lost his best friend Harry Osborn and he is just mending his relationship with his girlfriend Mary Jane Watson which has been on the rocks since Peter`s actions under the influence of the symbiote. Now in Spider-Man 4 he is still New York’s savior and still leads the duel life.Adrian Toomes/The Vulture
Adrian Toomes is one of the lower electronic engineers who worked at Oscorp. He is also an old war veteran who fought in the Vietnam War. At his time at Oscorp he has been producing things to do with flying but one day he gets fired for being too old and that what he is doing has no use to the company. At the same time he sees how Spider-Man is getting treated by the people of New York. He becomes very jealous of this because he thinks that Spider-Man does not deserve to be called a hero and he who has been in a war for his country comes back and gets treated like a freak of society. So with his anger at society and his former employers at Oscorp Adrian Toomes decides to use his flying technology to become the super villain known as The Vulture to take down Spider-Man as well as have his revenge on society who have always regarded him as a freak instead of a hero.Max Dillon/Electro
Max Dillon is a new student who has joined Peter`s class at Empire State University. He is a shy person who is extremely clever and has tendencies for periods of anger. Settling in for him at the university is extremely hard and Peter appears to be his only friend as he falls victim to bullying and rejection. One night he gets a note from what appears to be a girl he really likes but this turns out to be an ambush by bullies. He gets brutally beaten this results in him being close to death as he is confronted near a power line. After being presumed to be dead on that stormy night he gets struck by a freak lightning accident resulting in a mutagenic change in his nervous system. Soon after he dons the name of Electro and vows revenge on all those who have bulled him in his life and not even in his mind can Spider-Man stand in his way
Fascinating
Originally posted by Yoshi Paradise
I like Electro's background information. His story seems very likely since anybody can get electrocuted by a powerline.I'm not a fan of Vulture because I think he's a boring villain. Quick question: How would he get his youth-absorption powers?
hmm I did not really think of that I have to give more thought into that and I think that yes he Vulture is a boring villain to but I think its an interesting dynamic that Vulture is jeloucius of Spidey`s fame and the more and more he tries to do to get recognized the more hated he becomes untill he finally becomes infamous in the eyes of the people of New York and I imagine that my origin for Electro would be something that Sam Rami would use cause he likes to tie all his villains to Peter one way or another.
No not really I mostly write Batman scripts and my orginal stuff but I do love writing stuff for Spidey and my first idea for Spidey 4 would prob be how I would want Spidey 6 to play out and my 2nd Spidey 4 idea ends on a cliff hanger with Doc Conners becoming the Lizard and in my Spidey 5, Spider-Man faces Hob Goblin and The Lizard.