my new poems

i'm sorry i haven't been on lately...things here aren't going too well. i might be getting a laptop so i could be on alot more often...when i get the laptops i'll post the poems and songs that i'm currently working on

be safe love

tea.

i'm back and i have some new work to post soon

Benji!!!!! *whine*

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that was actually longer than i thought it was

I only have compliments so... I asume the "**** off" doesn't pertain to me.

Anyways, I really enjoyed it. Your pain... your anger... I could feel it. I really liked the flow of it aswell. There were parts I could imagin in song format. Having gone through something somewhat simaliar, I felt the words were taken right out of my head. Great job. Really.

Some people certainly know how to make others suffer. I guess that makes us the unsuspecting idiots that let the wolf in.

I'm sorry Benji. Been there myself, mine only lasted a year and that was 7 years ago now. I still have random thoughts about it and odd dreams and yes it still bothers me but it doesnt hurt any more. still makes me angry, that I was such a sucker. But Mostly now I pity him.

I know that eventually he will get whats coming to him and I can have some satisfaction in know that one day he'll pick the wrong person to meddle with.

I'm here for you benji. I did add you to my hotmail and MSN contacts but got no reply from you. PM me!

Bun Bun, you know you're welcome to comment whenever you like. and thanks for the comment.

Lara!!!!!!! i misseded you. i replied to your pm.

since i'm using my ps3, i'm not going to post any new poems until i get a new charger for my laptop. oh and i was taken when wrote this but we both decided to be friends...so once again i am a free man running from the trap called 'a relationship' XD

its only a trap if that person is wrong for you. :/

ah touche Lara. maybe the right one is still out there

Originally posted by DangerousBeauty
love this!

Torchured Living Souls (Intro)

For those on the outside scream

For those on the inside cry

For those few willing to live

For those many willing to die

Chorus

Bring to thee your crimson sacrifice

So unborn fetus shaped diseases

May weep for new found life

For those brave enough to face death

For those afraid of their own fears

For those never to have wept

For those whom freely lose tears

Chorus

For those that are loved

For those tortured living souls

For those whom are completely sane

For those whom lost all control

Chorus

This is for you!

one of my older works posted by db

i have a new comp so i should be posting some new work soon

Originally posted by XvampbenjiiX666
one of my older works posted by db

I can just about hear that in my head! Love the lyrics!

Did you have a genre in mind when writing this? I picture it heavy metal.

yea along those lines with black/death metal. i have more songs but i look at them now and realise my writing sucked a few years ago. but i'm going to try either later today or tomorrow to post a new song

😄 I look forward to more

thanks Bun Bun

so now i walk,

walk down this bloody path.

army of the Unholy,

legion of darkness,

follows closely behind

our target in sight,

the gates of heaven.

victory shall be ours,

it will be ours!

tonight we dine on the holy

clouds roll in high above us.,

rumbling with the threat of storms.

our hearts beat rapidly.

today is the day the holy kingdom

falls into nothingness

we halt are march and wait.

our breathing becomes faster,

the longer we wait.

preparing ourselves for the final battle,

this is our day of reckoning

lightning cracks in the sky,

thunder growls at all around us.

our battle cry is unleashed as we advance.

there will be blood tonight

as the blood of the holy taints our steel.

we reach the gate under a hail of arrows.

some have fallen, but there are still many.

the gates fail under us,

our advance into heaven is unlike any plague

the slaughter begins!

angels fall by high numbers.

blood covers the ground,

as if it was always there.

nothing is left untorched

and nothing is left alive.

their resistence is for not.

they crumble under our onslaught.

we have stormed the gates

and besieged the kingdom of lies!

our reign of this land has begun.

that's it as of now. i might work on it some more. make it a bit longer. and yes i used quite a few Kult ov Azazel references in it. but how could one not when they have such great music and are a major inspiration? tell me what yous think. constructive criticism and tips are much appreciated

I like it! Love the detail and the build up. Only thing, perhaps more detail of the battle. (When the gates fall) Would give your reader a better satisfaction after that AWESOME build up. Again I like it 😄