my new poems

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A song by Woods of Ypres I'm stuck on at the moment. Well one of the songs.

Everything I Touch Turns To Gold (Then To Coal)

Woe, oh

I am in denial, and I am depressed
I will try to bargain with you, then share my anger with you
But I can't complete the full cycle of mourning
I struggle with acceptance
I can't forgive myself

Everything I touch turns to gold, then to coal
Everything I touch turns to rust, then to dust

My clothes are full of holes, hanging off my tired body
I command so much negativity, my charge drains the life from machinery
But I feel such powerlessness, when I struggle with forgiveness
Yet I don't know my own strength, when I destroy everything

Woe, oh

I am in denial, and I am depressed

Going to try and post something new tonight because I won't be able to get onto kmc for awhile until I buy a laptop.

Anyone know a good amount of information about Cenobytes?

The female vikingness, a prisoner
Stands at ready with her captor,
A male viking, her fiance,
Watching the approaching horde.

Trusting his prisoner, his love,
He unsheaths his sword
Shouts into beastly into the air
And charges for the slaughter

The vikingness pulls out a bow
Drawing back arrow, she waits
As soon as the first blood is spilled,
She sends the arrow flying free

The viking smiles as some grunts
He turns to see the arrow hit it's mark
Lodged into the juggular of the enemy
He knew she would protect him

And so the captor and prisoner,
The unlikely couple of different lands,
Fought the horde of savages together
As if they were longtime companions

The vikingness drops her worn bow,
Draws two daggers and charges
Hitting the horde head on like a goddess,
Hacking, slashing, and stabbing all

The viking stood their ground
Massacring the thinning horde
Exhausted they still fought,
To protect one another

The last of the savages falls, beheaded
From strikes both had landed
Panting, they turn to each other
Holding each other and smiling

A snap of a branch steals the smiles
They look up to see archers
Surrounding them completely
As one, every arrow flew

The prisoner looks at her captor
He looks back at her, nodding
She rests her head on his shoulder
Both close their eyes and wait

The arrows hit the both of them
Piercing one and exiting the other
Dying in each other's arms
Embraced one last time...

I'll think of something soon. Probably not going to be as violent as my other ones so there's that to look forward to.

Not like anyone still reads these but I'll be posting something tonight/tomorrow.

Run, lie and hide
It's what you're good at
Can never speak the truth
Even for a simple question
Go on and run to him,
Fill his head withe lies
The same you've told
Countless times before
Your lies and secrets
Will catch up to you
And I'll make sure of it
You can't keep lying
Manipulating others
For your twisted urges
I hate to do this but
I loved you and only you
Would have took on an army
With just a pebble
To prove my love
I forgave countless times
Letting the past be just that
Just so we could be happy
Forgave the cheating
The lies and accusing
Put up with your shit
When my life was falling
Into the abyss of nothingness
Always strong for you
When I couldn't for myself
Always strong for you
Even in my time of need
Almost killed myself for you
Because you hated life
Lost my friends thanks to you
Drink more than before
Have many hidden scars
With your name on them
But I put up with it
Because I loved you
For four and a half years
I was just another victim
Trapped by your lies
And manipulative ways
You don't care about anyone
But only your damned self
Your time will come soon
Where your lies work against you
Everyone will see what you are
Until then, keep spinning your web
Catching the unexpected
Making them your slaves
Only to destroy crush their spirits
And for those that read this
And know whom it's about
But still want her "love"
Take it from me
Someone that barely survived
Only to come out mentally destroyed
Avoid her words, the venom
She uses to kill
"Human at sight, monster at heart
Don't let it inside it could tear you right apart"

I enjoyed reading that and knew 'whom' this was about by the second line. Deep, and emotive, good use of word and descriptive emotive sentances. 🙂 I am always about my friend, somewhere...

Thanks. By the way, nice little quote under your sig.

Thanks 🙂 what do you do by the way, if the monster tears you left apart instead of right?

Umm drink? I just used that part from a Death song called "spirit crusher". Thought it fit in with the poem.

Okay 🙂

Oh wait stupid rum hazyness. It's not "tear your right apart." Its "tear you right apart." You sir have read it wrong.

Nope, not at all, I was intentionally making a bad joke lol 🙂

...British people.

New material soon.

you sure do put a lot of effort into hatng this person that could be rather bad for your health like a stroke or heart explosion from high blood pressure or worse it could turn you into a perpetual emo 😮 why dont you try writing about something happy and uplifting like sunshine, rainbows and/or lollipops?

Why don't I write about ripping someone's face off, devour their eyes and mutilate their body until there is nothing left. This is my thread and I can write whatever I want to write about and hate anyone I want to hate.

I'm not saying you can't, just saying all this negativity can't be good, I knew a guy once, all he did was loathe and get angry and hate people (like the old slow bagger at the grocery store) all that hate and anger just balled up inside him and you know what happened? Damn guy got hit by a car while crossing the street

So you're saying me hating everyone is going to get me hit by a car? Happened multiple times already.