College Paper Written on "2 Girls 1 Cup".
I felt that this paper was really well written. I really don't understand why the paper was given a 0%. Other than the extraneous description of the purpose of the title, it is illogical to grade the paper as such. The professor grading this paper obviously is uptight and a prude. As adults, as long as items such as these are approached from an academic point of view, it is inappropriate to deem such things as inappropriate. (When is the last time you met a college student younger than 18?...not that they are not out there...)
Even the expanded description of the title that was contained in parenthesis could be acceptable because parenthesis are considered non-essential asides that provide further insight or something that is off topic. referencing the time frame of the video is not incorrect...I work with a video editor...or former video editor and official reports that he made were in that format. If you refer to a specific time frame seconds are denoted by 1 06:34 (The before means 1 hour 6 minutes and 34 seconds. want to be redundant...you can put 0 00:11). To be absolutely correct, you would usually put 34 seconds down like this....00:34.
Anyway, here is the paper.
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2156/2023343777_b1b21480b2_o.jpg
