Jacks poems

Started by Jack Diavolo1 pages

Jacks poems

ive been writing poetry for a few years but its never been something i decided to pursue

but heres a couple ive just had or just written.

heres an old one.

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I've got a small confession
These butterflies wont quit
In your hand, Mine is woven
It's funny how they fit.

Your heart it beats in tune with mine
A dark enchanted flow
I feel your heart right next to mine
It's funny how they glow.

I suppose we call this love
A feeling that I miss
So light my my heart, that with a start
It stops within your kiss.

wow, this one is very sweet I like it. it flows well and is simple. the message is clear and tbvh its made my heart go all funny so its great.

very nice, jack. very nice indeed thumbsup