DB's Thread

((Hey all this is my first time posting here so yeah be nice but I'd love some comments! Enjoy! I may post more then just poems in here but yeah I'll try to keep it updated. Thanks all!))

End of My Eyes

These eyes of mine, they hold no lies.
Light does not shine, in a town that is blind.
Minds are wasted, by ones who I see.

Behind the lense, lies destruction and hate.
Twisted by life, consumed by fate.
Blue eyes fade. Angels fall from the skies.
Hope is lost. Silence and cries.

Tears run red. Oceans dry.
Humanity is buried beneath time.

Traces are lost.
None survive, but those who’s light is blind.
Darkness prevails.
Fear spreads among the bones of the past.
Time blows away, repeating till at last the light runs out.
No light is left, burned out by darkness that constantly creeps into
the lives of the good.
Turning the land into a place of war. Deaths go unseen.
Backs are turned. Voices dry.
They call for the light.
Seeking it’s peace once held by the past.
None survive.

One stands alone. Watching time bury the place she called home.
Friends fade. Hearts turn to stone.
Only one is left and she stands alone.

She smiles and walks through the bones of the past.
Memories fade. All her time shall elapse.

No one left, she cries alone.
Standing on the bones, she wants to go home.

Darkness comes, her light escapes.
She is all that is left in this world of hate.

She is all that is left, no one hears her cries.
Her tears fall to the skies.

Reality sets, her mind takes it in.

Real as the fire, safe as a dream.
Behind my eyes lies a world unseen.

nice, very depictive althought the structure could do with a little attention.

good stuff.

kk i'll work on that thanks

*gets the crowd to appluad* yes!! i love it...has i sort of dark feeling to it

awww thanks hun. ^^

pitt_spin

Cool, DB.

It is really sad. Lonelyness. And your use of words is rather visual, so i find it quite easy to see the imagery and the context from which you base it. Apart from some minor pacing and layout issues, this was good. Very well done love. x

i can never get enoguh of this poem my love...it may not be perfect but i still lvoe it. never a such thing as a perfect poem, just one that is loved to perfection

meh*shrugs* i just got bored and started writing i had something in mind but in the middle of it the poem grabbed me by the hair and said 'SQREW YOUR ORIGINAL WE'RE GOING THIS WAY!' And so yeah... Took a turn for the worst... I need to get something better out here... *sighs*

...i can't wait for the new one

The Couple Holding Each Others Hearts

For the couple who's love was lost in the sands of time

the look of love sends each other's souls into the sublime

one so beautiful, so innocent, the other so quiet, so sinful

both share a feeling of pure love that singes their souls

the goddess and the AntiKrist fall in love on first sight

spending together every hour of the day and night

holding each other dear, together they waste the light

in love they watch, in love they grow, in love they feel, in love they die

he runs a gentle hand down her body, staring into her beautiful eyes

the shiver of her body sends chills of his own down his spine

she gently pulled him onto her where they reached up to the great divine

she moaned to him to never leave but forever stay

he closed his and whispered the he'll stand by her, come whatever may

he looks back into her eyes, feeling her love wash his troubles away

and forever he stayed, never leaving come whatever may

for after their reach to the starry skies above, still they lay

as the night goes on, the AntiKrist looks into her eyes and gets on one knee

he slowly pulls out a velvet box with a a silver band inside and asks her "will you marry me?"

the blood red tears stream down his goddess' beautiful face

she nodded while she bent down to kiss him without haste

he smiled as she whispered "my love you soars past the stars in space"

"your so sweet" she whispered into her beloved AntiKrist's ear

"you always say that" he whispered back to the goddess he holds dear

"because its true" she smiled, her blood slowly pinkening her cheeks

the look froze the AntiKrist into a look of love, not able to speak

on the day of the wedding, the tears flown like foutains of red wine

the goddess wipes her tears and said to her beloved AntiKrist "your nothing but mine"

the AntiKrist looked into his goddess and said "you hold my heart your hands and i hold yours in mine"

the unholy prowless of the sacred two and up with them looking to the starry sky

for has anyone seen a love so pure, so unfilled with hate, so unfilled with lies?

this is where we will leave the couple. but don't worry, this isnt they end of their love

the AntiKrist from below and his beloved goddess fromthe starry divine above.

a little something i found on the interwebs i like it so i had to post it

Hold High Satan's Pride

don't be ashamed to show your beliefs, there's nothing shameful to hide

be proud and hold up the inverted cross, hold high Satan's pride

burn the bible, a book written by a lonely drunk whom lied

live and praise Satan or die for the other, its your time to decide

Hail Satan! if not your life is a sin

look torwards evil, release the demon from within

rid the world of those many non-believers whom think they know

commit genocide on those failed to praise the unholy, let their blood flow

let the doves drop dead, slaughtered in cold blood by the beloved crow

praise Satan to all his might, let out the hate and evil and watch it grow

Hail Satan as the God of nothing and everything

leave those non-believers screaming and suffering

bow down to Satan! feel the wrath of Hell's furios fires

believing in the enslaver of the human race can be dire

believe in what Satan says, believe not in the enslaver, the liar

hold high Satan's pride! hold Satan as thy lord and thy sire

do you really care?

as i lie here with blood pouring out of fresh wounds
i now realise that my time here on earth is to end soon
theres no pain from the cut, just the memory of you
also, the thought of my death being your fault is there too

i wish i was back in a time of no pain
a time where your love wasn't in vain
when we were happy to spend time together
a time where you said you'd love me forever

my vision slowly burns to black and grey
there was never a thought of how this could end another way
i wish i could warn the next guy of your slow poison to the heart
so when you leave he won't go the same way i'm about to depart

the visions of marriage pass my tear filled eyes
now i'll have another place where family and friends will cry
a painful sight of me caused by your beauty and your might
a lonely house with silence throughout the whole night

tears run down to mix with my blood across the floor
i close my eyes for im getting tired and they're getting sore
through my clenched eyes tears of you still run free
i just wish to know why you did this to me

my time is near i can hear it call to me like the way you used to
i can care less now if this act of mine will actually hurt you
i just could care less of your worhtless, self-sacrificng life
and i can care a lot less that you used to call yourself my wife

i see the end of my rope, my time has come to an end
these are my last memories to you i send
don't come visit me when im buried, like you care
because why now would you want to be there?

this is it, im gone from this place of Hell
i can hear the slow rthym of the death-knell
looks like you had the last laugh, like you said you always do
just remember, the blood and tears on the floor are just for you.

love this!

Torchured Living Souls (Intro)

For those on the outside scream

For those on the inside cry

For those few willing to live

For those many willing to die

Chorus

Bring to thee your crimson sacrifice

So unborn fetus shaped diseases

May weep for new found life

For those brave enough to face death

For those afraid of their own fears

For those never to have wept

For those whom freely lose tears

Chorus

For those that are loved

For those tortured living souls

For those whom are completely sane

For those whom lost all control

Chorus

This is for you!

The Love Of A Thousand Hearts

For the one with the love of a thousand hearts

The Goddess with beautifuly stitched foreign parts

What made thee so evil but yet filled with innocense

With a smile so mezmerized and eyes so intense

With a stare that trapped my love in thy's heart, a bareless prison

The same prison that caused this colorless, twisting, tunnel vision

For the one with a laugh like a silver bells

Thee whom took me out of hate's many hells

How did thy get a touch that effects men with hemlock

The same touch that always sends thine body into shock

For the one with lips as warm and red as wine

Thee whom took my heart, thee whom I call mine

Your love was the cure for my loneliness

Not a mortal soul can come close to your holiness

Not one can master the five fold kiss

Not one can fill my life with such bliss

For the onewith eyes that never weep

Thee whom healed scars so deep

For the one with the love of a thousand hearts

My Goddess with the beautifuly stitched foreign parts

Bring Forth the War

Heretics, fallen, angels, and demons alike, come forth and join the infinite war

come fight along side the forces of sin and obey Satan, Babylon's whore

Lies inside your head tell you to fight for the good, fight for the right

Dismiss the lies and fight for sin, take your soul away from the light

Bring the death of those who follow the enslaver, the father of lies and deception

Destroy those who would walk the light and use against us false oppression

Let them hear our organs and our blood curling war cries

For this is the day the deceivers and those against us die

The legions of the damned bring forth the new, but old, war

Our fanatkism will bring more killing, more bloodlust, all for more

Watch thier progenies fall from our forces of many creatures of Hell

Listen to the fallen prophets cry from pain under the Darklord's spell

Follow our vermifuge into heaven's gates, slaughtering the entire human race

Burn thier bodies under the false god's sign, the eternal cross of disgrace

Release the Black Mass on the place of "everlasting life" to ensure our victory

For there will be no more false promises, for there will be no more trickory!

good job beautiful...good writing

Originally posted by DangerousBeauty
love this!

Torchured Living Souls (Intro)

For those on the outside scream

For those on the inside cry

For those few willing to live

For those many willing to die

Chorus

Bring to thee your crimson sacrifice

So unborn fetus shaped diseases

May weep for new found life

For those brave enough to face death

For those afraid of their own fears

For those never to have wept

For those whom freely lose tears

Chorus

For those that are loved

For those tortured living souls

For those whom are completely sane

For those whom lost all control

Chorus

This is for you!

I genuinely thought this was great.

vast improvement.

omg *sniff* i love this song... i cry everytime

For My Fallen Angel
-my dying bride

As I draw up my breath,
And silver fills my eyes.
I kiss her still,
For she will never rise.

On my weak body,
Lays her dying hand.
Through those meadows of Heaven,
Where we ran.

Like a thief in the night,
The wind blows so light.
It wars with my tears,
That won't dry for many years.

"Loves golden arrow
At her should have fled,
And not Deaths ebon dart
To strike her dead."

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zLmspcgrYrY