😄 Ha haaa! EH, 'they're' is correct, it means the same as 'they are'. Their is tied to something like: that was their mistake, but in this case, it was yours. My last English teacher said I had the greatest grasp of the English language than anyone in his class. I'm sure that shows through in my RPing... doesnt it?
Originally posted by Jedireaper
😄 Ha haaa! EH, 'they're' is correct, it means the same as 'they are'. Their is tied to something like: that was their mistake, but in this case, it was yours. My last English teacher said I had the greatest grasp of the English language than anyone in his class. I'm sure that shows through in my RPing... doesnt it?
Other than that you are sloppy at times, your english is great 🙂
Looking into making a second character, but not sure what kind. From how I see it, there are four ("Five"😉 types suitable for me:
Jedi Knight (Master or Novice class)
Dark Jedi (Master class)
Jedi Hunter (Specialised Jedi killer)
Dark Jedi Hunter (Specialised Dark Jedi killer)
* ? * (Open for suggestions)
What is set:
- Female
- Smart
- Single
- Experience
- Well Geared
Help?
Its simple...
Above the planet, the battle was well underway. Turbo lasers streaked across interstellar space. Starfighters wizzed back and fourth. Explosions dotted the void.
The Dark Blade shook from a direct hit. "Captain, rear energy shields down to thirtee-" an explosion caused the deck to shudder "-five percent!" He updated.
"Secondary PSV shielding?!"
"Holding at fourty-one percent, sir."
"Bring us about! Gun's, concentrate fire on their flagship, continue firing at will."
"Yes, my captain."
"The Imperialist is losing powe-" The bridge was suddenly awash in light as the ISD-II expoded. The Dark Blade was hit first by the shock wave and several consoles exploded in their operators faces. Ovan Degstr was knocked down from the shudder and picked himself up, brushing his Imperial uniform down. "Report!"
"Forward energy shields down, secondary shields holding at thirty-five percent. Structural integraty on the forward keel is unsafe."
Degstr glanced at Juion. "Evacuate that area and reroute life support power to forward shields!"
A Klaxon sounded and the officer complied. Another officer spoke up. "Fighters incoming."
Juion let go of the hand rail and moved over to the tactical holo. "Do we have any available fighters?"
"TIE's sir. X-wings have all been launched."
"Where is Draken squadron, and Mynock squadron?"
"On their way back." The light laser batteries started firing at the enemy fighters with rather good accuracy and with exceptional tracking speed. "ETA: three minutes."
"Sithspit! Belay TIE launching, lets see how our upgraded weapon system can handle this threat."
"Yes, sir!"
Degstr moved over to the holo. "What have we lost?"
"Two Star Destroyers, and one squadron of X-wings." The deck shudders from the shockwave and the bright explosion on the horizion. "And a Calamari battlecruiser." The officer added.
"Captain!"
"Yes?!" An explosion lit up Juion's face from the view ports. "Report!"
"The comand centre on Endor was hit by some kind of RPE weapon."
Juions face was suddenly drained of colour. "Vassisk..."
"We have no reading. All signals cut off when the explosive hit the building."
Juion shook his head. "Ok, has the rest of the base evacuated?"
"Yes, sir."
Juion nodded. "All ships this is captain Juion of the Imperial Alliance. We are supplying coordinates. Jump into hyperspace at-" A massive explosion rocked the bridge sending Juion flying back. Screens of consoles exploded and screams followed. The lights flickered.
"We have lost main shields! Secondary shields! Communications! Port gun decks two and three! And main power grid!" An officer coughed through the smoke of the shattered bridge.
Juion's eyes watered as he stood up military stright. "Helm!" He squinted at the flickering holo display. "Get us out of here!"
"Sir." Someones voice crackled.
You paly the bridge crew, pretent to know everything about the ship and pretend a battle is going on lol, you can be a member of one of my Star Destroyer crews? Above is a mock up of two fleet posts by me 🙂