seems good to me
and here is the big boss
Name: Jacen
Age: 49
Gender: male
Species: human
Affiliation: Jedi master, Mandalorians
Rank: Mandalore
Weapons: various blasters, and two lightsabers, an orange and blue
Equip: mandalorian armour with modifications, jetpack, built in AI
Bio: he was born on mandalore, and trained like everyone else until age of 13 when Jakar (while on a mission) crashed landed and was rescued by locals. He discovered that Jacen had immense force potential and convince him to be trained as jedi, and left. He spent many years training and travelling, he eventually came back and rejoined the mandalorians and rose up to Mandalore. It was around 28 that he took corran under his wing and trained him into a fine jedi up until a few years ago when he was murdered by a sith. Since then he has focused on hunting down sith forces and destroying them. To cope with his recent losses he took up cigar smoking, drinking, and smoking whatever the equivalent to marijuana is in star wars.
Personality: cold and cruel since corran died. He is a military genius and is a skilled pilot and fighter. He either always has a cigar in his mouth or a drink in his hand, if he doesn’t then he’s fighting. He’s very scared mentally and physically, dealing with his leadership role, death, lost loves, and his addictions has led him to be very closed in. he is the guy that gets his hands blood stained so nobody else has to. And at heart he really is a good person with a kind side, he just covered it up.
Force:
Very well trained in combat, lightsaber techniques and force use, due to training/combat taking up a large portion of his life. He is none the less powerful and more than worthy adversary
Appearance: pictured, his body is very scared, most notably his face and the huge scar that goes from his left pectoral down to his lowest right rib