Jedireaper's Poetry thread.

Thanks I guess.

My True Love

My true love;
You are so beautiful.
I tell you all the time,
Yet you refuse to believe me.
Are you blind?

My true love;
Why deny your beauty?
Like an angel who doesn't want wings,
You will never reach heavenly heights.
Yet I hope you do.

My true love;
If only you could see through my eyes.
I would show how beautiful you really are,
How perfectly beautiful a being you are.
It's how I percieve you.

My true love;
In my eyes, you are perfect.
My heart beats faster whenever I see you,
Surely you can't deny how I feel.
My feelings are always growing stronger.

My true love;
I love you so much.
When we are together,
I am so happy and thrilled.
Yet we are being kept apart and my heart aches.

My love;
You know how I feel.
I think you are the best,
I will always be there for you.

I love you beyond any measurable scope,
Beyond the pure and simple,
Beyond intelligible understanding,
Beyond anything I can think of.

Put blankly:

You are;
My true blue love.

I love you.

-Kevin Traynor

no offense to those with hiv and aids

aids are red
aids are blue
have hiv
aids will kill you

david fenta-

Originally posted by Jedireaper
[b]The Screams

When the screams fill the air;
Only time to run in fear,
No other option but to hear,
We will never march from here.

We wait till daybreak comes;
So we can have another run,
While dodging death like everyone,
And watching time pass with our fun.

Our blood curdles from the fight;
When our bodies quiver with pure fright,
We hope the daybreak lasts all night,
While dark creatures come out to bite.

But night falls once again;
The screams return and cause our strain,
They fill the air with death and pain,
Life and death are both the same.

The screams.

-Kevin Traynor (Jedireaper) [/B]

I love this one,zack is behind me and he is palying gutiar which would make a perfect song if you turned it into it
=]
Its like wow =]

Love the poetry..keep it uppp 😄 😄

Originally posted by Jedireaper
[b]My Mother Drives Me Mad

God my mother drives me mad,
She really tests my patients,
She goes on and on its so sad,
She could out-talk a bloody nation.

I try to get some peace of mind,
To clear my head and think,
She never lets up at all in kind,
"Kevin, did you clean the sink?"

Its not as though she isn't serious,
Because serious I can take,
Its when she talks about stupid stuff it makes me feel delerious,
So much so I actually want die as is my fate.

But then again as I write this,
Quiet is in the air,
I hiss,
I can't bare.

My calm level is shot to hell,
I take several deep breaths,
"Shut the f**k up!" I yell,
I care less.

"You drove me to near insanity,
I wanted to break your neck,
So simple and easy yes," I laugh manically,
"To shut your voice from in my head." Of course I keep my thoughts in check.

"Mother, you drive me mad."

-Kevin Traynor [/B]

Amazing
love it
10/10

Thanks! 🙂

Playstation 3

Its made out of chips,
This sillicone beast,
Can pump out graphics,
Much faster than X-box 360 at least.

It sucks up the juice,
Its power usage is high,
An X-box 360 I have yet to use,
Still I cant decide on which one to buy.

It annoys me that I only want it for one game,
Grand Theft Auto 4 is all I want to play,
An X-box 360 I'm sure is to blame,
Because graphics are the same on PS3 I say.

Why bother, in the end it aint worth it.

-Kevin T

I'm Stuck For Words

When ever your near my mind it goes blank,
My heart beats like I have a feaver,
There is nothing to say that you dont already know.

You know I love you,
You know that my feelings are unyielding,
You know I love Star Wars too,
But I know that you love me.

We find it hard to talk,
But I just love to hear you speak,
And that works the otherway around for you,
I live for you.

You complete me,
You are my love, the only one I want,
I want no other. What talking we can do will come with time.

I love you, if only in so many ways.

-Kevin Traynor

very nice

Originally posted by darkxbox
no offense to those with hiv and aids

aids are red
aids are blue
have hiv
aids will kill you

david fenta-

Reply to AID's Rhyme

AID's is serious,
Your rhyme was cruel,
You make me furious,
I may just kill you.

Its a touchy subject,
People have died,
HIV's a killer,
Your poem was snide.

Sexually transmitted infections,
They aren't a joke,
How could you make fun,
Are you some dope.

People on drugs,
They have a problem,
Then its the results, the consequences,
Death.

Don't make fun.

A reply to AID's rhyme.

-Kevin Traynor

Kick ass=]

I Guess I Miss You

These feelings I have,
Are because of you,
I give you my heart,
Please dont be cruel.

You are like a drug,
You are my insomnia,
Sleepless nights when I think of you,
I just cant get enough.

I look up to you,
I feel you are superior to me in every way,
I want you to see me,
See me as I try and measure up.

I want to make you happy,
It is my goal to see your smile,
To hear you laugh,
I dont care about myself.

When we are together,
I feel we could do anything,
Like the world is at our feet,
Time, even, seems to last forever.

But out time together,
It never lasted long enough,
It felt like an eternity,
But passed too quickly.

My eyes miss seeing you,
My heart beats out for you,
My mind it knows of your absence,
I miss being with you I guess.

You make me happy,
I pray that I make you so,
I cant wait till we are together again,
[CENSORED]

I still love you.

-Kevin Traynor 😄

For my love, again.... Charlotte! xxxxxxx

Originally posted by Jedireaper
Thanks! 🙂

[b]Playstation 3

Its made out of chips,
This sillicone beast,
Can pump out graphics,
Much faster than X-box 360 at least.

It sucks up the juice,
Its power usage is high,
An X-box 360 I have yet to use,
Still I cant decide on which one to buy.

It annoys me that I only want it for one game,
Grand Theft Auto 4 is all I want to play,
An X-box 360 I'm sure is to blame,
Because graphics are the same on PS3 I say.

Why bother, in the end it aint worth it.

-Kevin T

I'm Stuck For Words

When ever your near my mind it goes blank,
My heart beats like I have a feaver,
There is nothing to say that you dont already know.

You know I love you,
You know that my feelings are unyielding,
You know I love Star Wars too,
But I know that you love me.

We find it hard to talk,
But I just love to hear you speak,
And that works the otherway around for you,
I live for you.

You complete me,
You are my love, the only one I want,
I want no other. What talking we can do will come with time.

I love you, if only in so many ways.

-Kevin Traynor [/B]

word on the ps3, besides, u can get gta 4 on xbox 360 too

more games for the 360 too

Originally posted by Jedireaper
[b]Reply to AID's Rhyme

AID's is serious,
Your rhyme was cruel,
You make me furious,
I may just kill you.

Its a touchy subject,
People have died,
HIV's a killer,
Your poem was snide.

Sexually transmitted infections,
They aren't a joke,
How could you make fun,
Are you some dope.

People on drugs,
They have a problem,
Then its the results, the consequences,
Death.

Don't make fun.

A reply to AID's rhyme.

-Kevin Traynor [/B]

oh, and alsoit's people's own fault for using the same needle as someone else, or not using a condom.

Thanks! 😛

Adrenalin Rush, then Suicide

In the heat of battle,
The blood runs high,
Time seems to slow.
Almost euphoric.

You feel your heart thump,
Faster and faster,
Time slows.
We just get quicker.

Your mind races,
It spins around,
Thoughts in total chaos.
The bloody battle.

People die in war-time,
They die in times of peace too,
Nothing can hinder that.
The fight.

To extend our lives?
No we shouldn't,
It would up-set natures balence.
The most evil thing ever created was man.

As time passes,
We too shall go,
I take my final breath.
A bullet then death.

-Kevin Traynor

😬 your poems are good, however reading them is a little tricky.
They dont flow as well as perhaps they could. but maybe thats just me, I dunno nice work tho.

I am aware of that, I havn't written poetry in 2 months...

The Rain

I remember that night,
All those years ago.
The rain was dark,
I wanted to cry.

I looked at your face,
Seeing you last breath of life.
The rain was heavy,
I wanted to scream.

Your blood was on my hands,
But you smiled at me.
The rain was cold,
I wanted to shiver.

I had taken your life,
Yet you were not angry.
The rain was loud,
I wanted to speak.

All I meant was to save you,
But your selfish pride kept me from you.
I wanted you to survive,
The rain.

- Kevin Traynor

Ah, nice!

it has a better rythem, and its more of a spoken word theme, I like the way that each verse is short and curt.
There is really good imagery here and its just plain and simple

I really love the 3rd and 4th verses, its something about them that really sticks in my mind.

This is a piece to be proud of. 😄

The Reborn Phantom

A ghost of the night,
This etherial spirit;
A wondering soul,
Lost to endless days.

A whisper of thought,
But a breeze in lifes passage;
A mere faceless haunter,
Not of mind but of soul.

A coming of age,
Did this person die before time;
Restless walking without retort,
The living shrine.

An end of one life,
A stoppage of time;
The clock ticks by,
And forgotten this soul fades.

A new way,
The path of adventure;
When sun's rise over fresh horizions,
The everlasting testiment of evolution.

The spark of life,
A newborn taking its first steps;
Learning new ways,
A baby growing in body and mind.

The reborn phantom.

- Kevin Traynor

Two poems in one! 😂 Enjoy...

beautiful 🙂

Ah, now you've got me! I cant quite grasp this one 😖 gonna need a little help, bit is cool I like mysteries 😄