My comic book idea {elaboration needed} =D

Started by vivando-loca2 pages

well, in the common sense of comic books, the story should probably start with the end first.

so like, at the end of the story, if the city is pretty much destroyed but he still hasn't fought Hades, you could have ares looking around, surveying the damage and what not, thinking to himself, and in the next frame, have him spot, idk, eyes or something out of the shadows, and he could think "there was only one thing left to take care of"...and then bam you start from the beginning.

you get what i'm saying? you'd do a flash-forward in the beginning of the actual comic book, then you'd go back to show what happened in order for the flash-forward to have happened.

so the order would go like this: FLASHFORWARD: Ares sitting surveying damage after battling all the titans. FLASHBACK: beginning of story, Hades bringing people to the underworld, whatever. Ares arrives to battle. Battles the titans. and now you've reached the same point in your flashforward. Now, Ares says "there was just one thing left to take care of" again and he battles Hades. the end.

you get what i'm saying?

i hope you do cause it's kinda hard to explain but i'll try again if you need me to, lolz. 😉

Originally posted by Moiz786
one with helmet

i like it...very sparta inspired

there's a name for your fictional city "New Sparta"

lol, yh i life the whole flash foward inspired thing kinda like the Ultimate Wolverine vs Hulk Series pretty cool...and new sparta WOW lol (city is set in present time lol)

urmm here is a draft proposal for ares (OTT i knwo..lol)

definetly ott. ^.^

but still pretty good.

as far as the plot goes (and when avvy turns to ares), i'd say do it during the final battle or one of the bigger ones, right when he's about to be struck down, he turns into this war-god, totally catching the enemy off guard. ^.^

imo that'd work best, lolz. ✅

but in his non-ares form hes pretty much a normal human o_0 lol

which means he'd just get struck down faster, which would make him ares faster. ta-daa!

😉