USH'S STAR WARS GAME 2008- Character Creation

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It probably would have worked anyway, me being the big softie I am.

Well in that case, not only am I always nice but I'll be nice forever more!

(ponders)

Let's see your xp spending plan and I shall consider it.

OK decision made:

Skills
Observation (1 -> 2) (costs 4)
Persuade (1 -> 2) (costs 4)

Force powers
Judgement / Cunning (costs 6)
Inner calm / Iron Will (costs 6)

Total = 20xp

All good then!

Spotted an issue! You bought Cunning with xp but you need Insight first.

How very observant of you! My bad!

I will Master Inner Calm / Iron Will instead

So noted!

A small update- mass simplification of how your Lightsabre scores are calculated, as you will see!

Krylo was an orphan who grew up in orphanages.People did not care for his woeidness and propensity for force powers this scared them off so he ran away to make at on his own at 12.A Merc by the name of Tiglath Pulsar picked him up ,knowing what his potential was, to recriut him to his perpose. Krylor went on many adventures with Tiglath and made hima wealthy man. As Krylor grew to adulthodd he started wanting his own life and the chance at his own wealth. Tiglath did not like this idea,if it where left up to him he would keep him on for ever. They had a heated argumenta and krylor force pushed him harder thanhe wanted,his rage got the better of him , and he killed his benifactor of all these years. Krylor did not feel good about this and decided to go into seclusion and figure out what his powers were and how to control them. He is now running his own show much stronger and in control of his powers.

Krylor Xan'ti
(Merauder)

Strength: 4
Agility: 4
Dexterity: 4
Defence: 1
Willpower: 4
Intelligence: 5
Charisma: 4
Perception: 3
Force Rating: 7
Force Attack: 7
Force Defence: 1

SKILLS
Lightsabre: 9 (total pool)
Combat: 2 (Fixed)
Jedi Lore: 3
Persuade: 4
Leadership: 3
Savoir-Faire: 1
Medicine: 1
Fix-it: 1
Languages: 1
Observation: 1
Survival: 1

Gunman: Guns 4
Both guns blazing,Eagle Eye,Gunslinger

FORCE POWERS: Push/Pull, Push/Pull Mastery,Lifting,Master Lifting,Swiftness,Master Swftness,Sense, Intuition; ,,,,Master Leadership,Master Charisma

BLADE SCHTICKS: Forward Guard,perfect strike,Cleave,block
COMBAT SCHTICKS: Power attack,Twin weapon,Whirling Strike

Smaill Freighter "Ravinous"

I look forward to being part of the game

Already PM'd you the problems I spotted.

Ohhh new player! Another poor soul seduced by the quick and easy path of the Dark Side. 😛

REVAMPED EVERYTHING THIS SHOULD BE IN ORDER.Even background story is better lol

Krylor grew up in orphanages.People did not care for his weirdness and propensity for force powers; this scared them off. So, he ran away to make it on his own at 12. A Merc(Darkside Jedi) by the name of Tiglath Pulsar picked him up ,knowing what his potential was, to recriut him to his perpose. Krylor went on many adventures with Tiglath and made hima wealthy man. As Krylor grew to adulthodd he started wanting his own life and the chance at his own wealth. Tiglath did not like this idea,if it where left up to him he would keep him on for ever. They had a heated argument and krylor force pushed him harder than he wanted,his rage got the better of him , and he paralized his benifactor of all these years from the neck down. Krylor did not feel good about this and decided to go into seclusion and figure out what his powers were and how to control them. He is now running his own show much stronger and in control of his powers.He finances the care of his mentor and friend which is rare in dark jedi but Krylor is not the average Dark jedi in that way. He is loyal and will always show graditude to his mentor.

Krylor Xan'ti
(Adventurer)

Strength: 3
Agility: 4
Dexterity: 5
Defence: 1
Willpower: 4
Intelligence: 5
Charisma: 4
Perception: 3
Force Rating: 7
Force Attack: 7
Force Defence: 1

SKILLS
Lightsabre: 9 (total pool)
Combat: 2 (Fixed)
Jedi Lore: 3
Persuade: 4
Leadership: 3
Savoir-Faire: 1
Medicine: 1
Fix-it: 1
Languages: 1
Observation: 1
Survival: 1

Gunman: Guns 4
Both guns blazing,Eagle Eye,Gunslinger

WEAPONS: Light sabre that his benifactor acquired for him from a Dark Jedi who called himself Darth Omnious(He was no Sith lord)
2 heavy pistol Blasters he wares in cross draw shoulder rigs.
He has a Mandelor Helmet(Black, Silver and red. He got off a vanquished foe) never leaves home without it on.

FORCE POWERS: Push/Pull, Push/Pull Mastery,Lifting,Master Lifting,Swiftness,Master Swftness,Sense, Intuition; ,,,,Leadership,Master Leadership,Co-ordination

BLADE SCHTICKS: Forward Guard,perfect strike,Cleave,block
COMBAT SCHTICKS: Power attack,Twin weapon,Whirling Strike
Merits:
1.Lucky
2.Ally: Bounty Hunter Bryn Koll: Krylor and Bryn grew up in various orphanages together and are close as Brothers. As kids they dreamed of being a Mandelorian so they did a Mandelor blood oath ritual. Krylor knows he can depend on Bryn when ever he needs him and his considerable talents. Bryn has a small freighter called the "Ravinous" that Krylor hitches rides on often.He kids bryn that in his job(Bounty hunter) life expectancy is not very long and he needs to make a will and leave the "Ravinous" to him.

OK NOW PLEASE APPROVE ME SO I CAN PLAY HEHE.

I think you may have grabbed the wrong template as far as skills. Marauders don't have Persuade.

As for Force powers, you have Leadership Mastered but you need to Master Sense before you can have that. Maybe Master Sense and get Master Leadership later.

Re-REVAMPED EVERYTHING THIS SHOULD BE IN ORDER.Even background story is better lol

Krylor grew up in orphanages.People did not care for his weirdness and propensity for force powers; this scared them off. So, he ran away to make it on his own at 12. A Merc(Darkside Jedi) by the name of Tiglath Pulsar picked him up ,knowing what his potential was, to recriut him to his perpose. Krylor went on many adventures with Tiglath and made hima wealthy man. As Krylor grew to adulthodd he started wanting his own life and the chance at his own wealth. Tiglath did not like this idea,if it where left up to him he would keep him on for ever. They had a heated argument and krylor force pushed him harder than he wanted,his rage got the better of him , and he paralized his benifactor of all these years from the neck down. Krylor did not feel good about this and decided to go into seclusion and figure out what his powers were and how to control them. He is now running his own show much stronger and in control of his powers.He finances the care of his mentor and friend which is rare in dark jedi but Krylor is not the average Dark jedi in that way. He is loyal and will always show graditude to his mentor.

Krylor Xan'ti

Strength: 3
Agility: 4
Dexterity: 5
Defence: 1
Willpower: 4
Intelligence: 5
Charisma: 4
Perception: 3
Force Rating: 7
Force Attack: 7
Force Defence: 1

SKILLS
Lightsabre: 9 (total pool)
Combat: 2 (Fixed)

Intimidate:3
Leadership: 2
Savoir-Faire: 3
Medicine: 1
Fix-it: 1
Languages: 2
Observation: 1
Survival: 2
Jedi Lore: 1

Gunman: Guns 4
Both guns blazing,Eagle Eye,Gunslinger

WEAPONS: Light sabre that his benifactor acquired for him from a Dark Jedi who called himself Darth Omnious(He was no Sith lord)
2 heavy pistol Blasters he wares in cross draw shoulder rigs.
He has a Mandelor Helmet(Black, Silver and red. He got off a vanquished foe) never leaves home without it on.

FORCE POWERS: Push/Pull, Push/Pull Mastery,Lifting,Master Lifting,Swiftness,Master Swftness,Sense, Intuition; ,,,,Leadership,Master Leadership,Co-ordination

BLADE SCHTICKS: Forward Guard,perfect strike,Cleave,block
COMBAT SCHTICKS: Power attack,Twin weapon,Whirling Strike
Merits:
1.Lucky
2.Ally: Bounty Hunter Bryn Koll: Krylor and Bryn grew up in various orphanages together and are close as Brothers. As kids they dreamed of being a Mandelorian so they did a Mandelor blood oath ritual. Krylor knows he can depend on Bryn when ever he needs him and his considerable talents. Bryn has a small freighter called the "Ravinous" that Krylor hitches rides on often.He kids bryn that in his job(Bounty hunter) life expectancy is not very long and he needs to make a will and leave the "Ravinous" to him.

OK NOW PLEASE APPROVE ME SO I CAN PLAY HEHE.
I will be waiting for the new entry

No need to keep reposting the whole thing when you're making edits.

Didn't fix the Leadership power problem, but your skills are good now.

And just noticed that you're overspent on Mental stats by one point.

DISREGARD ME I AM STUPID AND CAN'T SEE POST DATES.

DERPDERP.