poetry of xyz

Originally posted by Bardock42
Don't like it. I think you posted better.

Originally posted by lord xyz
Guess we like different stuff.

"She said thankyou"

When she cried, I died
When she was wailed, I failed
When she acted, I reacted
For she is who I love

Then pain she felt, I felt
Her tears were my fears
It was now or never
I had to do something?

Would I change what I did? No
Would she change what I did? No
How do I know?
Because she said thankyou.

Bit more alternative than my other stuff.

balls

Originally posted by lord xyz
[b]"She said thankyou"

When she cried, I died
When she was wailed, I failed
When she acted, I reacted
For she is who I love

Then pain she felt, I felt
Her tears were my fears
It was now or never
I had to do something?

Would I change what I did? No
Would she change what I did? No
How do I know?
Because she said thankyou.

Bit more alternative than my other stuff. [/B]

I really should go back to my classical stuff.