Ok after totally forgetting about this I've decided who the winner is
ScarletSpeed
+ Its definitely unique
+ I've always loved vector art designs
+ Colour Scheme works
- Awful lot of Japanese style text, not sure if it works.
- Doesn't have a clear focal point
Lt Valerian
+ Like the colours
+ Focus is clearly on the soldier
- Don't like the black squares, they seem to clash
- Looks overly compressed, especially around the text.Both of you seem to have gone for KMC limits, intentional or just coincidence?
The Winner is...
ScarletSpeed