Editing My character sheets
Originally posted by JacopeX
Name: RicardoAge: 16
Sex: Male
Alignment: Good
Weight: 150
Height: 5'8
Martial Status: Single
Occupations: High School Student
Orientation: Straight
Species (Type) : Human
Powers: Telepathy, Astral projection, infinite mind/knowledge, Telekenisis, Empathy, ESP, Superhuman tracking, Mind control, pyrokenesis, and Cyrokenesis.
Fighting Styles: Taijutsu
Gadgets/weapons (optional): Cards
Appearance:http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs13/f/2007/111/d/9/Hooded_by_slave_boy.jpg
Favorite food: Latin food and Burgers
Hobby: Hanging out, friends, soccer, girls, and parties.
Race (White, Black, Hispanic, Ect.) : Hispanic
Relatives: Later finds out he is related to King Rufon by billions of years.
Personality(Including Likes and Dislikes) : Humorous, Loud, Cocky, and flirty
Story: Ricardo lived a normal life his entire life without any problem. He was actually born with a special power with no known cause. However, he never told his parents of this power as his intelligence was in the same level of a professor at the age of 6. He however, never took school so seriously but tends to do his work normally. When he can and when he can't. He is however, a popular guy at school, known for getting all the girls (Mind control).
He currently works along with high governors who admire his ideas and seek his approval along with his acumen on predictions according to certain decisions that are thought up and how Ricardo can give crucial information upon the readings he has made within the minds of criminal tacticians.
Allies: None....Yet.
Enemies: None.....Yet.
Originally posted by JacopeX
Name: Donny (Codename: Mecha Blood)Age: 23
Sex: Male
Alignment: Evil
Weight: 205 lb.
Height: 6'1
Martial Status: Single
Occupations: Leader of an underground corporal HQ which has made profits simply with the use of selling illegal weapons and drugs as well as making great investments causing the corporation to spread throughout the world. Not only does this corporation involve itself in running the underground market, it also controls parts of foreign governments.
Orientation: Straight
Species (Type) : Human
Powers:
-Mimicry
-Manipulation of his own energy
- Teleportation
- Merge
- Psionic abilities/weapons
-Kinetic Absorption
Fighting Styles: Illegal Martial arts
Gadgets/weapons (optional): Two swords and a Magnum
Appearance:
Favorite food: Animals
Hobby: Manipulation, solving difficult riddles, walking, sleeping,
investing, and drugsRace (White, Black, Hispanic, Ect.) : Asian (Unknown of specific country)
Relatives: Killed them all
Personality(Including Likes and Dislikes) : Donny is a sick minded being who also possesses super human intelligence that surpasses almost every human in the world. Due to his wit in his trickery and mischievous act, he is also very sly, dangerous, and charming all at the same time. He always mocks those who think negatively about him and praise those who respect him. He does not talk much as he only speaks when he is spoken to. In the mean time, he completes whatever task he would like to accomplish.
Story: Donny's real name is unknown as he was an orphan throughout his life given the name of a past child who was very ill tempered and highly intelligent for his age. However, Donny was born with a special capabilities that only outcasted him from the rest of the humans that surrounded him his whole childhood. As a child, he was raised by no one and took care of himself trying not to depend on others. It did not come from his own mind but how he felt and his mind's maturity rapidly increased throughout his childhood to the point where he began to associate himself with older thugs.....but not any hoodlums but crime organizations. Donny ran away from the orphanage he once lived in and soon became one of the highest ranks of the entire mafia where he was successful in his mischief s. But around the age of 14, Donny out smarted and manipulated every one of the bosses who got in his way. It seems he has discovered many abilities and powers throughout his experience and used them as secret and lethal weapons. He felt unstoppable and knew that he would be fit as leader. However, he had many of the members executed as he knew they would not be fit for the new organization he will soon rebuild. It was all going to be built underground. And through the world will the society be in his hands. He has already taken over politics in several states and a few other countries but the fearful part was how gullible the public is. Donny has created a huge HQ of mass destruction, crime, and tyranny upon his own hand starting out as a Crime lord to a world class criminal and still being the innocent acting man he is in Real life to hide that identity.
But one boy was not fooled at all. Ricardo found Donny in an alley one night as he finally found the man responsible for the corruption that has flooded its effects on his prestige city. They are both very witty young men who fool each other and insult each other. Sometimes they would end up battling each other, ending in a draw as always. This usually happens once a week.
Donny has discovered that an interference was keeping his corporation from spreading and that was the presence of super beings. IF the Corporation was underground of the school, it would easily be discovered by telepaths. He had to take the school down little by little as he knew this would be the only one that was in existence to destroy his ploy. He has enrolled himself into this school under a secretive identity and take down every possible threat to taking down the head of the entire school. Once that is done, the School shall be shut down and none will return as his corporation shall continue.
Donny is only inches away from taking over an entire hemisphere of the world.
Allies: His Organization
Enemies: Ricardo
I must agree with EH..These are not UHRP style characters. I understand the pryo cause that is a mental power but it is highly unstable of a psychic to have both power..As a mtter of fact it is impossble from a psychic style character to have that power because unlike pyro which deals with atoms and their movement to spark fire Cyro is just the lack of heat thus turning it into a elemental/Thermal power. Also please explaine your tracking methods. Psychics are normally required to be extreamly powerful to track the way a feral can. Not only will you have to a sense of telepathic post cog but be able to pick up the slightest hit of a brainwave...that is if your talking about tracking people that have long since been gone. But if it's the normal telepathic way then cool
When I list the powers of a character, I tend to add the ones that he/she has not mastered or has the potential of the ability. What Ricardo has mastered? None. However, he is a superb user of telepathy, telekenesis, empathy, and Mind control. He is still trying master those skills and move on to the rest as time goes by. Hence why he is in this school...to advance his skills.
The status of Donny's powers....unknown.
Mind control is a form of telepathy...
It seems like you make your characters to be nothing but Swiss army knives in the sense that they are able to tackle any challenge any other hero or whoever would throw at them. Having "superb" mental abilities in all of those fields already makes him a huge threat and able to take on nearly anything. I seriously think you'd have to make a magically enhanced robot to fight him. He's like Cable on crack. I'd suggest for you to try only one power. Maybe Empathy only, or telepathy. No omniscience or infinite mind and knowledge, you can't be anything short of a master at your abilities with that.
Donny....yeah...just no.
