My demo

Ok I Just made this demo.
I'm not really satisfied with it so I'm asking for some suggestions.
The rap irks me the most so I'll probably do that one again. What you hear is basically the first and only take. lol

Unconditional Love (Demo)
2:33
Lyrics and Rap Per4mance : Thibaut
Production: Tssoom & Thibaut
K-Town 4 Life! Productions

Listen Online: http://www.imeem.com/people/fcSK9yA/music/RyK4B8eV/thibaut-unconditional-love/

Download : http://rapidshare.com/files/229509314/Unconditional_Love.mp3.html

Not really my sort of stuff but fair play to you...Anyone who's willing to create music is good in my eyes.

Like Jaden, not my type of music really, but it's interesting. I think you should energize your delivery a little bit, make it sound a little bit more passionate. I had trouble hearing a lot of the lyrics, but that was probably just due to the recording quality. Keep working on it.

Yo van Bruhhe lol

zo cool, ik ben van Kortrijk

Modern Times Ambient Groove
My Newest Ambient Instrumental Project:

Modern Times Ambient Groove (Xcerpt)
http://www.imeem.com/people/fcSK9yA/music/LfkBGgcS/thibaut-modern-times-ambient-groove

Samples:
We Made You - Eminem
Whole Lotta Love - Led Zeppellin
Oriental Hip hop Beat - Tssoom & Thibaut