Boba Fett Vs. Darth Maul

Boba Fett Vs. Darth Maul

Boba Fett’s ship touched down on a Coruscant landing pad. Fett emerged from it, Blaster Rifle in hand. Several Coruscant Guards approached the landing pad. “Halt, show us your identification” “Fett pointed his rifle at the Coruscant Guard “You don’t need to see my Identification” Fett replied coldly “We…don’t need to see his identification” Fett could tell the Coruscant Guard was intimidated. “Uh…move along, move along.” Fett was on his way. But where was he going to find this person? Coruscant was a large place, all one big city. This guy could be anywhere. “I may have to lay a trap” thought Fett” Suddenly, he heard Lightsaber sounds. The Coruscant Guards went to investigate but suddenly, a Red Lightsaber came out of nowhere and killed all of the Coruscant Guards. “Or maybe I can just follow that Lightsaber” Fett ignited his Jetpack and scoured the area, sure enough, there was a suspicious looking figure in black running through the city. “I’ll start there” Fett followed the figure while simultaneously trying to identify him. He was fairly athletic, and probably a Human, but maybe a Zabrak. Finally he followed him past the main crowds and into another landing area, this one for freighters. “Freeze” ordered Fett. The figure turned around, revealing a red face with black tattoos and what Fett could perceive as horns on his heads. The stranger lowered his hood, revealing his full face and confirming Fett’s suspicions. “Darth Maul. I thought you were dead” “Dead?” Maul’s voice was deceptively quiet. “Battle of Naboo” Maul’s expression did not change. Instead, he took off his robes and drew his Double-Bladed Lightsaber. 2 Red Blades suddenly appeared on each end. “Damn, thought Fett, this is going to be difficult” Maul lunged toward Fett with such fury it felt to Fett that he was practically throwing himself at him. Fett activated his Jetpack and began opening fire on Darth Maul. Maul easily deflected the shots. Fett shot a wrist mounted rocket at Maul who leaped and dodged that too. Fett rocketed toward Maul and slammed into him with everything he had. The 2 found themselves hurtling toward the bottomless pits of Coruscant. Fett tried to rocket away, but Maul was holding on tight. The 2 slammed onto a speeding Train* with Maul on top of Fett. The impact sent Fett’s Jetpack spinning out of control and getting wedged in between a gap between the train cars. Fett’s Jetpack had saved his spine but if he didn’t move fast, Maul would kill him. Fett threw Maul aside hoping he would slide off the Train. No such luck. Maul leaped back on and used the force to call back his Lightsaber before Fett could grab it. Maul charged toward Fett but Fett was ready. He drew his own Green Lightsaber taken from a Jedi long ago. The 2 proceeded to duel as the train continued to speed on, stopping only to duck various overhead girders. Fett knew he was out of his league, it was taking absolutely everything he had to keep Maul from taking his head right off his shoulders. Worse, while Fett was finding the noise a bit disorienting, Maul’s discipline enabled him to keep up his onslaught. Finally Fett saw an opening and kicked Maul hard in the stomach sending him backwards. Fett raced over to his Jetpack and put it back on using it to rocket off the train. Maul pursued relentlessly, now single-minded in his goal to crush Fett. Fett was actually heading back to his ship the Slave I, hoping to maybe hurry into his ship and blow Maul to Hell. Maul caught up with him though. Boba drew his Blaster but Maul was too fast. He sliced the blaster in two and force pushed Boba off the Landing Pad. This was actually a fatal mistake on Darth Maul’s part. Fett used his Jetpack to rocket back on the platform catching Maul off guard, Fett sliced Maul at his midsection noticing only then he had Droid Legs. Maul realized too late that history had repeated itself and his torso went plummeting into the depths below. But Maul wasn’t destined to come back again, as his torso landed right into a smelting pit, destroying Maul for good. Back on the platform, Fett got back into his ship, heading back to Mandalore, wondering just how much he was going to demand from Fen after his near-death experience.
* There are trains in Star Wars, there in The Clone Wars show, Volume 2, near the end.

Did the second wall of text really need its own thread? I mean, it isn't terrible (you do seem to be able to use the English language, which is always grounds for hope) but... 😬 Unformatted wall of text is eyerape.

Gee thanks, how about telling me what you thought of the story instead and next time, I'll double-space. Ps. Did you even read the prequel to this?

I did read the 'prequel.' I would advise against trying for double-spacing; use paragraphs instead.

Elaboration about the fight itself might be a good idea too, you can add detail to the moment to make the story more engaging.

OK Thanks, I'll try. What was not-engaging about the fight?

It wasn't not-engaging, but it was a bit low on details.

The 2 proceeded to duel as the train continued to speed on, stopping only to duck various overhead girders. Fett knew he was out of his league, it was taking absolutely everything he had to keep Maul from taking his head right off his shoulders.

That is a bit less interesting to read than:

The two proceeded to duel as the train continued to speed on, their furious exchange of blows interrupted only as they ducked various girders overhead. The Bounty hunter parried a flurry of the Sith's strikes, each fueled by a lifetime of hate. He backpedaled, seeking to gain some advantage, or at least make it out with his life. Fett knew he was out of his league, it was taking absolutely everything he had to keep Maul from taking his head right off his shoulders. Worse, while Fett was finding the noise a bit disorienting, Maul’s discipline enabled him to keep up his onslaught. Fett felt his concentration slipping as he continued to struggle against the Sith's superior technique.

Finally Fett saw an opening and kicked Maul hard in the stomach sending him backwards...

Don't tell us that Fett is outmatched, show us that he doesn't stand a chance. Details will always be more interesting than statements.

Fair enough. I'll remember that. I'm doing a story of Boba Fett hunting down Mace Windu and killing him

Originally posted by DarthDaniel1001
Fair enough. I'll remember that. I'm doing a story of Boba Fett hunting down Mace Windu and killing him

You mean Boba finding Mace and getting his head cut off? 😆

Uh no. Mace Windu DIES

Originally posted by DarthDaniel1001
Boba Fett Vs. Darth Maul

Boba Fett’s ship touched down on a Coruscant landing pad. Fett emerged from it, Blaster Rifle in hand. Several Coruscant Guards approached the landing pad. “Halt, show us your identification” “Fett pointed his rifle at the Coruscant Guard “You don’t need to see my Identification” Fett replied coldly “We…don’t need to see his identification” Fett could tell the Coruscant Guard was intimidated. “Uh…move along, move along.” Fett was on his way. But where was he going to find this person? Coruscant was a large place, all one big city. This guy could be anywhere. “I may have to lay a trap” thought Fett” Suddenly, he heard Lightsaber sounds. The Coruscant Guards went to investigate but suddenly, a Red Lightsaber came out of nowhere and killed all of the Coruscant Guards. “Or maybe I can just follow that Lightsaber” Fett ignited his Jetpack and scoured the area, sure enough, there was a suspicious looking figure in black running through the city. “I’ll start there” Fett followed the figure while simultaneously trying to identify him. He was fairly athletic, and probably a Human, but maybe a Zabrak. Finally he followed him past the main crowds and into another landing area, this one for freighters. “Freeze” ordered Fett. The figure turned around, revealing a red face with black tattoos and what Fett could perceive as horns on his heads. The stranger lowered his hood, revealing his full face and confirming Fett’s suspicions. “Darth Maul. I thought you were dead” “Dead?” Maul’s voice was deceptively quiet. “Battle of Naboo” Maul’s expression did not change. Instead, he took off his robes and drew his Double-Bladed Lightsaber. 2 Red Blades suddenly appeared on each end. “Damn, thought Fett, this is going to be difficult” Maul lunged toward Fett with such fury it felt to Fett that he was practically throwing himself at him. Fett activated his Jetpack and began opening fire on Darth Maul. Maul easily deflected the shots. Fett shot a wrist mounted rocket at Maul who leaped and dodged that too. Fett rocketed toward Maul and slammed into him with everything he had. The 2 found themselves hurtling toward the bottomless pits of Coruscant. Fett tried to rocket away, but Maul was holding on tight. The 2 slammed onto a speeding Train* with Maul on top of Fett. The impact sent Fett’s Jetpack spinning out of control and getting wedged in between a gap between the train cars. Fett’s Jetpack had saved his spine but if he didn’t move fast, Maul would kill him. Fett threw Maul aside hoping he would slide off the Train. No such luck. Maul leaped back on and used the force to call back his Lightsaber before Fett could grab it. Maul charged toward Fett but Fett was ready. He drew his own Green Lightsaber taken from a Jedi long ago. The 2 proceeded to duel as the train continued to speed on, stopping only to duck various overhead girders. Fett knew he was out of his league, it was taking absolutely everything he had to keep Maul from taking his head right off his shoulders. Worse, while Fett was finding the noise a bit disorienting, Maul’s discipline enabled him to keep up his onslaught. Finally Fett saw an opening and kicked Maul hard in the stomach sending him backwards. Fett raced over to his Jetpack and put it back on using it to rocket off the train. Maul pursued relentlessly, now single-minded in his goal to crush Fett. Fett was actually heading back to his ship the Slave I, hoping to maybe hurry into his ship and blow Maul to Hell. Maul caught up with him though. Boba drew his Blaster but Maul was too fast. He sliced the blaster in two and force pushed Boba off the Landing Pad. This was actually a fatal mistake on Darth Maul’s part. Fett used his Jetpack to rocket back on the platform catching Maul off guard, Fett sliced Maul at his midsection noticing only then he had Droid Legs. Maul realized too late that history had repeated itself and his torso went plummeting into the depths below. But Maul wasn’t destined to come back again, as his torso landed right into a smelting pit, destroying Maul for good. Back on the platform, Fett got back into his ship, heading back to Mandalore, wondering just how much he was going to demand from Fen after his near-death experience.
* There are trains in Star Wars, there in The Clone Wars show, Volume 2, near the end.

One question.

Do you talk the way you write???

Lol jus playin dude. Good story but a good old all american paragraph wud do it justice.

Sorry, I jusy wanted it to sound good