Jelena, you did fine- no riot started back there! Though you are pretty much perfect for that sort of job.
Vera and Iffa can both make straight Intrusion rolls for entry but they are hard and made all the harder by both of you trying it at once! They could really do with some outside aid (Iffa'd is slighty easier due to emerging from the water)
Slipping away is probably easy enough, Denz... but it doesn't help the others much!
(Well, we've already attracted notice. The big deal was to get here without a fuss, and we have; so far The plan was, originally, to do this 'officially'. So yes, in a nutshell, exactly what you said. Not every mission is cloak and dagger, at least one the face, this I think is a pretty typical Jedi mission, so I see no reason to keep up a charade. We're not good at charades, anyhow...
Now, if some who are in position to sneak on board do so while the bulk of us do some talking, that seems like a fine opportunity. A little surprise doesn't hurt. We don't want a major battle.)
Hmm.
What if Gallagher submitted himself alone, saying he is unarmed and wanting to check the state of the Senators? I feel like declaring myself as a Jedi will lead almost immediately to a fight but Gallagher doesn't really have any other skills for distracting or convincing anyone of anything. He's powerful in the Force but it's not really relevant here with the exception of tricking his way past.
Is it even possible for someone to get in position to mess with the camera?