the law of oaths ( character creation and discussion)

Started by Phoenix306842 pages

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So, here's what I figure.

Nate can't be the leader of the group. In general, he's too impulsive, too prideful, and too naive. He could be the strongest, basically he could be the "Naruto" of our group, but if so I'm going to do some character fails to ensure that it is more like the "Naruto"... which means when he starts getting all "I'm dangerous" Shota is going to do something like...

Shota and Annie sit in the corner while making funny faces, laughing while Nate goes on about something that they don't care about.

or

Shota slams her fists into Nate's cheeks and starts rubbing them harshly as if giving his cheeks a noogy. Her fists move so fast, creating enough friction to cause smoke to rise and finally light his face on fire. "IDIOT!!"

or

While Nate stands up and raises his sword into the air as if to act cool, Shota suddenly stands behind him without warning and brings her fist down, striking him with so much force upon the head that he finds himself embedded in the ground. "Don't make stupid claims like that without thinking, idiot!"

Problems with Nate (as a Character & Player)
If Nate wants to make his character all strong, I have no problem with that. So long as he doesn't eclipse the other members of the group, he can still be our power hitter. My problems with him have never changed.
>His actions are made without consideration for the other players posts AND at the same time the other characters well-being.
>His... What was it Xanatos called it? Mary Sue? Personality trait where Shota can cause him intense physical pain but Nate says NOTHING about pain or damage that was caused as if he's immune and then *smiles softly* (which is the common reference to a pain in the ass that thinks it makes them a hero) and goes onto a long paragraph sentence like the one I'm making now to get a point across.

Player Solutions.
1. So long as Nate, as a player, takes into consideration that there are other people here and doesn't go onto long posts that can mess up someone else' ability to post (like saying that suddenly, 2 hours passed, the first problem is tolerable. It can be seen as a character flaw how he rushes off. Shota will hate him for it, but I as a player will have no issue. Because then, you can blame it on the character and not the player.
2. If he wants to smile and be irritating like that, Shota will hate him but again, I can tolerate it. However, Nate you WILL HAVE TO LEARN to start posting the additional information from the interaction MORE then your little "reply".

If Shota punches him in the face and sends him into the wall. Instead of replying about how he smiled and said some stupid mushy stuff that took an hour to say... First mention the fact that he just got punched INTO A WALL. Mention that he might be in pain, mention what damage might have been caused. Do that first. That's the IMPORTANT part. That's the interaction between characters. If you still want to smile, that's fine. It happens. I support it because it varies our characters personalities. But then afterward, don't go on for a 20 minute long sentence about something pointless.

Oh, and about my last post.
Nate started talking about a lot of stuff... that had no importance to any of us... or was never even brought up. Annie never asked "Hey Nate, what's with that pendant?" or Shota never asked "God, if you're like this I have to ask. What's the rest of your family like?" And because of that-- Shota (not me, I have no problem with it) see's him as a whining brat who wants attention for his poor poor sad pathetic problems.

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A Look into the Mind of Shota.

Donny = A competent fisherman and ally. Someone who she can work easily with.
Annie = A cute girl who she finds herself drawn toward.
Nate = The biggest pain in this world. Currently, she hates him more then Dominus.
Avon = A curious boy who might prove himself useful.
Faust = A flirt who she does not know if she can trust.

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The New Plan (#2)
Hopefully, everyone will wake up. I'm trying to keep Shota out of the leader seat but it feels like I'm being pulled into it. Either way, here's the plan. Shota remembered about how Annie seemed to know where this cabin is and knows much about it. This tells her that Annie knows the forest well enough to navigate it. Shota plans to have Annie lead them out of the forest and then toward the next city. Not wanting to risk the chance that they'll be followed, Shota is planning false clues. A map made of magic will lead those tracking them by magic to it. The map will have them going a different path. While they have Annie lead them out of the forest in one way, their followers will believe that they are going in accordance with the map.
Once getting to the city, they will prepare to part. I plan on stopping this. I want to see if I can get Xanatos' character, Horus, to step into this and some how mess up their day.

What do you guys think? Can we make it that far without any problems?

I was just posting random stuff because many people are inactive and you yourself said that there was something you want to do and i don't mind being a Naruto of the group as long as it doesn't take a 4 year time skip of training to become a little more competent so sure I'm not really good at planing this stuff

Hope I didn't throw things off track with my post.

Need any new blood here?

Always welcoming new people so long as you're active and don't ditch mid way.

No Xan, you didn't do anything. There's nothing for me to reply to. I'm waiting on either Starry who takes a while sometimes or Nate. After Scen's character wakes up, we can get moving.

Sorry for the small post.

My eyes hurt. Haven't been asleep yet.

hope that wasn't to bad but i had to do it :d

Oh god... Xanatos just sent me here.. how bad is it... **** me..

Edit: ... Starry, have Annie pick up Donny. We're leaving Nate behind.

I'm sick so I'll probably not be able to post until I feel a bit better.

It's okay Starry. Take your time. I know how you feel.

Did you really want to ditch Nate? o_O

Nate ran off to train. He says he'll disguise his presence. If he knew how to do that, why didn't he do it before? It's adding something he didn't have. More then that, sure you can hide your magic and life force, but how are you going to hide the shouts or the damage that you cause during training? You can avoid speaking, but there will still be noise and I'm guessing in Nate's case something will get destroyed. Finishing up, "Flash stepping so nobody can follow or stop him" > which some how gets him to a random field in the middle of a forest.... WHERE IS THIS MAGIC FIELD!? why is this field in the forest, why is he able to move so fast, why coulnd't I have caught him, if he used magic how was everyone not suddenly alerted that he did use magic. That last sentence literally felt like it was posted purely to defy me and my disagreements with his moves. If I just "disagreed" with him all the time, I'd say "No" and just ignore what he did. I'm trying to help him get better at the same time, even if it does seem like I'm being harsh. It's the same thing he did in the very beginning when he rushed on Black and Dominus without a single thought in the matter. So obviously if you can't tell, I'm more then a little annoyed with it. Either way, I'll deal with it by trying to ditch Nate so when he comes back, he'll be alone.

Edit: P.S. It's so hard to be mad while I'm on KMC via my XBox. If I could do this before, I could have avoided that month where I was sick and couldn't post.

1 i can move fast by using my small giga aura and put it on my legs but i didn't want to put that all out cause it was just faster saying that 2 in forests there are many clearings where the trees aren't so dense I'm not saying its huge or anything its as big as one of those small pools you buy at the store and 3 I never said he could what he meant was not doing anything flashy that brought anything two us (Nate dose not yet know of magical presence that why he dose magic so willy nilly is because he doesn't know that that it could be a means of tracking and 4 if you do that ill just find the map completely forget about the plan take it and try to leave when the people he sent to destroy all of us attack me and i somehow win/survive in the end go to the town and somehow meat up.

... Xan. Xan, I have a great idea.. Holy crap.. Great idea Xan. *arrow points down at Phoenix* Xanatos Forever! GOOD IDEA HERE! MESSAGE ME DARN IT! >w< I have a great plan of how to make Nate the clear protagonist of this story in a "Good way".

So we are waiting for Scen to post on Donny right? Also I wonder if Reg will mind if I take control of his character.

If you want to, I personally have no problems with it. He asked if I would at some point but I don't want things to be left all up to me. Also, if you do control him rather then us making him M.I.A. then please make sure your active Starry.

Ladies and gentlemen, the nutjob is in play. Run.

still sick sorry guys...MY NOSE RUNNETH OVER!!! it's so gross...