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My latest story:
Wow!! I didn't know you guys are fanfic writers that's great!!!
I write a little fanfic myself.
I have questions.
Are ideas,characters,stories protected?
Can anyone steal them?
Are we allowed to have copy writing protection here?
My last topic was a disaster.
My honest guess would be fear and rejection of what I have came to personally
understand about Juyo and Vaapad. My truth.
I meant to explain in a poem about Vaapad and Djem So's similarities.
And the feelings of both Combatants towards their duel with each other.
I failed to deliver that vision. For that I am truly sorry.
I had time to reflect on my behavior and my failure.
And I have crafted a personal truth to Juyo/Vaapad.
Why I haven't put it on this blog,yet?
simple.
4letters.....FEAR.
I have several stories and a certain former Jedi family,who have practiced Juyo since it's
first creation during the first Jedi Purge. Not that incomplete version but the complete vision
that survived all the way to the Ruusan battles and after.
They were exiled because they refuse to give up family,marriage,children,their title of Jedi Lord,
and most important their right to practice Juyo.
Keep in mind My unknown family mastered Juyo when it was first created and Juyo has been passed down from father to son etc. for centuries. Noone has ever fell to the darkside while using
Juyo.
The Master during Yoda's ascension to Jedi Master was undefeated!
Even Yoda couldn't defeat him. Only in Force combat,Yoda wins.
But even here were Yoda reigns supreme in,even Yoda wonders did he actually beat him or did my character arranged or staged the contest to leave the Order and create his own?
When he left the Order he erased the complete Juyo out of the archives and left the incomplete
version which Yoda not knowing decides to take up Juyo to add to his mastery and complete ascension to Grand Master. This family shadows Yoda and his Jedi Order.
They would never rejoin the Jedi making themselves their sworn enemy like the Followers of Palawa.Sworn to keep the Jedi as well as the Sith in check.
They forged alliances with other Force organizations were the Jedi have failed and learned from them.The lightsaber is their signature weapon but not the only weapon they use.
My family has fled to a planet,lost to history where war touched it once and never touched it again. The Force is strong there, Even Yoda and Sidious doesn't know where it is. But they have heard of it. Well so far what do yall think? Does it sound like what you would want to read or
Should I join the rebooting line of Darth Vader,Luke Skywalker, Obi Wan and Anakin,again?
Or Chewbacca. Wait I thought Chewie was dead?
Originally posted by juyomaster34
Wow!! I didn't know you guys are fanfic writers that's great!!!
I write a little fanfic myself.
I have questions.
Are ideas,characters,stories protected?
Can anyone steal them?Are we allowed to have copy writing protection here?
My last topic was a disaster.
My honest guess would be fear and rejection of what I have came to personally
understand about Juyo and Vaapad. My truth.I meant to explain in a poem about Vaapad and Djem So's similarities.
And the feelings of both Combatants towards their duel with each other.
I failed to deliver that vision. For that I am truly sorry.I had time to reflect on my behavior and my failure.
And I have crafted a personal truth to Juyo/Vaapad.
Why I haven't put it on this blog,yet?
simple.4letters.....FEAR.
I have several stories and a certain former Jedi family,who have practiced Juyo since it's
first creation during the first Jedi Purge. Not that incomplete version but the complete vision
that survived all the way to the Ruusan battles and after.They were exiled because they refuse to give up family,marriage,children,their title of Jedi Lord,
and most important their right to practice Juyo.Keep in mind My unknown family mastered Juyo when it was first created and Juyo has been passed down from father to son etc. for centuries. Noone has ever fell to the darkside while using
Juyo.The Master during Yoda's ascension to Jedi Master was undefeated!
Even Yoda couldn't defeat him. Only in Force combat,Yoda wins.
But even here were Yoda reigns supreme in,even Yoda wonders did he actually beat him or did my character arranged or staged the contest to leave the Order and create his own?When he left the Order he erased the complete Juyo out of the archives and left the incomplete
version which Yoda not knowing decides to take up Juyo to add to his mastery and complete ascension to Grand Master. This family shadows Yoda and his Jedi Order.They would never rejoin the Jedi making themselves their sworn enemy like the Followers of Palawa.Sworn to keep the Jedi as well as the Sith in check.
They forged alliances with other Force organizations were the Jedi have failed and learned from them.The lightsaber is their signature weapon but not the only weapon they use.My family has fled to a planet,lost to history where war touched it once and never touched it again. The Force is strong there, Even Yoda and Sidious doesn't know where it is. But they have heard of it. Well so far what do yall think? Does it sound like what you would want to read or
Should I join the rebooting line of Darth Vader,Luke Skywalker, Obi Wan and Anakin,again?
Or Chewbacca. Wait I thought Chewie was dead?
Fanfictions are not copyrighted or protected in anyway.
Your story has potential but I think your patriarchal figure is a little overpowered lowering the tension of the overall story. Also I think you'd need to expand upon the importance of Juyo to the family to make it a realistic reason for them to have left the order.
Thanks I didn't want to say to much.
But I think I did. I have a reason in mind.
By being a little overpowered,you mean that not one single family member turned to the darkside ?
There is a reason for that too, I'll say they have skirted the darkside and the lightside not being
wholly true to either side. balance,something like Revan's teachings and something from Jedi long and forgotten past.
Or that I added Yoda in before he turned GrandMaster,right around his early years as a Jedi Master not so young but not old and feeble either.
The Secret to Mastering Juyo without Falling to the DarkSide,in my truth,touches on 3 philosphies.Revan's Philosophy or teachings is one. The other two,well that's a secret.
Thanks for the advice, I'm working on it!!!
No I mean you said he was basically Yoda's superior which imo takes the tension our of the story as Sidious is the most powerful force user at the time though even he's not too far above Yoda.
Ah I gotcha. So the story takes place between the PT era and the Ruusan War?
Keep adding to it. I'd love to read your story when you have enough of it completed.