Greatest Force Feats in the Mythos

Originally posted by Fated Xtasy
The fanfic section was blocked off due to trolls mentioning his works.

I asked to have it made public so aury could see my old fics and he said nein so lol. I can't.

No wonder. Curse you, DMB. Mongrel.

Reading some of now and I'm definitely getting major Karpyshyn vibes from this story.

Does it have eternal torture and/or mind raping? Because if not it isn't Karpyshyn.

Originally posted by The_Tempest
Reading some of now and I'm definitely getting major Karpyshyn vibes from this story.

Apparently it's not fully locked away. All I had to Google is "Darth Umbravon"

Learn 2 admin panel, DMB.

Oh yeah I unlocked that for someone in the hangout, Syndicate iirc

I completely forgot lol

Originally posted by Emperordmb
How did you get ahold of it?

I'm amazing like that.

I know you think we ain't nothing but mammals, but I'm a god. excellent

I just want to get to the part where Intrepid the Hutt gets r*ped to death.

What chapter?

I'm skimming thru this and, honestly, it's not as bad as I thought.

But it definitely confirmed my theory about DMB and his taste in SW.

@ILS: I didn't get that far in the story.

@Tempest: well that's kinda a compliment so I'll take it.

Originally posted by Emperordmb
@Tempest: well that's kinda a compliment so I'll take it.

"Taking It" could very well be the title of your KMC autobiography.

Yeah, it's seriously not that bad. You've got a lot of innate talent as a writer that will probably refine itself as you age.

But your interest in superficial fiction is clearly dominant. Your character is equally clearly an author avatar and, I suspect, a Gary Stu. You seem to be more preoccupied with your character's power than his personality. Lots of interesting psychoanalysis to be done.

I'm hoping to see many chapters where youhe gets his ass kicked and is outsmarted.

Originally posted by ILS
I just want to get to the part where Intrepid the Hutt gets r*ped to death.

What chapter?

iirc that's only in the old version at TOF. Which was much more... Interesting.

For now I have others to subjugate and bend to my will, Malvot thought as she walked into the forests of Felucia, but mark my words Carthage, one day, I won’t just kill you, I will make you beg for death!

I'm thinking about a thread dedicated to a read through of this. mmm

Originally posted by NewGuy01
EDIT: Just found Carthage's death scene.

I take it your character is the one Mongooku has prophesied as the most powerful Sith to ever touch the Force? mmm

Originally posted by The_Tempest
I take it your character is the one Mongooku has prophesied as the most powerful Sith to ever touch the Force? mmm

Spoiler:
Nah that's the main Jedi dude. There's like two separate prophecies

A simple no would have sufficed, ya prick. uhuh

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Originally posted by The_Tempest
A simple no would have sufficed, ya prick. uhuh

LOL nah. His is main character has... shall we say, more copious amounts of wank.