SunRazer
Back From The Dead
Revan was pathetic, lmao. Action climaxes don't make up for how dull the characters are; Meetra had virtually no characterization, and Revan, as a protagonist, was also sorely lacking in that area. If anything Scourge had more characterization than Revan; that's how embarrassing it is. Revan also betrayed how little research Karpyshynn did on KotOR II before writing the book. From pretending that tens of thousands of Jedi survived the Jedi Civil War when numerous sources tell us that barely a hundred did, to pretending the Sith Triumvirate was a splinter Jedi faction after the Jedi Civil War, to having Meetra Surik get mind-****ed by the prospect of not being able to feel the Force despite doing precisely that for ten years, it just stinks of ill-preparedness and ignorance that an author shouldn't have.
Path of Destruction was passable but Rule of Two and Dynasty of Evil were pretty substandard as well. After PoD, Karpyshynn began to sacrifice characterization for this sort of writing:
At the same time, the five red-robed figures rushed in from behind him. Bane spun and thrust his open palm toward them, lashing out with the power of the dark side. Like the Jedi and Sith, one of the first techniques Shadow Assassins learned was the creation of a Force barrier. Channeling their power, they could form a protective shield around themselves to negate the Force attacks of their enemies. But if an opponent was strong enough, a concentrated attack could still breach the barrier. Darth Bane, Dark Lord of the Sith, was definitely strong enough.-- Darth Bane: Rule of Two
I mean, ****ing hell. It must just be me, but writing like that is cringeworthy. It seems like Karpyshyn just can't pass up the opportunity to wank his characters whenever he can in the text, and he doesn't do it subtly either. It also reminds me; Karpyshyn employs a lot more tell than show, which is another problem. That amateurish, crapping writing I just quoted is pretty much all tell, and not in a good way.
I've only read Annihilation once and it was a while ago, but I recall believing it was his best work. Perhaps because not writing all-powerful characters gives him a reason to give us some actual characterization for once.