Please review my first Star Wars fan fiction

Hey Guys this is my first official fan fiction (well a few of you may remember my first unofficial one—check out my quotes)

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12606930/1/Anakin-s-Secret-Trial

Please go easy on me. Thanks! 😄

Dedicated to all of you but in particular Joker, DMB, Quanchi, and ZenWolf

And sorry for posting in the wrong section; I'm high af

Honestly Kurk ( and I'm feeling pretty honest today ) that was terrible. Both as smut and a serious fanfiction. Get some help, for both yourself and your writing.

"I'm gonna cum!"

"Dew it."

LMFAO

xD

Originally posted by UCanShootMyNova
Honestly Kurk ( and I'm feeling pretty honest today ) that was terrible. Both as smut and a serious fanfiction. Get some help, for both yourself and your writing.

I support Palpatine x Anakin and I loved this.

Originally posted by NewGuy01
"I'm gonna cum!"

"Dew it."

LMFAO

LOL yeah, that was gold.

LMAO AT ANAKIN ****ING SHEEV im dead good shit kurk

Nice!!!

The last two chapters were gold. Very good job once again.

Why is my name attached to this trash. 😘

What have you done

Originally posted by Beniboybling
Why is my name attached to this trash. 😘