Omega Children

Yo, I'm making my own comic. I've been working on it for far too long but I'm finally starting to get to a place where the fruits of my labors are showing. I figured since I've been a member of KMC forever I'd give little previews for anyone interested at all.

The story is that of a post-apocalypse revolving around a mist that has blanketed the Earth that drives any who breath it in violently insane.

Here are the first couple pages of the first issue, which serves as a prologue to the story.

Sorry about the sizing. BBCode is dogshit and I can't figure out how to make it smaller.

Here are a couple other panels I've been working on as well. These are further on in the 22 page first issue.

Some profiles for characters:

Main Character.
Rose Winter never wanted to set foot on the mist-soaked mainland—RigTown was her home, her world. But everything changes when she’s forced beyond its safety, thrown into a harsh new reality as survivors from the mainland bring news of a world she never thought she'd have to face. Unfamiliar challenges, dangerous alliances, and the constant threat of the Mist await her as she steps out of the only life she's ever known.

Sister to Rose Winter and 2nd lead of The Omega Children. Younger than Rose, Sara is the top of her class in nearly all subjects in school. She loves garments and jewelry as well as having a natural curiosity about everything from Biology to the history of the world pre-mist. Quite unlike her sister, she would love to step foot on the mainland to discover what things were like before the calamity.

She has red hair and tends to look far classier than most people in RigTown due to her interest in fashion of the pre-mist age. Her father spends lots of money to make sure she is as well dressed as she would like to be.

This splash page has been annoying the shit out of me. And I need to do it twice. Once in normal times and once later when he's being chased.

Almost finished with the Splash page. I hope it flows correctly.

I think I might need a bit more lettering to lead the reader in the correct order.