This story has been editted because of morbid content.
~Captain REX~
Alright, this is my first attempt at a short story outside of the ones they made you write in school. IT's a little on the R rated side, and written in a different style.
Enjoy.
--------------------
Spoiler:
Nobody knows why she had to make a fool of him. She just did. It's not like he was asking for much, just a simple date. But she went and made him the joke of the school. It's no wonder why he reacted like he did.It was fall. Football practice had begun for the players, and likewise for the cheerleaders. And that's what she was. Head cheerleader, to be exact. For that reason alone, most of the boys in school would want her. But he wanted her for more than that.
After practice one day, while the football squad had gathered around to make passes at the mini-skirt wearing young ladies, he approached her and made his move. Speaking quietly so none of the others could here, he asked for a simple date. Nothing more and nothing less.
And of course, she declined. Why wouldn't she? Cold blooded, heartless, uncaring... nothing was strong enough to describe her.Nothing could fit the personality she had gotten from her mother. The absue she was able to deal out. And deal she did.
Not a simpel no came out of her mouth. Not even an insulting phrase. In fact, no words came out. Just laughter. Laughter at the thought of one such as her stooping so low as to not only associtate, but to go to common grounds as this lowly skid before her. Soon the laughter caught on. Nobody knew what she was laughing at, but they laughed anyway.
And that's where the anger began.
That night, the phone rang. She wasn't home the answer, but her mother was. A message was taken. And delivered. She couldn't figure out why an extra cheerleader practice was called for tommorow, mainly because it was a saturday, but no arguments came to mind. It was one of the things that kept her happy.
The fog rolled in that morning, thick fog. She pulled into teh school parking lot, which was empty. Maybe she was early. The only logical explination. And of course, somebody else had to be there. Why else were the school doors unlocked? Maybe the coach parked out front.
She stepped into the air conditioning of teh school, removing her fall jacket. Nobody answered the calls she would give, nothing but an echoing hello.
Footsteps. And for once, they weren't her own. But from where? With the echoing, they seemed to come from all around her. But, in the end, they came from only one place. Behind.
Something grabber her by the hair and pulled her head back. She saw something glisten in front of her eyes for a moment, then something sharp run across her neck. She fell to the floor on her back, looking up and seeing him. Standing above her, naked. He would get his date any way, she figured. So she did the only thing she could.
She died so she wouldn't feel him take her.
--------------
So, what do you think? The way I didn't actually had anybody actually talk. The story telling way it was written.... feedback please.