Was It Love (poem)

im to deprssed to even try and put the effort to write a good poem so heres my poem its really bad so whatever yeah...

“Was It Love”
By: Jenny

The day I met you, you healed my broken heart back together
We talked occasinaly
I feel in love, love at first sight
I asked you to love me, you said of course
I look now, was it love?
Days went past, we thought we were on top of the world
Weeks went past, we feel head over heels for eachother
Months went past, we wanted to get married
I look back now, was it love?
There was one thing you didn’t know
I was quite a drinker
The school year had ended, summer was here
The alcoholic nights got worse
The drug nights got worse
You told me to be careful, I never was
I look back now, was it love?
Snorting
Smoking
Drinking
Popping pills
Why did I need it, I thought I was on top of the world
I look back now, was it love
Today Shaun bought Vodka
My drinking is at its worse yet
I chugged two glasses down
I was wasted
I cheated on you with the boy I consider my little brother
Now your gone
Gone for good
All that fun was never worth all this pain
I think back now
I kissed another guy
You kissed another girl
I look back now, was it love

that is very depressing

Most of my poetry is.

I like it!

And I do support

i dont..

don't like it or don't support?

last one

oh okay, no one is forcing you. Unless someone shows up at your house kidnaps you and threatens you too. Then you would have been forced to support. but that's not the issue

yea i know. im not against it,as long as some guy doesnt hit on me or somthing, i just don't support it.

boy, this is getting off topic

really? I figured it was on, considering it was in the orginial post by thread starter. But that was just my thought

oh yea. ewww

what's ewww? did you step on something?-see now that's off topic

i guess when i read it earlier i didnt see the guy kiss part. thats gross

Oh, okay. I gotta admit seeing that stuff still somewhat unnerves me. But I'm getting used to it, and I don't see anything wrong with it.

love is something that loves to hurt me
*slumps in corner*

why do u say that? bad relationship

ah poor lilmimister006

What's gross with the guy kissing part, my ex- fieancee kissed another girl and I kissed another guy so I'm not really comprehending???

Overprotective

We’ve been friends ever since the begining
Knowing eachother for years
It was always just us, no one else at all
Years passed we grew older
Grew closer
Grew to consider ourselves brother and sister
Grew and moved on to highschool
We knew we’d meet new people
New friends
New lovers
It was bound to happen
We were scared we would drift apart
Luckley things were still the same
We met new friends, still had nothing to worry about
Whoever knew summer would come and you’d become so overprotective
You called everyday and woke me up
“Jenny are you coming over today”
I always said “of course baby”
Sawdust days came
I promised the girls I’d hang with them all day Saturday
The day before the Good Charlotte concert
But you said “no”
You fought over me
Wouldn’t let me out of your sight
I was p***ed, I never break a promise
I never said a thing though
Weeks went by
Things were back to normal
I was over 24/7
Andi’s birthday came
You told Jessi I was going with you out of town the night before
Yelled at you and left angrier then I have ever been at you
Andi said “I was a bad friend”
I surprised her and went though
Made her happy
You called my cell that night
You told me to ditch Jessi
I said I was there for Andi and Danielle
You said “fine” and hung right up
You called this morning excited because we were able to drink
I said I was going with Danielle and Andi
You said “see you tomarrow” and hung right up
Made me feel like s**t
You called Danielle’s
Bribed me with those illegal things we do
I said “no, not today”
You kept going though
I said I’d try to make it
We walked with Shaun to meet you at the bus station
You just looked at me, not even a hi from you
I went to sit by you and give you a kiss
You told me it was my fault you were looking around for me and Shaun for an hour
I understood
You told me to come with so we could drink
You told me you only came for me, not for Shaun
I snapped now Hoppa
Made me yell, scream, punch things, cry and walk off
You made Danielle cry
You a*s
I called to see if we could work things out
You told me the only reason you wanted me to be around 24/7 is because you loved me and missed me when I wasn’t around
You wanted to protect me
You know how I can sink into what people say
You said f**k it
You do what you want
Now I’m sitting here with blood all over me
Crying
Missing you

Oh nice one, I like it.