Final Fantasy XI: The Fantasy World

Tela groaned as she was slumped against the wall. She knew this was it, but she was glad the crow had taken on darrien's appearance instead of Minsc.
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Esgal tried his best to explain what he could. "So can you help him?"

Ongolos
race:ark woodelf
age:19
hieght😖ame as legolos
wieght😖ame as legolos
eye colour:light blue
hair😖piked blonde
has wings and is a better archer than legolos and better with knives or a sword than aragorn

"its not going to be easy, he lost lots of blood"
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the crow smiled and started to look like Minsc more " are u ready to die"

"take this!!!!!!" ongolos yelled and shot the crow with an arrow

Tela started to cry. "Why do you want to kill us? and in the most painful form?" she asked.

the crow smiled " cause Altar wants it this way"
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Minsc came upstairs and was shocked to see his double

"who is altar?" ongolos asked

Tela still slumped against the wall. "You are not my beloved." and kicked the crow in the would be um...crouch?. Tears streamed down her face as she let the pain take over her actions.

TUri ran back up stairs. "An evil man who wants to kill us all." he explained to Ongolos.

the crow yelled in pain " u b****"
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Minsc tackled the crow to the ground

Tela layed back. Her vission was blurry. She knew at least her leg was broke and her spine probably in some places.

"o" ongolos said as he pulled out his sword

Turi helped Ongolos. He had to save his sister.

the crow started chanting " mocho brato var" , two dragon swords on fire formed in his hands

Turi was in awe. He made way over to Tela. He could tell she was in a lot of pain.

"flaming swords how nice" ongolos said as his sword turn into green energy "my sword is powered by me and my love for the forestand animals" ongolos said

the grow turned back to Darrien's looks and got into fighting position
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the doctors where trying to keep Darrien alive

Esgal watched worried. He didn'y like this.
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Turi growled. He couldn't let the crow's looks get to him. He tackled the crow. "If you were a real man I'd make sure you'd never enjoy yourself again." he said punching the crow/man-that-looks-like-derrian in the face

the docter's pulled out the serious equipment
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the crow just gave Turi Darriens sad looking and started using Darrien's voice and started to cry a little " Turi , y are u doing this..."

"don't fall for it" ongolos said