Final Fantasy XI: The Fantasy World

"my sword is like Tela's so it can kill the knight are you allright" Elvon said to Vlad

Vlad stode up limping his hand at the wound in his stomach. He spit out blood and his wound was bleeding he slumped to the ground on his knees "That swo..rd... It..s amazing" he said looking at the knights sword "It... Some..how.. Wounded.. a ... Vam..pire..." and Vlad spit out more blood.

"thnx and don't die on me" Elvon said holding both swords and both started glowing as Elvon attacked he cut right through him

"you will pay for all you have done all you killed all you hurt and all you have taken" Elvon said slashing and stabbing the knight nonstop for 5 minutes that's more than 1000 hits

"El..von... is... he dead?" asked Vlad spitting out more blood.

"yes now we need that cloth" Elvon said running to the end

Tela met Elvon halfway. She had the cloth in hand. "We need to get it to Vlad first, right?"

"It cant...he..al..me... God..sa..id...th..at...nothing..can...reg.enerate... some..ones..wou...nd..when...woun...ded....by the kni..ghts..swprd" said Vlad as he barely stode up leaning on the wall.

Tela ran to vlad tears falling freely. "Why? Why you?" she whispers gently carressing his cheek.

~I just found a big mistake the paragraph where I get hit is uspposed to be like this

"Fine" said Vlad as he put on the Golden cloth of Vigra and he got his strength improved. The knight took a swing with his sword but VLad blocked it. THe knight tried again but Vlad blocked it. VLad took a swing with his sword but the knights was as hard as gold! THe Sword didnt go throu. The knight turned around and saw Tela. He probably thought he should kill the weakest ones. Tela wass about 5 meters from him so he threw his sword at HER. In Vlads sight it was like slow motion. Vlad saw the sword somehow was remote controlled by the knight! and Tela didnt have a sword to protect her she left the sword Zeus gave her in her brothers house. Vlad suddenly ran and jumped in front of Tela and tried to block it bu tthe knights sword somhow broke his and hit it stabbed him right in the stomach. Vlad fell to his knees and took out the Sword which was thrown by him. Enormous pain he felt. BUt it did not regenerate

"I.. did...not...die...ye..t" said Vlad not giving up his life.

"I can..still..re..generate...the..wo..und...on..ly..slow..ly..like..a..no..rmal..hum..an" said VLad.

"I know." Tela said. "But you're in so much pain." she says. She felt useless. He couldn't be healed by her magic.

"vLAD you need to teleport us back there i can heal you" Elvon said taking the knights sword

Vlad gave his last strength up and said "Hang..on ..to..me" when everybody was hanging on he teleported them. When they got teleported Vlad slumped to his knees and fell.

Tela knelt beside Vlad. "Elvon, please save him."

"i just realized i have to reapair that cloth before it dies to" Elvon said

"i will do my best" Elvon said Elvon the started operating

Tela nodded. "thank you." she says still partially supporting Vlad.

~Are we in Telas brothers house?~