Final Fantasy XI: The Fantasy World

Vash launched off from the ground in a swift and gracefull movement, Once he was in the air he changed direction to his house and started flying there at full speed, Feeling the presence of the Crow getting nearer and nearer..

"Ok dont greet me.... ok so what sthe trouble"ragnard said.

Darrien started screaming in pain as he started bleeding all over like before
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the crow smiled " ill soon kill u all but i like to torment u one at a time"

"That doeasn't answer my question. Who is next?" He asked desperately as he tried to summon for hikari.

Vash landend right near the house as he opened the door to see the crow. Vash took out his gun and pointed it at the crow, THen he shouted "DUCK!

The crow smiled at Turi " well , u are next but seeing how is i am torturing by hurting your precious Darrien like this , this is satisfiing me enough, and Minsc is supposed to take care of Tela and Hikari but i see he failed cause of some strange girl killed him"

Turi already on the floor with darrien, cvered the hurting boy with his body. He couldn't elieve it. Minsc was a traitor! He could have seriously i njured Tela physically and emotionally.

Darrien was crying tears of blood
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The crow smiled " oh , and the little girl i hired should be coming here soon to finish u all over.......if that stupid show of her's is ever finished" ( i'm just going to make it that the crow hired Mai for lots and lots of candy cause she is so gullible and sometimes stupid)

Tela ran to tackle the crow. "Leave my brother alone!" she yelled.

Vash chuckled as he slamed the crow onto the ground and put his gun near its head.

"The cure please?" asked Vash.

The crow laughed " i would never tell u , besides, i'm already dead u fool " the crow vanished into thin air

~ummm i was just wondering is my char back at the temple???~

~Yes he is..~

Vash came up to Darrien.
"Doesnt look good..." said Vash disturbed.

~oh great well i guess he will meet you guys again later~

Tela cursed and ran to Checlk on Turi. "You okay?"

TUri nodded. "But darrien isn't."

As ragnard sat at the steps of the temple he started to think on what to do "I have just awaken from deep slumer and now i cant even think on what to do hmm??"ragnard thought to himself.

Pain enveloped Tela's body. She had never felt so hurt then when she knew of Minsc's betrayal. She didn't feel she was worthy to love anyone.

Vash crouched to examine Darrien.

"The golden cloth of sun healed Elvon from death... Maybe it can heal him?" asked Vash as he came up to Tela.

Tela shiuddered and her bottom lip trembled. "Oh, vash, how could i have loved him?" she asked sobbing. She falls into his arms.

then argnard decided to check on those people he met earleir so he called upon his dragon which he hasent seen in a century.