DBZ:The legacy

review: after reading this chapter, is giving me inspirations and helpful tips for my lxg story!

Go ahead and take things from my story.

no, i won't steal exact words or anything. just got inspired at how the characters went about gathering warriors. it helped unlock ideas for me. like to infuse my original fantasy/anime fic into my lxg story.

Oh.

continue your story soon!

I am out of ideas, give me time to think somthing up then I will continue the story.

alright then, take your time.

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Aouther:Well it all ends here hope you enjoy this chapter. It will be action packed! well see ya later Goku!

Trunks saw Vegeta lying down.

"?Is dad actoully asleep? Well he hardly did anything!"Thought Trunks.

Un-known to Trunks Vegeta was fighting for his life against Nappa.Vegeta could sense Trunks as he stared a disstance away from Vegeta.

"I feel........Diffrent.I,I don't know what it is! Could it be?No, I can't have reached SS4."Thought Vegeta"I,I would feel even more powerful.But how?Why am I feeling wierd?Why, I felt like this when I was one of Babidis gaurds!"

Trunks stared at Vegeta.

Trunks turned around."Hey Goku.Have you noticed anything wrong with my dad latly?"

"No,why?"

"No reason really...... I just wanted to know."

Goku,Who was very powerful, senced that Trunks was bieng troubled."hmm, Trunks has been wierd for the past 10 minutes."he thought.

"Well"Said Gohan"I think we better serch for this "Mystery" enemy."

"Rite"Said everybody

Vegeta carryd his own bag of sensu beans.So Vegeta grabbed a sensu bean and ate it.He heald quike.

Bulma wanted to come with them,so Gohan had a heavier load.Bulma had brought a camra becouse she was working for a newspaper.

"Reporters"Thought Gohan"Always whant to be the first one to get a picture of something big."

Gohan had always been desgusted with reporters. He had been desgusted with them since he had fought in the Cell games.

It wasn't long for Piccolo to sence a powerful power.

"We are close, the power is on the beach. I know it i can sence the slime ball!"

"I know you are excited but you don't have to go that far!"

"SHUT UP GOKU!"

Goku shutup. He did not like to be yelled at by a namikan.

All of them landed on a dserted beach.All of the beach house windows were borded up to show that they were to dangerouse or that there is a crime seen in the house.

Vegeta looked around. He did not see anyone in this beach,no enimies,no action,and definently no sound.

All of a suden Gohan was struck with brute force in the left temple.

All to be heard was the loud painfull sound of Gohans scream.

Krillin was knocked out by a blow to the neck.

Tien was kicked in the stomache.

All was left was Goku,Trunks,Vegeta,and Goten.

Bulma was hiding behind a rock and was screaming a shrill loud scream.

"SHUT UP WOMAN WE CANNOT THINK WITH YOU SCREAMING!"Yelled Vegeta.

"This is it"thought Vegeta"We are all gonna die. This is our last battle."

The same thought crossed over Gotens mind.Goten,without bieng signaled to, whent Super Saiyan and charged at the enimie.Goku,Vegeta,And Trunks did the same.

They all charged screaming and punching the thing. The enemy apeared weak. He was bieng knocked down after each blow!Finally the enemy attacked and punched Vegeta.Vegeta whent flying backwards with great speed! Goku was kicked and he flipped backward and lande on his stomache.Goten was hit on the side of his neck and he to whent flying only sideways flying.

Trunks grabbed his sword and made a charge slicing the enemy in half. He,Goku,Vegeta,and Goten blasted at the enemy.

the man was killed. All collapsed in releaf.

The day was finally saved. And Bulma peed her pants.

The end
Thank you for reading!Burp!

*sighs* this fic doesnt show the boring, repetitive action of the worst show ever made, as for being like DBZ i give it a 2, for being a story i give it a 6

Really.......? I knew I should have written it on paper first.

*shrugs* dont beat yourself up, its not like your getting judged from an actuall writer, and I hate DBZ so who knows, fans may really like it

lol.

I laugh in the face of the creater becouse he messed DBGT up.

I laugh in the face of the creator because he has to live with the fact that he made that peice of crap

Really, and would it kill him to make the battles shorter????

I know..."Next time on DBZ, Goku is STIIILLLL fighintg Freiza! BET YOU DIDNT EXPECT THAT BIOTCH!"

I don't like that narrater one bit.................He drags things on.....*Snore* UH?????Oh I fell asleep while listening to that darn narrater again!

lol, yah, thats so true...but he fits in well with the rest of the show, him being boring and all 😂

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