Poem

Started by drumsgirl131 pages

Poem

i dunno which forum this should be on but i was watching tv a couple of weeks ago and it just made me sick of how much terror and stuff is going on all over again. so, i decided to write a poem bout it all:

What did we begin?

Almost everyday I see an article
A story about this gnew warh
It breaks my heart to read it all
And I wish it were buried to the core
During these few years, everyone felt threatened
Because of this tragedy, people feel the need for discretion
Now I tell you I donft blame them, for feeling the way they feel
Itfs not our fault we react this way; we just want to know whatfs real
Now we all know that Afghanistan and America had obviously done the wrong
And anyone who decides to do this, should realize a countryfs not a bomb
That day it all began, was a day to close your eyes
Because all you could see was hate and fear, and all you could hear was cries
It takes a lot of power to take so many lives
You and I know that these two countries had made so many tries
Bombing and destroying is something they should think twice about
Making conflict, killing others and creating fear is never a way out
Hearing George W. Bush declare that we have war
Makes me want to cry, and collapse down to the floor
I think we all know itfs hard, to have to deal with all this pain
And most of us are forgetting, that we should be treated the same
I wonder if these countries know, what the word gcompromiseh really means
This is just discrimination and racism therefore nothing is what it seems
Killing so many innocent people is not the way to win
When I saw it all on TV, I thought, gWhat did we begin?h

that is really good!! 😱

very good. theres a tear in my eye now

awwww *gives Alias Neo a tissue*

thank you. * wipes eyes*

Do not hold back...let out all the emotion 🙂

ok then....

L😂L

👆 Well, well... Man I hate attention bitches... I'm good too you know - here's something I wrote believe it or not...

As I scratched my ass, I found upon it,
Lots of green acne, I hate to admit.

What was it all about, I asked my doctor, curiously,
He kept staring and saying "ah", as I wondered furiously.

I washed every month, sometimes even used soap,
I swear to you gang, I've never done dope.

So, again and again, I interogated my mind,
What was he to find?

He finally relaxed his eyes,
Man, did he have a look wise.

He asked me,
Will you stop ******* sheeps he cried out, slapping his left knee...

isnt this an old thread

Old? Antique.

If I start a thread and there's one that already talks about the same subject, Mr Weatherbee will be all over me...