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here's the links to a fanfic i've been working on It's called Sparrabeth Rewrites...basically all I'm doing is taking scence from some romance novels and turning them into Sparrabeth stories......

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3356896/1/ http://movies.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600090676
also here's a picture for the story
http://a922.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/10/l_d0b8302df317e28d45bae04fed69e5d1.jpg
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http://a825.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/22/l_55b88f68c660f28eeaa233f348e0c758.jpgWhere?Where?Where?Where?
this is what impatience does to people.....
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3g7W55Hc9jE
lol

Sounds interesting. I'll have to go peek later.

ive read the first link so far....looks like jack is up 2 somthin naughty lol

Originally posted by SarahB
ive read the first link so far....looks like jack is up 2 somthin naughty lol
the second link is the same story....it's just on a different site.....
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http://a825.ac-images.myspacecdn.com/images01/22/l_55b88f68c660f28eeaa233f348e0c758.jpgWhere?Where?Where?Where?
this is what impatience does to people.....
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3g7W55Hc9jE
lol

oh kk thnx

Okay, I read it, and although I liked it and it's very poetic and passionate, I had just a couple suggestions.

You mention something specific having "sprang." Uh, I don't know if you have experience in this....field or not, but I have and "sprang" gives the image that it's like a little spring, which it's not. I would just use a different word there.

I'm curious to see where this story goes. Is it important that she was asleep through most of it? Just be careful that this doesn't turn into a story about rape.

hey, charrmgirl, where did you get your sig? I really like that. Beautiful and for some reason it reminds me of Disney's Beauty and the Beast.

hmmm, i think ol virgin ears here will stay out of this one, hahaha. wouldn't want to spoil any surprises for myself
but i'm sure its great charmgirl!

Curiousity got the better of me, lol. That was very very very good, and I love how you captured the characters. It was perfect, are there any more Sparrabeth stories coming?