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The tiny jedi master's footsteps echoed through the halls of the Jedi temple. Yoda had been disturbed from his rest, there was a disturbance in the force. The dim illumination in the empty hallways left scattered shadows throught the hall, for once in his life Yoda was afraid.

"Having trouble getting to sleep master jedi?"

the voice echoed through his head in a low whisper, Yoda whirled around his hand clutching the hilt of his lightsaber and what he saw would be etched in his memories forever. There stood a sith lord in long black robes with a full helmet and cape, twin lightsabers drawn, the tiny jedi said only one word, "Revan."

"Yes master yoda," the whisper returned " I have searched far and wide for one worthy of my skill and finally I have come to you, I hope you won't dissapoint me." and with that he flourished his blades.

"For one such as you, time I do not have Revan."

"Master Yoda if you think you have a choice in this matter then you are sorely mistaken, you will fight me or i will slaughter the younglings as they sleep." Revan hissed in Yoda's head.

The tiny jedi ignited his green saber, "Then time it is for you to learn the true nature of the force."

With that the two master swordsmen clashed, sabers moving like lightening, Yoda sent a flurry of slashes at Revan bringing his saber high then faking downwards at the last second Revan took a step back and batted Yodas' saber aside with a flick of his wrist and kicked him square in the face, now Revan was on the offensive sabers humming as he slashed through the air, spinning he brought his crimson saber twards Yodas' middle, the jedi flipped over revans blade kicked off his chest and brought two midair slashes down on revan who parried them easily. Yoda landed behind Revan and sent a thrust towards his stomach but was sent flying by a chair. The tiny jedi master ducked as a chair flew over his head leaving a small crater in the wall behind him. He kicked off a flying piece of debris and sent a series of low slashes at Revan, who saw them coming before they had even entered the jedi masters head and deftly sidestepped brining his blades crashing down, he rained blow after blow on Yoda toying with the jedi penetrating his defenses time and time again, arcs of red and purple singed the very air as they flipped in deadly arcs with every flick of Revan's wrist, the powerful strokes came at Yoda time and time again but he didn't falter, he parried a low swipe and used it to propel himself over the sith lords head bringing his saber towards revan's middle with a powerful sroke. His arm froze in midair as much as yoda willed it to move but it only started to bend backwards, there was an audible snap then pain flooded his body, soon replaced by an intense burining between his ribs. Revan sent him flying with a burst of force lighting, the jedi looked down only to see his own lightsaber blade lodged between his ribs, it was the last thing he saw before his eyes clouded over and he became one with the force.

Good job. Well-thought-out. However, there is a thread devoted to stories. Everybody posts their new stories there (though maybe a new story thread would be nice, too - but perhaps excessive). Just thought I'd tell you - no offense meant, sir.

goodjob man

Ya dito. I enjoyed it

Thanx sorry bout not knowing about the story thread i'm a newbie here and this was like my third post

it's alright, we all had troubles back in da day

If Yoda died like that he would not become one with the force.

Qui Gon, got to his knees, prayed and then died, became one with the force
Obi Wan stopped fighting and submitted to the force.

Yoda dies in mid offence without any form of submission, no praying no nothing.....

He simply...dies

Originally posted by The Inkeeper
If Yoda died like that he would not become one with the force.

Qui Gon, got to his knees, prayed and then died, became one with the force
Obi Wan stopped fighting and submitted to the force.

Yoda dies in mid offence without any form of submission, no praying no nothing.....

He simply...dies

No, that's not how you become one with the force. Qui found out about how to do it and then taught Yoda and Obi Wan how to do it as it says in the movie Revenge of the Sith.

Yes and dont you find it weird how all three prayed to the force and allowed themselves to become one with it even if it means death?

Originally posted by The Inkeeper
Yes and dont you find it weird how all three prayed to the force and allowed themselves to become one with it even if it means death?

"Rejoyce for those around you who transform into the Force. Mourn them, do not. Miss them, do not." - Yoda

Doesn't seem like Yoda would mind dying

Good,very good,very very good,Veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeery good.I just didn't like that Yoda died.

maul killed qui and still he became one with the force

My bad i always thought that whenever a force user died they became one with the force and the ability to appear through the force was something different entirely.

Originally posted by Darth_Frobo
My bad i always thought that whenever a force user died they became one with the force and the ability to appear through the force was something different entirely.

Nope. Only those who had learned the skill could do it.

thanks i didn't know that

great story frobo you have a talent for this stuff anyway a story thread would be a gd idea and sorry about this but i think the story could of ended a bit better like after yoda dies and becomes one with the force revan turns around says another jedi master not worthy of my skill and walks down the dimmle lit corridor his siloet slowly dissapeas and a wisper echos through the corridors saying revannn

nice yoda thanks man

I think it's kind of corny but's it alright

Yah it started not bad but the ending was kinda abrupt, I've posted a jango fett vs. maul story in the storytime thread which in my opinion is much better.

Very good story!!!

I applaud your skill Frobo. Well done!

Good story, but anything that has Yoda dying just isn't right somehow. The greatest Jedi of all time simply CAN'T be beat. The only thing that beat him in 900 years was him giving himself to the force willingly. I know Revan is strong and all, but I just can't see anything or anyone beating Yoda. However I definitely don't think Yoda could do much to Revan either. Long ass stalemate I believe, with something weird happening to end the fight.

Nice story though. I especially liked the lead up to the fight. Great dialogue. I can almost see it on screen

Marka Ragnos and NJO Luke are both better than Yoda, I believe...

And Naga Sadow as definitely up there with Yoda as well.