Hypothetical vs thread

Started by Inspectah Deck49 pages

plastic man vs Mr. fantastic
(Manhattan)

plastic man walks through the city frightening the people of downtown Manhattan. with all the commotion he looks out his window and see an elongated man in a red suit. with the rest of the fantastic four on patrol somewhere else he feels it is his responsibility to save the day. he goes out and confronts plastic man; plastic man taunts Mr. fantastic because his power greatly dwarfed Mr. fantastic. Mr. fantastic then punches, though ineffective.

plastic man then envelopes Mr. fantastic in a tight ball in which Mr. fantastic could not escape from and he could not breathe.

Wow that fight was written really one sided ✅ Short but sweet 👆

thanks

Originally posted by willRules
Here is the complete story for anybody who is interested

Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Part 8
Part 9

They are all between Pages 31 and 33 ✅

I just read my Daredevil story....not to brag but.....

I should totally write Daredevil 🤘

Originally posted by willRules
I just read my Daredevil story....not to brag but.....

I should totally write Daredevil 🤘

😂

writing comics WOULD be one of the awesomest jobs ever... wouldnt be easy though...

That's true. ✅

I don't think some writers realise just how lucky they are. Sure they have a responsibility to the readers to tell a story that isn't immature but at the same time appeals to all ages. They have to write a story that changes the status quo drastically but not have anyone who dies permanently or they will suffer angry fans syndrome. They have to please everyone. They know that crossovers boost sells but they have to promote each character equally and tell a good story. They know that they are not writing a novel but it's not an art book either and so they need a happy medium. They have to include a moral theme to give the readers a degree of satisfaction but at the same time the bulk for the story has to revolve around men and women in spandex hitting each other as hard as possible.

But how can they complain???? They are paid to write about superheroes!!!!!😱

Originally posted by willRules
That's true. ✅

I don't think some writers realise just how lucky they are. Sure they have a responsibility to the readers to tell a story that isn't immature but at the same time appeals to all ages. They have to write a story that changes the status quo drastically but not have anyone who dies permanently or they will suffer angry fans syndrome. They have to please everyone. They know that crossovers boost sells but they have to promote each character equally and tell a good story. They know that they are not writing a novel but it's not an art book either and so they need a happy medium. They have to include a moral theme to give the readers a degree of satisfaction but at the same time the bulk for the story has to revolve around men and women in spandex hitting each other as hard as possible.

But how can they complain???? They are paid to write about superheroes!!!!!😱

yup... lucky so and so's...

So when can we expect the second chapter of your story? Surely you've teased your avid fans and readers long enough 😄

Personally I'm thinking about writing a several part story that involves most Marvel characters ✅

Originally posted by willRules
So when can we expect the second chapter of your story? Surely you've teased your avid fans and readers long enough 😄

Personally I'm thinking about writing a several part story that involves most Marvel characters ✅

i'm editing the final draft as we speak... tomorrow, tuesday at the latest...

Cool can't wait 😄

The Marvel Universe..................The End?
PART 1
Dr Doom vs The X-men

Halfway across the Universe Galactus attempts to absorb an apparently lifeless planet. Just as he activates his machine, Galactus' sensors pick up one extra being on the planet. Galactus turns his gaze away from the machine and looks a few thousand miles across the planet, near to a huge crater. He sees a caped man working at a machine before plugging himself into the machine.

Galactus powers his planet draining device and begins to remove the essential energies from the planet he requires. However as he does this Galactus becomes weaker and weaker and is forced to flee. Meanwhile the man at the machine feeds off the energies Galactus required as well as some of Galactus' own power. The man now radiates massive amounts of the power cosmic. Content he flies away from the planet.

Count Nefaria approaches Earth prepared for revenge.

In Latveria Dr Doom analyzes one of his telescopic machines. He gasps in fear.
"Nefaria is coming. I need to find her. She will stop him."

The following day, at the X-mansion, Shadowcat and Colossus are alone together on the X-mansion grounds. Their tranquillity is disturbed by an energy blast which hits Shadowcat, knocking her out. Full of rage, Colossus charges towards the source, an army of attacking Doombots, led by Dr Doom.

Colossus runs straight at Doom who ignores him. A Doombot steps in front of Colossus and opens fire with energy beams. The beams bounce off Colossus who swats the Doombot away. However around thirty Doombots surround Colossus, distracting him. Meanwhile Doom approaches the mansion front door.

The door opens and Emma Frost walks towards Doom. She attempts to telepathically shut down Doom's mind but Doom is wearing telepathy blockers. He punches Emma before she can turn to diamond form, knocking her out. As Doom enters the hallway, Polaris attempts to control his armour with her powers. She begins to twist the metal on the very edges of the outer layer but Doom grabs her by the arm and sends an electrical charge through her. Doombots swarm the mansion.

In Cerebra room, Xavier removes the telepathic helmet.
"Oh no" he exclaims as he send a telepathic warning to everyone in the mansion.

Doom walks down the Hall towards the lift, flanked by Doombots. The lift opens an optic blast hits several doombots, destroying them. Cyclops dodges a Doombots blast and returns the fire until Doom hits him from behind with a blast of Energy from his hands.

Doom descends to the sub-level in the lift and presses a button on his armour, shutting down the mansion defences with an EMP blast. Exiting the lift, he walks towards cerebra. Wolverine blocks his path. Before Doom can reach him, Beast leaps out from a side room, his lab. Doom grabs Beast by the throat and slams him into the ground. Doom walks towards the cerebra doors. Wolverine leaps forward and swipes at Doom's force-field with his claws. As if Logan were a minor irritant, Doom swats him away with eh back of his hand, sending the mutant flying into a wall.

Ripping open the Cerebra doors, Doom walks along the narrow platform towards Xavier at the end.

"Where is she Xavier? Find her using Cerebra, tell me where she is or die." Doom states.
"Who?" Xavier asks hesitantly.
"Jean Grey."
"Doom......Jean is dead."

"NO!" Doom shouts firing an energy blast at Xavier, knocking him out of his wheelchair and off the Cerebra platform.

Doom turns to leave the mansion.

"If Phoenix is dead, then so is everyone............"

PART 2 (SHIELD vs Nefaria) coming soon..........

The Marvel Universe..................The End?
PART 2
SHIELD vs Nefaria

A SHIELD agent gasps in horror after reading the feedback from a SHIELD satellite orbiting the Earth.

"SIR, COMMANDER FURY!!! I HAVE BAD NEWS!!!" the SHIELD agent shouts.

Fury reads the handout. An unidentified flying object about the size of a man is heading for Earth at an alarming speed. It will crash in the heart of New York's Financial district. In 7 minutes.

Fury shouts orders to the crew piloting the Helicarrier to move it in the path of the oncoming threat.

Count Nefaria enters the Earth's atmosphere at incredible speeds, crackling with energy, more powerful than ever before. He smiles as he flies towards New York. He sees the Helicarrier flying, defiant, in his path.

He flies straight through the middle of the Helicarrier without slowing down and straight out the other side in a split second. This causes a small explosion on the Helicarrier, killing tens of SHIELD agents. Fury is distraught. He alerts the Avengers to the threat.

Count Nefaria crashes into New York's financial district, destroying a couple of buildings and killing many people. As he emerges from the crater he smiles.....

"This should get their attention."

Bullets hit Nefaria's face and bounce harmlessly off. Annoyed he raises his head to see several SHIELD helicopters circling him. An energy blast from his eyes destroys the helicopter, where the remains crash into the side of a building. He then turns to face an approaching SHIELD tank. Laughing, he grabs the turret and uses it to throw the tank into one of the helicopters.

Nefaria's amusement is punctuated by Thor's hammer which hits him on the back of the head. Falling to the ground, nefaria scrambles to his feet.

Thor, Quicksilver, Scarlet Witch, Captain America, the thing, the Human Torch and Spiderman close in on Nefaria.

Smiling, Count Nefaria fires another blast from his eyes.........

PART 3 (Count Nefaria vs Thor, Quicksilver, Scarlet Witch, Captain America, the thing, the Human Torch and Spiderman) coming soon.........

The Marvel Universe..................The End?
PART 3
Count Nefaria vs Thor, Quicksilver, Scarlet Witch, Captain America, the Thing, the Human Torch and Spider-man

Thor, Quicksilver, Scarlet Witch, Captain America, The thing, the Human Torch and Spider-man close in on Nefaria. Smiling, Count Nefaria fires another blast from his eyes. The blast almost hits Quicksilver who easily dodges with his super speed. As some rubble sprays up from the blast, Cap pushes Scarlet Witch behind himself as he raises his shield to deflect the debris.

Unfortunately Nefaria flies forward grabbing Cap by the throat, causing Scarlet Witch to scream. Nefaria flies several feet above the heroes, holding Captain America by the throat, slowly choking him......

"Stop. Do not fight me. Surrender and I will spare the Captain."

Just as Nefaria finishes his sentence he feels a large gust of wind sweep over his invulnerable form. Quicksilver has grabbed Cap and freed him.

Angry, Nefaria fires a beam of cosmic energy from his hands. The beam hits the Thing in his chest. The Thing is sent flying back by the force and hits a car opposite. Nefaria turns his attention to Thor but receives a face full of webbing. Enraged, nefaria rips the webbing from his face and fires a blast at Spider-man who back flips out of the way. He fires a second blast which Spidey not only evades but leaps forwards, punching Nefaria in the head. The punch breaks Spidey's hand, causing him immense pain and allows Nefaria to hit Spidey with an energy blast, knocking him out. Spidey collapses to the ground like a rag-doll.

Thor flies forward hitting Nefaria with his hammer. He attempts a second swipe but Nefaria grabs the Hammer. As he grabs the hammer, the Human Torch hits nefaria with a fireball to his back. Nefaria grabs the Human Torch by his ankle, ignoring the flames which do not affect him.

Nefaria throws the Torch hard at the ground below. Torch hits the ground face first and his neck makes a snapping sound. Immediately Johnny reverts to his non flame form where he lays, motionless......dead.

"NOOOOOOOO!!!!" The Thing shouts running towards the Torch and cradling him in his arms for a second before turning to Nefaria.

Nefaria collects cosmic energy in his hands ready to blast the Thing but Captain America's shield hits him in the face, annoying him. Nefaria attempts to blast Cap but Thor flies in the way and absorbs the blast using his hammer.

Scarlet Witch fires a magic hex bolt at Nefaria. The bolt hurts him and he screams in agony. Falling to the floor, the Thing seizes the opportunity to punch him, knocking Nefaria into the side of a car. He attempts to punch nefaria again but Nefaria grabs the Thing's arm and rips it off. The Thing screams out in agony and writhes about on the floor. Nefaria grabs one of the SHIELD tanks he had faced earlier and is about to drop it on the Thing when Thor's hammer hits it, blasting the tank to smithereens.

Nefaria is hit again and again at super speed by Quicksilver until he fires a small omnidirectional blast that hits Pietro, the force of the blast knocking him into the side of an office building which knocks Quicksilver out. Scarlet Witch attempts to hit Nefaria with a blast but Nefaria is too quick and he flies towards her, grabbing her hands and breaking them whilst laughing. Captain America runs forward but Nefaria hits Cap with the back of his hand, knocking Cap to the ground. He then turns his attention away from Scarlet Witch and kicks Cap in the ribs, the force, breaking several of them.

Cap lays on the floor unconscious and Nefaria stands over him, ready to crush his skull with his foot when Thor flies straight into him, knocking him into a building.

"I shall kill you Thor." Nefaria grins..........

PART 4 (Count Nefaria vs Thor) coming soon......

Nick Fury vs Deathstroke

Location: Streets of New York

With the streets being deserted as gunfire ensues between the 2 combatants Deathstroke ducks a bullet and fires back hitting Fury's gun out of his hand Deathstroke then jump kicks towards Nick Fury who immediately front flips forwad and sends the heel of his foot into Deathstrokes stomach knocking him on the ground. Slade then grabs his leg and wraps his own legs around Nick Fury's legs knocking them both on there backs they both roll around on the ground until they are both loose and get up with Nick Fury getting punched into the face and gets knocked into a car hood. Slade runs at him about to slam his fists into Nick Fury's chest until he gets kicked in the chest and flipped into a building behind him. Nick springs up seeing a quick recovering Slade jump from the other side of the car forearm smashing Nick Fury into the ground. Nick Fury slams both his fists into Deathstrokes ears and Slade stands up ensued in pain Fury stands up uppercutting Slade but Slade immediately returns with a kick to the groin and stabs Nick Fury with a tranquilizer dart immediately knocking him out. When suddenly a round disc hits Deathstrokes face and removes his mask our Star Spangled hero Captain America stands over Deathstroke with a blood rage thinking Nick Fury to be dead.

Wait next time True Believers for it is Deathstroke vs Captain America.

Originally posted by willRules
Cool can't wait 😄

sorry about the delay, had a personal emergency needed taking care of... i'll have parts 2 AND 3 up by the weekend...

Originally posted by Fanboy
Nick Fury vs Deathstroke

Location: Streets of New York

With the streets being deserted as gunfire ensues between the 2 combatants Deathstroke ducks a bullet and fires back hitting Fury's gun out of his hand Deathstroke then jump kicks towards Nick Fury who immediately front flips forwad and sends the heel of his foot into Deathstrokes stomach knocking him on the ground. Slade then grabs his leg and wraps his own legs around Nick Fury's legs knocking them both on there backs they both roll around on the ground until they are both loose and get up with Nick Fury getting punched into the face and gets knocked into a car hood. Slade runs at him about to slam his fists into Nick Fury's chest until he gets kicked in the chest and flipped into a building behind him. Nick springs up seeing a quick recovering Slade jump from the other side of the car forearm smashing Nick Fury into the ground. Nick Fury slams both his fists into Deathstrokes ears and Slade stands up ensued in pain Fury stands up uppercutting Slade but Slade immediately returns with a kick to the groin and stabs Nick Fury with a tranquilizer dart immediately knocking him out. When suddenly a round disc hits Deathstrokes face and removes his mask our Star Spangled hero Captain America stands over Deathstroke with a blood rage thinking Nick Fury to be dead.

Wait next time True Believers for it is Deathstroke vs Captain America.

sweet!!!! 👆

Originally posted by pr1983
sorry about the delay, had a personal emergency needed taking care of... i'll have parts 2 AND 3 up by the weekend...

Hey, no pressure, it's your story, take your time ✅

i just dont like saying i'll do something and then not doing it... 😛

Captain America vs Deathstroke

Location: Same place as last time.

As Deathstroke charges Catpain America he is stopped with a shield to the face and a kick in the stomach sending him into a wall. Deathstroke gets out his sword that stops Captain Americas charge but the sword gets broken and Deathstroke slaps Captain America back with the broken sword and jumps out at Captain America who backflips and drop kicks Deathstroke in the face. They both fall on the ground immediately getting up Captain America takes the shield and throws the at Wade who front flips over it and grapples Captain Americas head and backflips sending Captain America out of the building. Steve falls on his back and turns seeing his shield being picked up. He immediately jumps forwad spin kicking the Shield out of Deathstrokes hand and pimp slaps him Deathstroke returns punching him back and in the stomach with both his hands getting ready for an axe handle to the back Captain America immediately grabs both his legs and swings Deathstrokes face into the side of the building and out into the streets where a passing by van takes Nick Fury's unconscious body and it runs down Deathstroke before he lands and knocks him away into the ground and his body gets run over by the fan. Deathstroke lays there moaning when suddenly a shield smashes into his face drilling the back of his head into the ground knocking Deathstroke out. Captain America immediately chases the van.

Captain America wins.

Next up who in the hell wanted Nick Fury?

Captain America vs Ninja and Samurai in a van.

Location: Random places in New York if you remember from part 2 he is chasing a van.

Captain America leaps at the van with a running start front flipping towards it he suddenly stops two shurikens that immediately shoot out of the sun roof and bounce off Captain Americas shield. When he lands behind the car suddenly a Samurai sword swipes at Captain Americas head who ducks it and is suddenly kicked in the face by a ninja. Captain America lands against a car and swipes his shield in the face of the Ninja while the Samurai comes at Captain America with an over head slash he is immediately uppercuts the Samurai away while the Ninja comes at Captain America with a stabbing motion when suddenly Captain America steps aside slashing his shield into the sword cutting it down and runs it into the Ninja's throat knocking him out and he turns to back hand the Samurai and raises his shield and jump towards the Samurai slamming his head into the concrete. The van speeds forward with Captain America keeps moving forward following the tracks when suddenly Spider Woman Iron Fist, Ronin and Spider-man come into the fray helping Captain America out.

To be Continued.

Brilliant writing willrules and Mrpaul.