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"Get that out of my face." "It's not in your face, it's in my hand." "Get what's in your hand out of my face." <3 set by yours truly
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"Get that out of my face." "It's not in your face, it's in my hand." "Get what's in your hand out of my face." <3 set by yours truly
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"Get that out of my face." "It's not in your face, it's in my hand." "Get what's in your hand out of my face." <3 set by yours truly
fine. And I have written a fanfic about Elisabeth feelings/thoughts about then time, after jack sailed away and before the wedding to Will. It's not as good as it should be, but I want to hear some critics, opinions,...
Fanfic about Liz feelings after Jack sails away (Movie 1)
So it was the same day, after Jack escaped the gallows and sails away. She has chose Will, it’s later in the afternoon, Liz sits on her bed and stares out of the sea, lost in her thoughts.
So, why did Jack say that? Jack normally never says anything without having a plan on his mind. But what plan should he have? He can’t come to kidnap me. Well I should be thinking about my wedding, not Jack, oh and the wedding night, yes...but why did he say it wouldn’t have worked between us? But on the other hand he said we are peas in a pod, that doesn’t make sense at all. Elisabeth, stop thinking about him...he’s gone and he’ll never return.
(Knocking on the door, Governor Swann enters)
G: Elisabeth, so you have chosen Will. Well, I’m not very happy about that, but if he’ll make you happy then he should do it. Govenor Swann thinks that he shouldn’t have rescued Will for 12 years.
Do you know when your wedding should take place?
E: No, but I think we need time to prepare it, don’t you think? Maybe in 2 months or so.
G: Alright, I’ll go and speak with Mr. Turner about that.
(Govenor Swann leaves the room)
Later Elisabeth walks down to the dock where Jack rescued her from drowning. She stares at the sea and thinks about the wonderful moments she had with him. Suddenly a hand touches her shoulder and she turns hopefully around.
E: (disappointed) Oh, it’s you.
Nor: Yes, who else? You don’t expect that pirate to return, I mean I know your fascination about pirates, but Mr. Sparrow has a meeting with the gallows if he returns.
Elisabeth stare at Norrinton. How is it possible that he knows what I’m thinking about? Is that so obvious.
E: No, no...I just thought about...about...mhm...the day...you proposed me.
Nor: If you believe. Tomorrow we’re going after him, so if you’ll join us, we’ll be happy.
E: What do you think? I’m going to marry Will.
With that Norrington walks away and Elisabeth home. The next day she stays in bed, not feeling very well.
Maid: How do you feel Miss Swann?
E: Oh, I’ve had to less sleep.
Maid: Why that?
Elisabeth is lost in her thoughts: Oh, I really can’t tell you that. I have to think on Jack, but I don’t want to. I should think about Will, we’re now engaged and I’m about to become Mrs. Turner. But only because stupid James proposed me...otherwise I wouldn’t have thought about marrying.
Bur what does fascinate me on Jack? He is a pirate and I think he has had a lot of woman and he’ll never treat them like a gentleman would do. And he’s always drunk and what about his hygiene, bähhhh. But on the other hand he is a good man and nice too.
(Knocking on the door, Will enters)
W: Elisabeth, I’ve heard you’re ill? Just wanted to know how you feel or if I could do anything for you.
How I feel? I’m a bit confused. I think I love you but I have to think on Jack more then on you. Maybe it will disappear in a few weeks.
E: Yes. I feel better, thank you.
W: Maybe you stayed too long on the ship.
Too long? No, I think it was too short. What did Jack say? A ship is freedom...maybe that’s what fascinates me.
E: Fine. So now we could prepare our wedding, don’t you think?
W: Yes, but it has time. But I have to go now, sorry, I’ll come again later. Goodbye.
So a few weeks were over, Elisabeth has a lot of things to do so that she slowly forgets about Jack.
It’s the night before her wedding, Elisabeth has a dream...
The dream:
She’s on the Pearl, standing on the deck at night. Everyone is asleep, besides Jack, he walks slowly over to her.
J: So, luv, this is where your heart truly lies?
E: (looks at Jack) Well...it’s the sea...she fascinates me.
J: Is that so? (he smirks and walks closer to her) I think it could be something else, luv!
Elisabeth walks back, but is stopped by the wall of the cabin, so that she had no change to escape.
Jack comes again closer and is nearly face to face with her.
J: You’re going to want it the same way you want me to want you!
With that he strokes her hair and finally through her face, the other hand goes down on her waist and finally kisses her. She feels a prickle in her stomach and she suddenly felt dizzy. And with that she wakes up, her heart beating fast.
Oh my god! It’s my wedding day and I dream about betraying Will. He doesn’t deserve it, but the dream was so intense as if it was real. I thought I had forgotten him. So, but today, I , Elisabeth Swann, am going to marry Will Turner. Oh, I hope it’s not bad luck to have a nightmare before my wedding.
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Last edited by Jacky Sparrow on Sep 11th, 2006 at 10:42 AM
that was really good! especially the kiss! i always like the kising scenes the best, dont know why
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Just a quick announcement: can someone else post POTC4 on fanfiction? It doesn't have to be on that website, just somewhere online. I helped write a fanfiction on a POTO fan board like this one and we found out with a month in advance that the board would be shutting off, so we scrambled to move our story to a website where it would never be lost.
I don't want POTC4 to be lost, but I seriously do not have time to do it. Someone can copy and paste it onto a document, change the fonts and spaces so people can read it and then post it somewhere, I for one would appreciate it. Thanks.
WHERE??!! i looked but what page? there are 333 pages of POTC stuff and i don't know where it is! PLEASE HELP! i want to read it and see what you guys thought it would be like--i read the one you guys did for the 2nd one, with the giant banana and gandolf thing; i cracked up for weeks!!
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