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Syren
dreaming

Gender: Female
Location: every which way but loose

PLEASE create a thread to hold your own work, this thread is for the personification of chosen poems only.

READ the initial post to avoid confusion, thanks.


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Old Post Jun 23rd, 2005 06:08 PM
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Syren
dreaming

Gender: Female
Location: every which way but loose

Ok, I have chosen a few more poems for our artists to use as their muse... just choose the poem you like and draw what you perceive.

quote: (post)
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Untitled

A face stained with tears and a mind clouded by fear,
The makeup runs down a shaking cheek, the blade quivers as it seeks,
Deafened ears heed not a warning cry, Once moist eyes becoming dry,
A delicate hand trembling quick, she stares at the blade, the edge, it's slick,
Trying it first on your hair, falling strands of golden fair,
Pushing towards the pulsing vein, You see an outlet for your pain,
But think now of that far away voice! It calls to you, begs a choice,
Reminding you that though Yours ends, OUR pain begins.
Your tears dry salty trails, ignoring our own new ones, our wails,
Please pause the pull of steel on flesh, reawaken your mind, see the world refreshed,
Feel again, and feel the hand, clasping your own in his, this man,
The bitter tears he weeps on you, close the wound, sew the hew,
Shatter the blade upon a touch, see this love? how deep? how much?
Not wanting anything from you but this; stay with him here, in the mist,
The moon shines again in your world dark and bleak, the light burst through, the one you seek,
Now even though he holds pain inside, he holds you closer, he's bonafide,
Rest easy in comforting arms, beating heart hear, feel no pain, no sadness, no fear.
Close tired eyes, the wound is healed, your pain soon gone, you hope sealed,
When you awake, he'll be gone, but leave you with this special song,
And when you need of his help once more, sing a line, he'll arrive like before,
A dragon swooping down from the skies, setting softly from wings on high,
You'll watch his form melt into a man, and once again, he'll hold your hand,
When this world your hearts starts to chafe, he'll be there to keep you safe.


quote: (post)
Originally posted by Coldfire
Dance With Me

Come and join me on the dance floor,
We'll dance like we've never danced before,
Twist me, spin me, come on let's go,
Maybe even over the head stuff, just for show,
Shake that ass boy, you know you know how,
Everybody's gonna be watching us now,
With a flick of the hips I slide down low,
I see them staring at us, all in a row,
Move in a little closer, you know you want to,
It'll give me an excuse to be close and touch you,
I dunno if it's me, but the dance floor's suddenly hot,
Come on baby you can do it, hit that spot,
Faster, faster, move on time with the beat,
You're doing all right, just keep moving them feet,
As the song ends you take me for a dip,
I'm thinking that you definitely need no tip,
To attract the ladies, you did just great,
And now that the song's over I can't wait,
To dance with you again and make my heart race,
Say, would you like to come back to my place?
I could show you a few things you don't often see,
Then we'll see just how bad you can really be.


quote: (post)
Originally posted by Ou Be Low hoo
Frolicked Clothed, Your Lost Robe

Your slithers that cover tither
Are burning causeways down my nither
You begin to flow like a river
Will I drown to cease my shiver?

At the peak of my mounted summit
Do all fours flee and downward plummet
To the midst of your valley's strumpet
Blown, all gone, my flower trumpet!

Spent my time and my money,
Must run and leave you now, my honey
As we came, saw and made the bunny,
Bump my thing with your funny.

Good times I've had and more to follow...
So, you want me to begin again tomorrow?
In all good time, you can savour
The delicious nectar made from our labour.

Frolicked clothed, your lost robe
At the beat, my light strobes
Time to make leave the sunlight after,
Go before the dark gets darker.

Walk, now quick, fast, now slow
This way, that, which way to go?
As I turn and tumble after,
My mind flicks and remembers laughter...

Frolicked clothed, your lost robe
Frolicked clothed, your lost robe
Frolicked clothed, your lost robe
Frolicked clothed, your lost robe.


quote: (post)
Originally posted by CherryPop
He Calls To Me


He calls to me across the miles
Night winds carry his whispers
They float on the breeze and through my windows
Falling gently upon my ears
- Hush -
I hear him now.

He calls to me from the heavens
Glittering stars cannot compare to the sparkle of his eyes
When he looks at me, I am consumed by the fire
I see him now.

He calls to me through my dreams
Dancing together in the shadows of my sleep
Where we laugh and love once again
I am in his arms
I feel him now.

He calls to me
Every moment of every day
Distance couldn't keep us apart
When destiny drew us together
I'll hold him for eternity
As long as he keeps calling.


quote: (post)
Originally posted by justjakk
Untitled

it sucks to be a monster. really sucks to live this way
not having someone close enough to be with day by day
you could be my friend, but that would be obsurd
one day when i lose myself you'd be the one i hurt

can i really keep on going, these words i often cry
or jump off of a building just to see if i can fly
if i fall will someone miss me? nah, i truly doubt it
i actually think im the only one who care anythin about it

did i crack you up a little are you feeling kinda sorry
this life will soon be over, so you really neednt worry
cause when you talked it made you seen a little bigger
now im sitting in my closet, about to pull the trigger.

this is not a story of sorrow, eventhough the sorrows great
we all should think real hard befor choosing such a fate
these feelings arent to linger, nor in our hearts abide
this isnt just a poem, its a note of suicide.


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Old Post Jul 31st, 2005 03:45 PM
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Syren
dreaming

Gender: Female
Location: every which way but loose

Come on guys, let the artists know they are needed big grin I want to see your poetry brought to vivid life...


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Old Post Aug 26th, 2005 10:24 AM
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DreamingWarrior
Knight Errant

Gender: Male
Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go!

Well, haha I gotta say Hi! and vote one up from Bossk, aka Supernovadragon.

Originally posted by supernovadragon
Samurai
Loyal and brave
Holding his katana high
Cutting the blue sky

Got him to do a haiku, well, a simple one... but still he is growin fast! Very cool to see. big grin


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Sent from heaven to raise some hell.

Old Post Sep 1st, 2005 10:11 PM
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Coldfire
<3 <3 <3

Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

quote: (post)
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Well, haha I gotta say Hi! and vote one up from Bossk, aka Supernovadragon.

Originally posted by supernovadragon
Samurai
Loyal and brave
Holding his katana high
Cutting the blue sky

Got him to do a haiku, well, a simple one... but still he is growin fast! Very cool to see. big grin

That he is happy


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Old Post Sep 2nd, 2005 07:05 AM
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justjakk
Evil Bunny

Gender: Male
Location: In written pages

this is almost what i saw when i read dance with me by Coldfire....not my best.

Attachment: dancswithme.jpg
This has been downloaded 91 time(s).


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Old Post Sep 4th, 2005 01:25 AM
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Coldfire
<3 <3 <3

Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

quote: (post)
Originally posted by justjakk
this is almost what i saw when i read dance with me by Coldfire....not my best.

eek! That's pretty much what I was seein when I wrote it


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Old Post Sep 6th, 2005 03:33 AM
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Syren
dreaming

Gender: Female
Location: every which way but loose



Excellent, JJ... love your work wink


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Syren
dreaming

Gender: Female
Location: every which way but loose

Ok guys, I'll be choosing another 3 poems from the multitude of threads we have, for the artists out there to choose from. You all know how this works? A little refresher;

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Syren
After discussing this at some length with Milla, we've come to the agreement that it would be interesting to start a sort of mixed poetry and artwork game.

She's suggested that I post some of our poems here, and allow our artists to draw their impression of the poems.

So, read the poems, choose the ones that catch your attention, and draw them how you see them.

Post the poem title that you have chosen along with your picture when you've drawn it.


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Old Post Apr 15th, 2006 01:03 PM
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Syren
dreaming

Gender: Female
Location: every which way but loose

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Eternal Turmoil
Demonica

Hell is where she will always reside,

With darkness she is forever allied,

A stroke of blood painted on each nail,

Her soul non-existent, her skin deathly pale,

On their knees her minions quake,

Quivering, trembling, their fear awake.

Her alliances intimidated,

Her home a crypt,

Her beverages ghastly,

And slowly sipped.

The light a repellant,

The shadows a host,

Not possibly human, improbably ghost.

By night she lies,

Waiting for a

Victim for Demonica


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Old Post Apr 15th, 2006 01:05 PM
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Syren
dreaming

Gender: Female
Location: every which way but loose

quote: (post)
Originally posted by justjakk
Domestic violence from a victims eyes

outlandish they call it, but you say you like blood.
you covered it up, then you were allways like that.
to hang on every word is the same for a rope to place
and dangle from the very roof we built so long ago.

to stand so upright makes you so evil indeed.
and then we look inside to the real you and shutter.
but if we saw it at first, we wouldn't be in this mess
and hanging like we are, our bodies tangled in fish hooks.

how about it? you said so yourself. you hate us all, don't you?
you change your lines so many times, it makes me stop and think.
to have known you when there's someone else
but when they're gone, your true form shows..


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Old Post Apr 15th, 2006 01:16 PM
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Syren
dreaming

Gender: Female
Location: every which way but loose

quote: (post)
Originally posted by FŽanor
A state of being in love, with a differing view...I suppose.

Snap! Sound the whip from the tormentorís hand.
The cut stings, the wound deep.
Pain! Felt thunderstruck upon the broken man,
Gritted teeth, deny the weep.

Weep! O' Weep! O' Weep for me no more.
Salt on the wound that bleeds.
Red flows the tears from my pores.
Death make haste and grant my needs.

My earthen grave awaits my mournful coming,
Lonely dreamless sleep is mine.
I grieved the wasted sorrows for no man,
For my state is one sublime!

What benediction read, for one weighed with pity.
Shamed for hearts afoul!
I bleed, I bled .... all for soulless piety.
The cracking whip stings. Sings aloud!

The mind's eye blink with searing pain.
Glorious wonder upon my back!
Lift me! O' child of man once and twice again.
To hear once more that godless whip crack!


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Old Post Apr 15th, 2006 01:21 PM
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Mr. Sandman
Sintastic

Gender: Male
Location: New York City

quote:
Originally posted by Da Moose
I miss you...
I dreamed of you last night
It was soft and quiet and peaceful
I FELT you there - knew you were with me
My heart was whole, my mind at ease.
And then I awoke...
To the emptiness that permeates my soul
The void you once filled
I can fool myself no longer
I miss you...
MY heart aches without your presence...
My existence dulled by the knowledge of what could have been, but now, never will be.
Our dream died before it even began, doomed by distance and circumstance.
I want the wounds to heal, but I can't let go.
I miss you...


I have to make something for this. Should be posted by tomorrow.


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Syren
dreaming

Gender: Female
Location: every which way but loose

Where did you find that?


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Old Post Apr 15th, 2006 02:41 PM
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Mr. Sandman
Sintastic

Gender: Male
Location: New York City

Um, the previous page? you quoted it! lol


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Old Post Apr 15th, 2006 02:51 PM
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Syren
dreaming

Gender: Female
Location: every which way but loose

Ah, so I did... a while back, though, in my defense stick out tongue

So yeah, anyone who's interested in sharing their work, feel free to use any of the poems I've quoted in this thread.


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Old Post Apr 15th, 2006 03:03 PM
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justjakk
Evil Bunny

Gender: Male
Location: In written pages

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Syren
Where did you find that?
lol kez...


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Old Post Apr 15th, 2006 03:19 PM
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Syren
dreaming

Gender: Female
Location: every which way but loose

*pokes*

Don't laugh, I have an awful memory... stick out tongue


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Coldfire
<3 <3 <3

Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

quote: (post)
Originally posted by Syren
*pokes*

Don't laugh, I have an awful memory... stick out tongue

awwww lol well I do too so don't feel too bad about it stick out tongue


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Syren
dreaming

Gender: Female
Location: every which way but loose

It comes with the 'genius' territory laughing out loud


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