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Phoenix
Luna Lovegood

Gender: Female
Location: in a double decker bus...

Phoe's Five Minute Poems

I like my little five minute poems, they are usually better than my well thought out ones! I'll just post them as they occur to me...


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Old Post Feb 1st, 2005 12:16 PM
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Phoenix
Luna Lovegood

Gender: Female
Location: in a double decker bus...

Shattered

I gave you my trust when you gave me your word,
Did that cross your mind before you did all you did?
Did you consider how I might feel?
How could I forgive you after this betrayal.

I thought that you loved me, I thought that you cared.
But all of this time you were after my friend.
You held me, assured me, kept me safe from harm,
Then dropped me like a stone after a beckon from her.

Did it give you a high to strangle my heart?
Are you now deaf to my screams still heard?
How could you turn away from me when I gave you my love,
To smile to the world as you stabbed me in the back.

So go to her now, while my heart still is breaking.
Why should it stop you to know that my tears burn like acid inside me?
I am broken to shards.
Nothing remakes the shattered mirror of my soul,
only you can restore me, and you left me in hell.


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Old Post Feb 1st, 2005 12:28 PM
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Syren
dreaming

Gender: Female
Location: every which way but loose

That's excellent Phoe... I had no idea you wrote poetry eek!


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Phoenix
Luna Lovegood

Gender: Female
Location: in a double decker bus...

Yeah, I've got some ancient stuff in GenFic.. I'll cut and paste it over to here... big grin


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Phoenix
Luna Lovegood

Gender: Female
Location: in a double decker bus...

Alone

I sit alone, within my thoughts,
You cannot find me there.
This is my final solace,
My final sacred lair.

My fragile mind is bursting,
Bursting at the seams.
Although you break my body,
You cannot break my dreams.

I watch you sleep, I cannot breathe,
I know that you will wake.
I love you still, but still I fear,
My peace will too soon break.


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Phoenix
Luna Lovegood

Gender: Female
Location: in a double decker bus...

Dreams

Dreams are our playground,
Dreams are our cage.
Dreams are our childhood,
Our fortress, our stage.

In dreams we are loved,
In dreams we have wings.
In dreams we can say
We alone hold the strings.

I dreamed you donít leave me,
I dreamed that you stayed.
I dreamed that you left
The wooden bed that we made.

I dream of the silence,
I dream of the noise.
I dream we are more
Than simply just toys.


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Phoenix
Luna Lovegood

Gender: Female
Location: in a double decker bus...

Scream

Canít you hear me screaming?
You turn away from me.
Am I so repulsive
That you canít bear to see?

I know that I am worthless.
I know I fail to shine.
But these words pour from my heart Ė
You canít take them, they are mine.

Iím calling for you, with no words
But I cannot tell you why,
When all that falls, from your sweet lips,
Is lie piled upon lie.

The blood that falls, from my white skin,
Leaves patterns in the dust.
I know not why I love you,
I only know I must.


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Luna Lovegood

Gender: Female
Location: in a double decker bus...

Ailuj's Moor

I sit in my room,
Up in Ailujís Moor,
And learn of the Raven
Who quoth ďNevermore,Ē

I live in my dreamworld
And enter all ye
Who are seekers of knowledge,
Imaginationís the key.

I brush out my locks,
Like a girl in a tower.
I donít have the keys,
And itís nigh witching hour.

There are eyes all around me,
Above and below.
Theyíre landscapes Iíve drawn,
But theyíre only so-so.

So-so is my nature,
So-so is my name.
I drift through my time,
But itís not just a game.


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Syren
dreaming

Gender: Female
Location: every which way but loose

Holy crap!!

As I read each one I was like 'wow..' 'wow!!' 'WOW again!' Seriously, I don't know which one I like the best, they're all fab honey yes


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DreamingWarrior
Knight Errant

Gender: Male
Location: Holding on tight, never lettin go!

Way cool. I dig the Dreams poem. (course, i got issues with dreams. go figure.) all around good stuff. and hey, the 5 minute stuff is typically pure inspiration anyway, so fire on, fire on.


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Phoenix
Luna Lovegood

Gender: Female
Location: in a double decker bus...

quote:
Originally posted by Syren
Holy crap!!

As I read each one I was like 'wow..' 'wow!!' 'WOW again!' Seriously, I don't know which one I like the best, they're all fab honey yes


thanks! big grin


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Luna Lovegood

Gender: Female
Location: in a double decker bus...

quote:
Originally posted by DreamingWarrior
Way cool. I dig the Dreams poem. (course, i got issues with dreams. go figure.) all around good stuff. and hey, the 5 minute stuff is typically pure inspiration anyway, so fire on, fire on.


thanks i will! big grin big grin


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hehe... all my poems are 5 minutes too...

but really, your poems are really cool!!! I love your poem about dreams... One of the best I've read so far... I love to see beauty in simplicity...


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Phoenix
Luna Lovegood

Gender: Female
Location: in a double decker bus...

quote:
Originally posted by peterKSL
hehe... all my poems are 5 minutes too...

but really, your poems are really cool!!! I love your poem about dreams... One of the best I've read so far... I love to see beauty in simplicity...


thanks! big grin

((mesa so happy - people like my poems))


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Luna Lovegood

Gender: Female
Location: in a double decker bus...

I see the things that no one else sees,
The eye of my mind never rests.
Devils and demons, the angels above,
In my thoughts they are free as the birds,
Their chains and fetters in the dust far below.

If you open your eyes, you will see as I see,
The things that mere mortals can't find.
Give me yoiur hand, we will roam like the wind,
Through clouds, sweet heaven and more,
Til no one can find us, yet they seek for all time.

Through the eyes in my heart I see your sweet face,
It lifts me up in my times of great sorrow.
Just to think of your smile is all that I need,
You are there, I can see you, I reach out...

But you're gone.


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Luna Lovegood

Gender: Female
Location: in a double decker bus...

How depressy am I? But I'm actually really happy at the moment, got my eye on a new lad, no essays to write... oh well, my muse is stuck in depression mode wink


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Luna Lovegood

Gender: Female
Location: in a double decker bus...

I sit in my room, alone with my thoughts, and think of the void which has replaced my heart.
I scream without sound for my lost treasures, stopping my ears to the silence.
They call to me, to join them, to lose myself, to forget myself.
I cannot.
I cannot give up that which is me, all I have left is my individuality.
Let me keep my soul.


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Phoenix
Luna Lovegood

Gender: Female
Location: in a double decker bus...

^ How weird is that!


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Phoenix
Luna Lovegood

Gender: Female
Location: in a double decker bus...

Sweet Light of Day

I feel the sweet light of day on my skin...
It gives me hope, where before there was none.

I breathe in the life-giving air...
It lifts me up, to where earth and heavens merge.

I see the sunrise in its pure brilliance...
It helps me see all things anew.

I hear the dawn chorus, softly, with gentle melody...
It reminds me that simple pleasures last on.

I smell the spring flowers, perfumes on the air...
It reminds me that beauty can come from despair.

I sense the tranquility, in all that is me...
I am centered, renewed. reborn... and free.


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Keep 'em coming..eek!

Shattered and Scream are the best IMO yes

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