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love poems
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black_goku#1
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love poems

what is love
love is bright love is like in all its might
what is love
love is pure
to hate, love is the cure
what is love
love is true
but then again its also blue
love is a pain like no other
and though at times your heart may flutter
you long to be alone
for love is a feeling
where pain and pleasure grow
for love is a feeling
as bright and dark as coal
what is love
love is fear
but it is something all hold dear
what is love
love is true
love is all i hold for you






what you guys think and show your own poems too

Last edited by black_goku#1 on Jun 23rd, 2005 at 08:56 PM

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Coldfire
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Lol I think its cute happy And all my poems are in my thread, so if you want you can check them out yes


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twin_soul
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I really liked that. do you have any more? ^^same goes for me. most of my stuff is in my thread big grin


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black_goku#1
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oh k ill just keeppostin my stuff feel free to criticize


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Coldfire
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Yes please keep posting yes


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black_goku#1
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i found it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

um this one is a bit sad


Faliiure
why do i sweat
why do i fear
why do i dream
why am i here
my whole life is a joke
and i see you laughin
i wish to god id ****in croak
but sadly it aint happin
my life is an example
so heed my warning
i wake knowing this
every morning
im but an example of what not to do
my life is a failure dont be one too

((woah uh thats not what i originally had in mind but what you think))


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Coldfire
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by black_goku#1
i found it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

um this one is a bit sad


Faliiure
why do i sweat
why do i fear
why do i dream
why am i here
my whole life is a joke
and i see you laughin
i wish to god id ****in croak
but sadly it aint happin
my life is an example
so heed my warning
i wake knowing this
every morning
im but an example of what not to do
my life is a failure dont be one too

((woah uh thats not what i originally had in mind but what you think))

I like it eek! Sad as it is... but then again mine are mostly like that these days lol stick out tongue Good job and post some more


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black_goku#1
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Location: im surprised you care

Whisper
whisper sotly whisper call my name
go ahead your not insane
whisper slowly call to me
can you feel it ill set you free
whisper sotly whisper true
call my name damnit i dare you

((was kinda angry with this one))


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Coldfire
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Originally posted by black_goku#1
Whisper
whisper sotly whisper call my name
go ahead your not insane
whisper slowly call to me
can you feel it ill set you free
whisper sotly whisper true
call my name damnit i dare you

((was kinda angry with this one))

Tis good, but you forgot the f in softly wink


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black_goku#1
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oops i feel dumb
there once was a boy named nate
who was born at a golden gate
well this gate turned black
so he stayed in the back and drank away his fate

((is it bad that i love rhyming and use it in all of my poetry?))


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Coldfire
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Originally posted by black_goku#1
oops i feel dumb
there once was a boy named nate
who was born at a golden gate
well this gate turned black
so he stayed in the back and drank away his fate

((is it bad that i love rhyming and use it in all of my poetry?))

Don't feel dumb hun, cuz it happens to the best of us smile

Nah it's not bad to use it in everything you write; it's a style that's suited to you, so use it


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black_goku#1
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Gender: Male
Location: im surprised you care

thank you kindly your the only one reading these though

Cry i cannot for i have hurt to many
and their pain slowly swells
cry i can not for when kindness they give me
i only shout and yell
Cry i can not for i am dead inside
yes its a pity
but i know it with pride
Cry i can not for i am hopeless
i deserve no good
but you already know this
cry i can not for i have hurt
and tears are human they dont pour fom dirt
its all that i am
and its no lie
these are the reasons i dont cry



cry i can not for i am alone
tears are useless
for sorrow is all ive known
and i have no excuses
cry i can not for i am pain and no more
to all that will hear it
your forgivness i implore
Cry i can not for i am a fountain of sorrow
and crying so long
inside im hollow
cry i cannot for my life is a lie
and for all these reasons i dont cry
cry i can not for i deserve to die
and in this case to all goodbye


((hope you liked my poem its my last i fear))


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Last edited by black_goku#1 on Aug 4th, 2005 at 07:19 PM

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intoxicatedpoet
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quote: (post)
Originally posted by black_goku#1
oops i feel dumb
there once was a boy named nate
who was born at a golden gate
well this gate turned black
so he stayed in the back and drank away his fate

((is it bad that i love rhyming and use it in all of my poetry?))


This is my favorite, short and to the point, good poetry, keep it up.


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Tassie
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Really good stuff! big grin Simple, but effective. Don't stop! wink

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Coldfire
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Gender: Female
Location: Vancouver, Canada

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Originally posted by black_goku#1
thank you kindly your the only one reading these though

Cry i cannot for i have hurt to many
and their pain slowly swells
cry i can not for when kindness they give me
i only shout and yell
Cry i can not for i am dead inside
yes its a pity
but i know it with pride
Cry i can not for i am hopeless
i deserve no good
but you already know this
cry i can not for i have hurt
and tears are human they dont pour fom dirt
its all that i am
and its no lie
these are the reasons i dont cry



cry i can not for i am alone
tears are useless
for sorrow is all ive known
and i have no excuses
cry i can not for i am pain and no more
to all that will hear it
your forgivness i implore
Cry i can not for i am a fountain of sorrow
and crying so long
inside im hollow
cry i cannot for my life is a lie
and for all these reasons i dont cry
cry i can not for i deserve to die
and in this case to all goodbye


((hope you liked my poem its my last i fear))

It's gonna be your last??!! Why?? confused


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black_goku#1
Codac lord of underverse

Gender: Male
Location: im surprised you care

((well im not that good and it seems pointless))


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Jana lovevince,chris,coldfire

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Coldfire
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((well im not that good and it seems pointless))

You DARE to say that to me..... You ARE good, so don't ever let yourself think that. And as you saw, I'm not the only one reading your poems. Please don't stop cuz you think you're not worthy, because you ARE.


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intoxicatedpoet
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((well im not that good and it seems pointless))


Pointless!? Not good!? You just started my friend, and for a rookie poet to be as good as you is quite amazing, please don't quit, that would be like Shakespeare saying "Meh, I'll become a horsebreeder".


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^ What that guy said !

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Coldfire
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^ What that guy said !

Couldn't have said it better myself stick out tongue laughing out loud


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