Oh wow. I just finished reading all posted so far from the beginning. This has evovled into an absolutely awesome story.
I must admit, at first I didn't really like it. But I think that is mostly due to the way you were typing it. I found it hard to understand. But all the way through I have loved this story. I really have.
You have quite a well-liked masterpiece written here if I must say so myself. Everybody seems to want more. But let me also say this. People, give the lady some time. It's not as easy as you think to come up with stuff like this, I should know because I myself write. Anyways, it also takes quite some time to write because the best parts come up when you're on a roll. When you just have that one good idea and it just causes you to come up with good ideas which leads to soemthing like this.
But otherwise, you get stuck in a writer's block. And all writers hate that. But b-ball chick, I am very fascinated with your story, it is quite it's own. You've done a great jobwith telling it. But I must say, though I couldn't read it all too well, te beginning was my favorite. Because of the way Draco acted, all mysteriously towards Ginny. It gave me chills.
Though now, I must say, it is a bit predictable, but you still surprise me. I'm sure this is something J.K.Rowling would definitely not mind reading. She'd probably inspired to maybe include something like this. But then again, that is just an opinion of mine.
But yes, continue writing and take your time. No pressure. And have you ever considered writing things other than that involving Harry Potter? I think you would be quite a popular fantasy author with your imagination and skills.
Well, I must also ask, would you mind checking out this site: www.freewebs.com/passing_regrets ?
It is that of my own. It holds most of my pieces of writing. Stories, Poems, Excerpts, and so forth. It would be really nice to hear how my work is doing from a fellow young writer. Please just check it out, I'm trying to get it out, and I also would like people to critique my work.
Thanxa alot every one for your support and understanding.
Kaiy037, you really think my story in that good? When i was reading your text i was like "WOAH! Is she7he(sorry) really talking bout me?"
Anyways thanky a lot for the text it really encouraged me.
AND JUST FOR YOU GUYS TO KNOW, SINCE IM ON HOLS I WONT BE WRITING AS MUCH. BUT I WILL TRY AND JUST FOR YOU GUYS TO KNOW I DONT HAVE A LAPTP TO TAKE ON HOLS SO IT WILL BE HARDER TO WRITE BUT AS I SAID I WILL. BUT IF ANYONE WANTS TO CARRY ON THE STORY THEY ARE MORE THAN WELCOME TO 🙂
((ok i'm gonna have ago at carrying on they said we could if we wanted... tell me if its ok and i'll add more))
Ginny tried to shout at Harry to stop the spell that she wanted to stay with draco, but he didnt stop. Ginny didn't know if Harry was ignoring her on purpose 'no harry wouldnt do that, if it was safe enough for me to stay then he would have let me.'
The world started to spin and ginny closed her eyes tightly, when she felt as if it had stopped she opened them again and saw that she was at hogwarts school. Slowly she began to walk towards the common room thinking about harry and draco all alone going to fight voldemort. When she walked though the entrance she was surrounded by herminoe and her brothers all egar to findout where she and the others had been.
She sat down infront of the fire and began to tell them all what had happened to her.
"Well theres only one thing we can do, we have to go after them their going to need help" Herminoe said after Ginny had finished.
"yeah even if we don't like draco harry is going to need us" fred and george agreed.
"but...but...harry said its to dangerous and i have no idea where they are" Ginny began to cry as she remebered the last thing draco had said
"its ok ginny we'll do a spell. We're going to find and help them if harry likes it or not" Herminoe comforted Ginny