General Fiction Discussion

Started by Captain REX139 pages

It doesn't need to be every day, Xeous, unless you want to. πŸ˜›

Ah! I'm having trouble writing out the martial arts fight to the death between Io and Wake. I'm trying to find any martial arts websites that I can that list techniques. I've found the Ten Killing Hands, though forget the style of martial arts, and Shaolin Kung Fu stances.

Also, since I'm having a tinge of trouble with that, I came up with another plan for a shorter story and have already done some work on it. It tells the same mission from three different view points: the rebels who crew the Jabberwocky, an Agent, and a coppertop.

My brother and sister are both in Taekwondo, so I'll see if they remember the names of any specific moves for you...I wish I could remember any from when I took karate but I can't ❌

I have a friend who is a black belt in Taekwondo and a friend learning Jujitsu. I'm considering Kung Fu myself!

Um....okie, here are the ones I remember right now ^^;

Tiger claw. Your thumb is separated from you other fingers. All five fingers are slightly bent. Use this to strike the neck.
Knife Hand strike. With the knife hand strike, your fingers are stiff. You strike the nect with the edge of your hand.

Kicks:

Groin kick: Well, uh, kinda self explanitory...You bend your lower leg up, keeping your toes back.
Side kick: You bring your leg up and kick with the side of the bottom of your foot, swing yourself slightly for more power.
Snap Kick: You face your opponent and bring your knee up. Then you snap your foot up, hitting with the balls of your foot.
Jump kick. Basically like the snap kick, except while you bring up your knee, you jump, and kick.
Running Jump Kick(cant remember the actual name): You run, then jump up. While in the air you kick out.

Blocks:

Scissor hand block: REALLY hard to describe...you use it to block punches/kicks coming at your stomach/chest. You start with your lower arm directly in front of your stomach and horizontal and swing it up so that it's vertical, and your arm swings across your upper body (hope that description makes any sense). Both arms do the same thing.
Upper block: You bend your elbow as you bring your arm up above your head to block attacks to the top of you head.

Um....I'l post more when i remember them ^^;

(by the way I'm TM's sister)

Thank the lord, Pyrefly! Those are going to be used. βœ…

Chapter 7 is up. God it's tough comming up with new chapters daily...(I started writing it a few hours ago...)

Well, it does, once it is daily.

You'll find quite a few spoilers and the likes in the names of some of the characters in DNC.

No kidding it's tough coming up with new chapters daily...which is why I don't even bother trying. I usually shoot for one chapter a week, but of course that never even happens, either...I blame school.

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I've completed chapter 12. βœ…

πŸ˜› yourself. You're not a senior and therefore aren't worrying about college applications and whether or not your top school has recieved your ACT scores and having to take AP tests in May...that equals lots of stress.

Right... πŸ˜›

I've called University of Illinois 4 times in the past week about whether or not they've recieved my ACT scores...I don't want to send my SATs because I did much better on the ACT (32 on the ACT as opposed to a 1340 on the SAT...yeah, I know that's still good but I thought I could get a 1400 at least)...so I'm starting to get a little pissed about that.

I'll have to read chapter 12 later because I gotta get off now and go and pack up my stuff since we're going away for the weekend...I'm hoping that I get to do some skiing, since I haven't gone skiing since I was 12 βœ…

Wow, that's a long time. And, more ironically, the same number of the chapter I just posted! πŸ˜›

Well, maybe I'll have Chatper 13 posted when you get back...

The next part of DNC is now up. It's more of a plot part, putting the basis for the story together. The next part will have alot of action in, most of which I'm trying to make it so that it gets the reader on the edge of their seat.

Could you guys please tell me what you think about my story? In chapter 8, there are 2 duels but I'm having a little trouble writing them...

Done with Episode 1. Dun dun dun! Episode 2 will start shortly.

Good work, Xeous. βœ…

I'm starting a short story about a Jedi Padawan named Lukas Nott.

Cool, maybe our characters could interact along the lines...Christof is around 18 now...

The next part of DNC will be up, as before, Wednesday or Friday. Then it's half-term so I can get through quite a lot of the story.