General Fiction Discussion

Started by Trinity_Matrix139 pages

Heh, lemme guess...you need to know for your story?

Yes, but I simply went with laser gun. *shrug*

If you stay on long enough, Chapter 10 will be up momentarily.

Hee, I was going to suggest referring to them as something completely random like calamari cooker πŸ˜›

Okay πŸ™‚

Calamari cooker? πŸ˜‚

Hey, it's late, I'm half-asleep, and I'm random enough as it is when I'm fully awake...me+no sleep=insanity.

...and now that I've mentioned calamari I'm hungry. Damnit.

Posted, now on to Chapter 11.

Eep! Just read it, stupid sentinels...but very cool βœ…

Meh, I'm going off to bed, maybe I'll get to sleep before midnight for a change...

What? Before midnight? Impossible! πŸ˜›

It's not before midnight here on the east coast...

It's 10:15 here in southern Cali right now... πŸ˜–leep:

Wooooo I got DMC last saterday and I've just completed it. For the first time, I started my story part way through playing. Anyhow Part 2 will be up tomorrow.

Ok, starting with chapter 4, I'm writing in notepad then transferring it...I'm going to write the entire story before I post it, though. I'm guessing that from chapter 4 on will be pretty good...I'm actually a decent writer, sometimes.

Hee, my Matrix story I'm currently writing I got a few more pages done of it today during Calculus...yeah, I don't really pay attention in that class...πŸ˜›

I'm deleting Chapter 11, which I worked on a bit yesterday. I was coming up with the idea of a ship that betrayed Zion and uses the Matrix for fun since they can do anything being Wake's savior in his chrisis, affectionately naming the ship the Jabberwocky, but I ran into difficulties.

Still, the Jabberwocky might appear in a different form, rather than a renegade ship.

Instead, the Caduceus will rescue Wake and Janet. The crew being Ballard, Bane, and Malachi. Since the Operator is unknown, I'll just call him the ship's operator.

I'm going to try to keep adding at least a chapter per day. There might be minor spelling errors but for me to pump out this story like I want, I don't really have time to spellcheck every single word...Overall, it should be fine but...We'll see. There's a serious plot starting to develop and I would greatly appreciate it if you guys would read the story and tell me what you think so far.

Well, that's what the spell check on your writing program is for...

I want to know what your favorite chapters/scenes in my Matrix story are. Any thoughts?

Leave me alone rex, πŸ˜› Notebook doesn't have spellcheck. WHAT? WHAT NOW? WHAT?

Type it up in Word, that has spell-check...πŸ˜›

Hmm...there was one line that I particularly like, "Bringing pistols against a helicopter would be like trying to kill an elephant with a toothpick."

Glad you liked it. πŸ˜‰