General Fiction Discussion

My story's half done
take a read tell me what you think.
It might take me a while to finish it though, with all the summer reading i neglected to do.

Rex and I beat you all to it. We started writing that damned thing back in February! 90 pages so far, and all about Mors! Right now, Ares has just been punched through a Hummer! 😄

And there is no town, TM! 😛

Holy shit!
But is it a history or what?
Anyway Mors your the driver in my story.
Fire and Cloeus is the other people. Everyone else is in zion.

Yes there is a town! 😛

And no, I've got you all beat...I started writing San's story back in January...but I decided I disliked it after I got it about halfway done and just recently restarted it.

I've been making Rex send me bits and pieces of Mors's story, it's really cool ✅ especially the part where we're all trying to figure out how Dallas became a captain (I was the one that went back and dug up all our theories we came up with and then sent them to him 😂 )

I won't be able to post those theories, Cloud's on the Percy

Oh, they were ones that we made up back when Ush first make the general discussion thread for the Matrix RP...I think it was because a bunch of us were online and bored 😂

Yeah, they were funny. By the way, were you in the first mission?

Yeah, but I joined a little bit into it. I was around for Burn getting his ass kicked by the Agent though 😄

Those theorys were like bribe and blackmail right? 😂
Hey He never killed me, he killed someone else, I went and picked them up with my car.

Oh yes, that is a fun sequence, even though there IS NO TOWN! 😛

When we first got trapped in the Matrix, Rex decided to write up a part where we were trying to stay quiet and have fun in a motel room. Didn't go when. Celsius, being a Ruski and all, decides to bring out some vodka...and well...doesn't go well when the room service shows up and freaks at the sight of all these guns...

BLAM!

Actually, Burn, that Agent only got me to the point of being injured, I was no dead weight. For once.

hehe thats halarious
Yea, I saved you ass though!

I never said you died, Tpt, just that you got your ass kicked 😛

Heh, Rex sent me a little bit of that part (up until Ares shoots the room service maid), it's hilarious 😄 And yes, THERE IS A TOWN!!!! 😛

I've never wound up as dead weight 😄 though I've come close...

Well you guys didn't understand the idea of PROTECTING THE GUNNER!
right away, so I was dead weight alot!

I dunno, TM, I'm starting to side with BB on the lack of town...

Well, I'm a gunner! I can defend myself!

your not hardcore, only half-assed.
and your wussing out on me!

Quiet, Rex, stay out of it 😛

And it's not MY fault that you have no close combat paths...😛

Yea, well when was the last time you took out 5 mooks in one go?

😛 so you're better at taking out coppertops from a distance. I can hold my own in a fight against a non-mook much better. And I'm still damn good at taking out the mooks, so 😛

meh, I'm a supporter, It took me and cloud all of one sequence to take out Tyr!
Don't underestimate the insane powers of the gunner

Good point...still, good rolls and two on 1, Tyr injured and not a good MA fighter...